• cbishop posted a message in the forum topic 5th Column Comics: Alexander Wolffe #2. on the Fan-Fic board

    Hm...now that I've read it...not as funny. Referencing humans as "homo sapiens" and straight stealing a line from Magneto? Bad form. Unless this is going for a parody of "Magneto gone too far," which ...

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic 5th Column Comics: Alexander Wolffe #2. on the Fan-Fic board

    @The_Deathstroker: Added to the 5th Column Comics Library. :)"Charles X. Savior." Funny.

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic 5th Column Comics: Alexander Wolffe #1. on the Fan-Fic board

    @The_Deathstroker: Looks good. :)

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic MARVEL MAYHEM - Thunderbolts #5. on the Fan-Fic board

    @impurestcheese: Nice use of the Radioactive Man. This..."Lu, Barnes deploy, it appears SHIELD's wonder team has failed, maybe we would have more success hiring some of those mutants in Westchester or...

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic MARVEL MAYHEM - Thunderbolts #4. on the Fan-Fic board

    @impurestcheese: It's cool to see that Orka- a guy who moves best in the water, has such fluid movements in a fight. Even though he's lumbering to a degree, he's aware of the battle enough to watch ot...

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic MARVEL MAYHEM - Thunderbolts #3. on the Fan-Fic board

    @lykopis said: ''If we're voting.'' Melissa coughed, ''I am really against that.''lol - no kidding.@wildvine said:@impurestcheese: I think my fave part was the hard sound baseball bat. That was cool....

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic MARVEL MAYHEM - Thunderbolts #2. on the Fan-Fic board

    @impurestcheese: Added to my FF Long Box - Groups. :) See though? If superpowers were real, someone would have iced, sonic bubble asphyxiated, or otherwise missile roasted a smug beeotch like Victoria...

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic Marvel Mayhem - Thunderbolts #1. on the Fan-Fic board

    @impurestcheese: Added to my FF Long Box - Groups. :) I thought I had started on these before- so sorry! I'll be reading them in my downtime, so I may be a little slow going. Great start. Loved the "...

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic 5th Column Comics: Alexander Wolffe #1. on the Fan-Fic board

    @The_Deathstroker: This needs some edits throughout. In one spot, you say TBI instead of TGI. Mostly though, it's the quotation marks. When your character is talking for paragraphs at a time, it shoul...

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  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic 5th Column Comics: Alexander Wolffe #1. on the Fan-Fic board

    @The_Deathstroker: I see the callout up there, but for some reason I didn't get it. Found this in the FF forum list. At any rate, added to the 5th Column Comics Library. :)

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic 5th Column Comics: Gaia #2. on the Fan-Fic board

    @The_Deathstroker: Oh, definitely intrigued. The first person narrative on these is dragging things out a little bit, but I'm enjoying it.

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic 5th Column Comics: Heat Seeker #2. on the Fan-Fic board

    @dngn4774: Interesting addition of Stardust. The rest of the group should take note, if it hasn't been discussed in PM already.

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic 5th Column Comics: Diver #3. on the Fan-Fic board

    @knightofthechronicle: This is the only thing about the first person narrative that I dislike: if you don't move things along for the character, then you spend a long time reading and going, "What the...

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic 5th Column Comics: Heat Seeker #2. on the Fan-Fic board

    @dngn4774: Added to the 5th Column Comics Library. :)

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic 5th Column Comics: Diver #3. on the Fan-Fic board

    @knightofthechronicle: Added to the 5th Column Comics Library. :)

  • cbishop posted a message in the forum topic Public Domain Redesign Contest #37- **VOTING THREAD**. on the Artist Show-Off board

    @payno

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