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#1 Posted by cbishop (8195 posts) - - Show Bio
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#3 Posted by cbishop (8195 posts) - - Show Bio

@thespiritstalker: Need a call on this before I post the voting thread.

@cbishop said:

@thespiritstalker: You set out the deadline and the word limit, this contest. Omniscience was past both, but has now edited his entry down to 1,500 words exactly. So "rules is rules" or "let it slide?" Your contest, your call. I'll check back when I wake up, and make the voting thread after that.

#4 Posted by cbishop (8195 posts) - - Show Bio

@omniscience: Okay, not my rodeo, not my clowns, so let's ask the Grand Hoohah for this contest...

@thespiritstalker: You set out the deadline and the word limit, this contest. Omniscience was past both, but has now edited his entry down to 1,500 words exactly. So "rules is rules" or "let it slide?" Your contest, your call. I'll check back when I wake up, and make the voting thread after that.

#5 Posted by cbishop (8195 posts) - - Show Bio

@cbishop said:

@thespiritstalker said:

@cbishop said:

@thespiritstalker said:

Whelp, I guess that's all folks.

So now you get to make the voting thread. Chop chop. ;)

Yeah. Could you do it for me. Pretty please.

This is just because I said "chop chop," isn't it? Alright, I'll have it posted by tomorrow afternoon.

Love ya.

You'd better... WHAT AM I SAYING?!

#6 Edited by cbishop (8195 posts) - - Show Bio

@thespiritstalker said:

@cbishop said:

@thespiritstalker said:

Whelp, I guess that's all folks.

So now you get to make the voting thread. Chop chop. ;)

Yeah. Could you do it for me. Pretty please.

This is just because I said "chop chop," isn't it? Alright, I'll have it posted by tomorrow afternoon.

@omniscience: if I'm posting the voting thread, I'm enforcing the rules. Not only is your entry 800 +/- words over the limit, but it was posted hours past the deadline. See you next contest.

#7 Posted by cbishop (8195 posts) - - Show Bio

@omniscience: I tend to be a bit dialogue heavy in every story I write, but the beginning of this one was on purpose. I just needed a quick and dirty intro to what was coming.

Murderworld isn't mine- that's actually Arcade's name for the deathtraps he likes to set up.

The only original character in the story is Arcadia, his daughter. Unless you count the additional Black Marauders- Marvel has only ever introduced one- the focal point of Team America's abilities.

As for flow and wording, that's hampered by the word limit for this contest: 1,500 words, but wound up just as I wanted it. Your entry is 2,343 words long, by the way.

#8 Edited by cbishop (8195 posts) - - Show Bio

@thespiritstalker said:

Whelp, I guess that's all folks.

So now you get to make the voting thread. Chop chop. ;)

#9 Posted by cbishop (8195 posts) - - Show Bio
#10 Posted by cbishop (8195 posts) - - Show Bio

addy bump.