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My entry, not sure for the end since I had an alternative end but Ok. I hope it some how respects the original universe. Hope its good enough.
Raven Diablo: Agent of Kali
Sorrow of Happiness
âRaven pleas come here.â
Xandra was sitting on her turning chair sipping on her green tea in front of her desk.
Raven walked towards her holding her sword.
âYes Xandra? Any demons?â
The elder woman looked worried.
âNo even worst! I know your degree in demonologies is phenomenal but there is one thing you did not learn about, since I thought it would never happen.â
The demon hunter rubbed her neck.
âWhat do you mean?â
âMmmh well I am talking about the union of an Angel and a Demon, an Asura! They are created when an Angel and a Demon agree to share their powers and host it to an unborn baby. That child must have been made when the mother felt negative emotions and positive emotions at the same time. Asuras are really powerful that even the Zavada brothers could not kill them!â
Raven looked quite surprised
âAnd what am I supposed to do against something like that?â
âWell Raven we located the pregnant woman and you have to go and kill her before she gives birth!â
âAre you sure?â
âIt is the only way! Or we are doomed.â
âGoodâŠâ
She walked off.
*
Two hours later the agent was on the roof of a building in front of a dirty building far away from the shining party life of Las Vegas. She looked threw a window in the fifth floor, a young pregnant woman was curled in to a ball next to a dead body. She knew that a jump would take her directly in the room. Then she just did it, she was crashing threw the window protecting her face with her arms. The young woman didnât seem to care a lot. But she looked up with glassy eyes petting the mans dead face, his eyes were missing.
âWho are you..? Are you coming for my baby..?
âYes, how do you know about it?â
âWell I always knew that she would be special!â
Raven looked at the young woman, she was not older then eighteen or seventeen, with long fair hair, blue eyes wearing a dirty light blue dress.
âWho is this man?â
âWhat is your name?â
Raven was surprised by that question. Normally she would not answer this question but since the girl would dieâŠ
âRaven Diabloâ
âRaven?! Like the bird?â
âYes like the birdâ
âItâs beautiful! I will call my baby Dove then to make a contrast with your name.â
The girl was smiling. Her smile was sincere but some thing made Raven sad about it.
âEh⊠Thank you.â
âCall me Maria. And thisâ she pointed her stomach âDove.â
She laughed out loud. Diablo was concerned about the girls mental state she felt pity.
âAnd who is this?â The agent pointed the dead body.
Mariaâs cheerful voice turned down and sounded really serious.
âOh⊠This is my uncle⊠â
âWhy is heâŠdead?â
âWell a few years ago uncle Julian took me away from mommy and daddy⊠I was sad and angry but kind of happy since I love my uncle even tho he did strange games to me that I really hated. But since it made him happy I let him continue. He told me never to go out of here since outside are bad monsters! And one day when we were playing he told me that he wanted to make a baby, this game was really brutal and violent and uncle kept on hitting me⊠But it made him happy and me to since he gave me Dove.â She rubbed her big belly. âTo day he came home he smelt a lot like beer, he started to say mean things and hit me... and Dove that made me cry and angry! Dove in my belly started to glow red and uncleâs eyes popped out⊠then he felt down. Iâm really sad he is gone but at the same time I miss himâŠâ
She started to cry. Raven kneeled down and told her.
âI am sorry Maria but I have to kill you.â
The young woman looked up at her with her sad eyes.
âWhe..whe..why?â
âDove is dangerous. I am really sorryâŠâ
âDove?! Dove?! Dove is not dangerous! Stop saying silly stuff! Donât say that! DONâT!!!â
Her belly started to glow red and blue her left eye turned blue the other one red. With some kind of magical choc she pushed Raven against the wall net to the broken window. The girl started to float slowly at her way.
The agent took out her gun pointing it at the girlâs stomach, she took a deep breath but Maria started to tremble and talking in a weird mixed language between English the angelic language and devilish language. The words in English she could catch were âStop it! Dove no! And!â
Maria started to cry blood and she seemed to gain control of herself.
âRaven⊠Doves can fly right?...â
Before Raven could do anything Maria jumped out of the window.
*
Raven was standing next to the dead girl. A small tear was rolling down her cheek.
She turned the dead body around just to see her face but she realized that the dress at the downer part of her body was full with blood. She looked at her stomach; it was flat.
The baby was gone.
Raven got a call.
âSo did you finish your mission?â
âI am sorry XandraâŠâ
She turned her device off and kneeled down to Maria and whispered in her ear.
âYes Maria, Doves really can fly. Sadly.â
The End!
@project_worm: yeah true I've been gone for quite a time and I'll try to continu
@johnny_blaze: maybe like a mystical 5th element? or anti-elements?
@the_poet: Not sure if it's good or anything so I would like to have feedback pleas :) and English is not my natural language
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Hello it's poze I hope you will like this story and pleas tell me what you think, what I could do better, you know feedback. Good reading!
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I came one hour earlier to class like every Monday since Enrique and I liked to sit and talk before going to class. I entered my High School and saw my childhood friend sitting by our usual table; he was just sitting there with his black hair wearing his favorite leather jacket. Enrique is the womanizer of the school he literally could make out with ALL the girls in school, some girls are talking bad about him but like all the girls in school they secretly have a crush on him. He saw me and nods my way:
âAli! Come quick!â
Walked faster towards him and he pushed me down on the chair and said while pointing:
âLook at her! She is like the first 10 Iâve seen in a while! Shit I gotta know her!â
He was pointing at a girl. That kind of girl youâd normally expect to see on covers of fashion or erotic magazines. Long blond hair, long legs ,her perfect butt in tight shorts and her breasts in a tank top, her face was just sublime, a real beauty!
âShit Ali! I think Iâm gonna dump Sarah for her!â
Sarah was the most beautiful girl in school. I looked at him and said calm.
âI knew youâd say that.â
He smiled and got up and walked to the beauty, I already know how everything would happen, heâd seduce her in a few seconds and later youâd see Sarah crying for the rest of the day.
During that time I decided to buy a coffee at the coffee-machine. I was waiting for my drink when I heard a familiar voice screaming at me:
âHey, meatball! Fat-ass! Whatâs up my friend?!â
Hank! He hated me since he saw le for the first time last year. He was tall, muscular, with dark hair and snake green eyes. He was always followed by two stupid henchmen, Joe and Rico, not worth a description. I tried to ignore him but he walked over and pushed me against the machine.
âFatboy! Why arenât you dead yet?! Huh!?â
His minions were not sure how to react so they started to giggle like always. Suddenly Enrique pushed the bully away from me:
âGive him a break Hank.â
Hank looked at him and walked away just mumbling âKâ. The odd thing is that Enrique has sympathy for each other and they would somehow listen to each other, awful!
*
The day went on and everything was like predicted Sarah was devastated but Enrique was quite happy with his new prey called Claire, he told me her name and that she was a new student from Norway. I brought Enrique in front of his classroom, otherwise heâd skip.
A bunch of girls started to talk to him while I was watching out for Hank, his classroom was not far. When I came back the girlâs facial expression changed quickly. And a red haired one said
âEnrique seriously he is like the downside of you. You are perfect why do you stay with that jerk?â
Enrique just smiled nervously.
âWell he is my friendâŠâ
He looked at me and said low.
âI..eh think you gotta go no?..â
I was disappointed and walked away looking a last time at his class I saw my crush.
Lily, she was a weird girl but in a cute way, youâd never know what she would do next. She was short with fair hair and a cute baby face.
I walked quickly out of school since Hank finished at the same time and unfortunately he lived a street away. I was almost running but the suddenly someone grabbed my shirt and pushed me against a wall. Of Corse I knew that It was Hank:
âF*king Fatboy!!! Why donât you f*cking die huh?!â
He started to punch my stomach and my face over and over again.
âJump off a bridge you useless piece of shit! No one would care!!!â
He continued but Rico pulled him away trying to calm him down.
I crawled away but Hank managed to free himself from his friends and kicked my guts. I laid on the ground and Hank and his henchmen walked passed me.
I somehow managed to get up and walk home. My mom was in the living room like always she looked at me:
âDid that guy beat you up again?â
âYeah momâŠâ
âI told you! You have to learn how to defend yourself! Or maybe just change!â
My eyes turned glassy and went in my room. There were posters of videogames, comics and movies everywhere! Mostly Ninjas based. I changed my clothes and washed my face, I had a bathroom in my room, I looked in the mirror and poked my stomach, I didnât really think that I was fat, just a bit more pounds thatâs all. I sat down turned on my TV and started playing my favorite game âNinja Legend: Shuriken Stormâ! There was nothing better then killing millions of ninjas on floating worlds. After several hours of gaming and junk food eating I went to sleep.
*
Then it happened! The first time I dreamed about it. I was in a white room with nothing but the turning chairs I was sting on a table with a book and a pen on it. I looked around me and suddenly a girl appeared, she was that kind of hot Goth or punk girl, I never knew the difference, she had black long hair, black shoes, a black skirt, a black corset and black eyes. She smiled:
âHello big boy. I know what you are going to ask âWhat is this place? What do I do here?â Well to tell you Iâm myself not really sure what this place is but what I am sure of that itâs your dream but even more then that!â
She didnât stop smiling.
I wasnât sure what to say but:
âOâŠOk?â
She rubbed her mouth and declared:
âWell actually I do know what you have to do! Close your eyes and think of the last best thing you made before going to sleep and the thing you would love to change in your life!.â
I looked wondered at her and she ordered:
âDo it!â
I just did it and closed my eyes. When I opened my eyes I couldnât believe what I saw, I was in Ninja Legend! Well this world was better more realistic! I was on a small floating island and around me I saw other bigger ones but in front of me there was a castle. I could hear the voice of the Goth girl.
âOh is that a videogame? Yuck! But whatever. Well you have to go to the castle kill the boss and bring me the red orb he is guarding. But beware donât get killed!â
I was not sure what to do since I was just a boy but when I looked at myself I realized that I was a Ninja! So I just jumped of the small island in the sea of nothing. If it was like in the game a flying dino, called KyĆryĆ«âs, should appear. And it happened I rode the dino towards the castle. But a bunch of enemy Ninjas attacked me by throwing shurikens. I blocked each of their attack and I killed them really easily by cutting off their head. My KyĆryĆ« put my in front of the castle. The castle was typically Japanese. I opened the gate and ran with my Ninja speed threw the hallway, there were no doors just one hallway, three Ninjas tried to kill me but as they were running at me I threw a shuriken in the firstâs throat and stabbed the two others.
I was walking for a bit till I entered a great room glowing like gold and in the back was a gold construction with the red orb! I ran towards it but suddenly, out off the ground a giant man appeared! He was wearing a colorful kimono and a blue demon mask; he was about three meters tall. He was the boss! I jumped at him and tried to slash his throat but he punched me away with superhuman strength. Our fight continued for a long time, I managed to hurt him but he was still not dead. He ran towards me ready to punch, I dodged and he hit the ground, I jumped on his back and stabbed his neck. The monster man screamed and felt down dead.
I took the red orb and the goth girl said:
âGood! Great job! But itâs time to go now Big Boy. Good Day!â
*
I woke up filled with positive energy; this deam gave me a boost! I prepared for school quick and eat my favorite breakfast, waffles, I was so happy that I almost danced to school. As I arrived there everyone was looking sad and depressed I looked around and I saw Enrique sitting on our usual spot:
âHey,why is everyone so sad?â
âWell...It might not matter to you butâŠHank is dead!
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