Great arc! So if Becky "comming out" is unnatural then what would they call her sudden resurection? This series has been enjoyable from beginning to end (So sad it's almost all over) This to put it simpley is one of the best written fics... ever. You don't really need to know anything about Rose for the events you put her in to be believable and her development from this series start to this point show how much thought and care you put into the character.
Nothing bad to say, this was as close to perfect a fic as it gets.
You're getting good at the death and dismemberment thing :) You totally had me going and then BAM! It was Rose having a vision. Zaria and Kubrick were... creepy... but it was great. Jeremiah has a plan for everything it seems. And like an early reviewer... Is the woman at the end who I think it is? (Of course you can't tell) Till next time....
Been busy so comicvine has been way out of the way for some time. This was really good. You didn't need any action for this arc it was perfect as it is. Rose dealing with Becky's death this is really the natural next step. Keep up the great work Ravager.
I like the set up. One thing though, when doing your dialogue give each character their own paragragh per line instead of leaving one characters lines in the same paragraph with anothers response. Otherwise good job.
@Ravager4: It would seem they aren't. This was incredible bravo, give yourself a bow and buy something ignorantly expensive this was great! The last two chapters were heart breaking and I really did choke back tears. This is by far your best arc yet I can't wait to see what else you've got planned.
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