Vine City: The Ruin Kingdom ooc

The Ruin Kingdom.

The small town of Ruin, California used to be a figurehead of the Gold Rush Era, the economy in the city boomed until the recession of 2009 hit; most of the people that once lived in this prolific Californian town, decided to pack up and leave. In about Late 2010 the U.S government bought out the property from the citizens still living here and began to import federal and international prisoners here. From 2010 to late 2011, an estimated total of 77,000 inmates were shipped here. In January of 2012 a mysterious force overcame the prison town causing guards and inmate alike to enter a homicidal rage. Hero's whom have been sent into the facility haven't returned. What exactly is going on at the Ruin Prison?

• Open RPG
• Standard RPG Rules apply.

Nice setup, it's intriguing.

Is it an open RPG?

Oh? You've decided to bring the RPG you suggested to life. Nice.

This is gonna be interesting.

Interesting.

Posted. =]

Cool

Nice, lets see If I can get something up.

Oh THIS is it! Damn. Sometimes I'm stupid.

@TheDealer: Might put another post up as a different character

Interesting read

@Mr. Mercury: ^_^

Nice, lets see If I can get something up.

@TheDealer said:

@VictorGrey said:

Nice, lets see If I can get something up.

A god in Jail?

LMAO

very cool, left me wanting to know more, I think I'll make a seperate guy fo this, surkit started off good but is kind of rolling down hill

@Ziccarra_Liafador said:

@TheDealer said:

@VictorGrey said:

Nice, lets see If I can get something up.

A god in Jail?

LMAO

No, check my post now. I put it up.

@Westlife: Just wanted to clarify my role in it.

@VictorGrey: Sweet post lol

Aw man, Z is offline, I would've wanted her to see this.

@Honor_Legend: Thank you, I always love feedback

@VictorGrey: I am Z LMFAO

@Honor_Legend: Z!? What are you doing on a noob account! Get out! LOL

Glad that you liked it, I love hearing the feedback of experienced writers, makes me feel like I'm better than I thought I was.

@VictorGrey: LOL I have hundreds of these "noob" accounts lol

@Honor_Legend: So I've heard, I saw that page long list on your accounts, I ROFL'd. Although I know most of them are probably inactive, still!

Got any constructive criticism?

@VictorGrey: I liked the post, it was funny and it flowed well. All I can say is don't force too much info into your first post. Like the whole Gambler being taken into the secondary room and your character hearing the whole conversation. In your post you focused ALOT on Gambler (Which isn't a bad thing,as of right now he is the subject) but not to much on the Ruin Kingdom.

@Honor_Legend: Thanks for the review, the reason I'm focused on Gambler is because I needed to justify what would bring Victor to ruin kingdom, which is to find out who this Gambler was. The reason I wasn't focused enough on Ruin Kingdom is that at first glance one wouldn't think it was bad, but at closer observation they would realise what's going on. So it would be OOC if Victor suddenly started questioning a prison that he'd just heard of, so I got him over there to justify his suspicions. Thanks for the tips though, I'm currently practicing RPing with Hawk.

@VictorGrey: Awww man Hawk is the best. Just don't suck hahaha

I think I may be joining this. Just need a premise.

@Honor_Legend: He's teaching me to further my RPing skill, I send him some of my RP posts and he helps me to improve. I would never fight the guy, lol.

I'm out.........

jk lol

@VictorGrey: Why not? It's like the Apprentice challenging the master.

@_Hawk_: Don't make me pluck you!

Awww. Nobody ever offered to teach me.
 
Saaaad Faaaaaace.

@TheDealer: I don't think I was here when you came on.

@TheDealer: I asked him.

@Honor_Legend: He writes better than me, so yeah.

@VictorGrey:

- Z is never offline, one of her alts is always prowling

@TheDealer: LOL sounds like me hahahaha.

Yeah that was a month before I left lol

@WarMachineMarkV: Ok...

@TheDealer said:

Awww. Nobody ever offered to teach me. Saaaad Faaaaaace.

I take anyone who is willing to teach people willing to learn but everyone will tell you ..... I'm not nice.

@WarMachineMarkV: You learned that in just 3 weeks? I'm so impressed lol

@TheDealer: LOL Sweetness on a Stick. I really didn't think people read those, I think they just like the pictures i used

@Ziccarra_Liafador said:

@TheDealer: LOL Sweetness on a Stick. I really didn't think people read those, I think they just like the pictures i used

I read those.....they are useful

Have a post to get out for something else and then I'll catch up with this and hopefully post. I've also got the Olympus RPG.

Somebody give me superspeed...or ghost write me <_<

Hawk's a mean bastard, I'll attest to that.