Zeke_

Finally edited this thing.

This is amazing, bro. Wish I had all that skill to write.

Cheers!

My characters lack flair and an actual distinct personality. They pretty much seem like dolls in terms of depth. The story is there but... Meh. I can't get an actual feel for them.

I'll end the thing with Sha cause I gave my word and then I'll probably take a break. Already got too involved/committed =P

Self-depreciating jokes build character, but don't do them if you actually wanna get out of the slump.

Unless you become one with the slump, then it just doesn't matter anymore.

New forms of spam at every second.

That only you care about yourself.

You're the only one agreeing there.

Oh, I actually have an idea.

Maybe if I let it slip people won't realize I can't analyze corpses for shit =P

Joey, where are the Orcs?

Where are the Orcs, Joey?