The Manor of Mysticism #10 (of 12)

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DateThe Manor of Mysticism #10 (of 12)ViewRead the...
12/23/22The Most Powerful Person in the Parlor(Blog) (Forum)Disclaimer
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TLooking for a fight....#9 (of 12).
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Now standing directly before her with his hands on his cane, and towering a full head and shoulders over her, he looked down into her angry face, and continued, "You also displayed the ability to officiously overcome the power of both John Gorgon's stony gaze, and Doctor Danger's Wordplay. Oh, yes, you were very longwinded and effortlessly eloquent in your display, but that was more prissy posturing and showing off when you probably could have done it with another dismissive wave of your hand.

"More to the point, it means you could have stopped the members of The Midnight League all on your own. Without endangering all of your guests. Including the three new people who were unaware of what they were walking into.

"You are the most powerful person in the parlor. Probably on the planet. Possibly on this plane. And you are petty, prissy, pretentious, pernicious, precarious, precipitous, and last of all, predictable," he said, catching Izzy's wrist before her hand could hit his face.

"And that was me showing off," he said as Izzy jerked her hand out of his. "Alliteration isn't all that magic. In short, Izzy, seeing what I have seen here tonight, I don't like you. So, I am going to do what I was trying to do when you demanded an explanation, and bid you...adieu. Goodbye. Call me never," and with that, he exploded into mist which dissipated completely, leaving no trace of him except for a very angry Izzy Wuman.

"Well!" she seethed. "I never!"

"He ain't wrong," Shyla said from the table. While watching The Silver Mist read Wuman the riot act, she had turned her seat sideways to the table, and propped her feet up in the chair next to her.

"I beg your pardon?" Izzy demanded, finally turning to the rest of the Mass.

"Yeah, you should, lady," said Shyla. "That vampire was right next to me, and I had no idea until he turned into a human rattlesnake. I'm immortal, but I don't know if he could have turned me or not, and I don't like the idea of living out my days as an undead freak of nature."

Looking over to Deathspeaker who had resumed his spot by the fireplace, she said, "If it weren't for Two Rivers over there, and what he taught me about this gun tonight, I'd have been out of here faster than a Texas twister right after Gorgon froze him."

Then she dropped her feet to the floor, sat up, and took the last swig of a new drink that had been brought to her. Setting down the glass, she stood, grabbed her hat, and said, "As it is, time to mosey. Thanks for the whiskey," she said as she headed out.

Deathspeaker left close on her heels, only stopping in front of Izzy to bow.

"You too, Deathspeaker?" she asked.

The shaman in red reached for her hand, cupped it in both of his, and touched her shoulder. Nodding his head slightly, he headed for the door to catch up to Shyla.

Master Wuman, we did have other things to discuss tonight.
Master Wuman, we did have other things to discuss tonight.

"Master Wuman," said Pharaoh, "we did have other things to discuss tonight."

Izzy sighed. "I'm sorry, Rex. It will have to wait for another night. Merlin, Pandora, and Miko should be here for that discussion anyway. We'll reschedule soon," she said, putting a hand on the seven-foot lizard man's chest.

"Alright, Izzy," he said.

She walked over to speak to the Lama, and Doctor Danger came over to Rex.

"I am sorry, Doc, but I don't know anything about your missing family," said Pharaoh.

"It's okay," said Danger. "I know there's a dragon that does, and when I find him, I will have my answers then."

"You know, I'm not really a dragon," said Rex. Leaning in closer, he half-whispered, "I'm an alien!"

Dexter tilted his head to one side, looking at Draco. "I do believe I owe you an apology, Pharaoh."

"Call me Rex," he said, holding out a scaly hand. "Most do."

He hesitated, but then smiled, shaking the alien's hand. "Okay, Rex. I am sorry for the state I was in when I arrived. You clearly didn't deserve the anger I was bringing to you."

"Forget about it," he said, releasing the grip, and slapping the Doctor on the shoulder, causing him to stumble sideways a bit.

"Look," said the Doctor, "want to get a drink? I do have to go back to the Double D and pick up John. Double Down's going to have goons. You feel like a fight?"

"Beside you instead of against you? You bet," he said, shrinking back down to his Tech Turbine form. "Let's go."

Danger put a finger to his lip, considering for a moment, then said, "Actually, maybe be Tech afterwards. He's going to have a lot of goons."

I've been dying to put the Boom Boxers to the test.
I've been dying to put the Boom Boxers to the test.

"Aw, it's good, Doc. I've been dying to put the Boom Boxers to the test," he said, bumping his cybernetic gloves together. "This is gonna be fun!" Grinning, he said, "Let's... get... dan--"

"No," said Danger, holding up a finger. "That's not funny anymore."

"Really?" said Turbine, looking a little disappointed. "Hear it a lot?"

"You have no idea," said the Doctor as he made a portal. They walked through, and it closed behind them.

Next Issue: Part 11.Story and characters owned by Chris Bishop, copyright 2022
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The Manor of Mysticism #10 (of 12)

Original Character (OC) Names:

Characters:

  • Count Midnight* (Mr. Midnight*)
  • Deathspeaker* (Two Rivers)
  • Doctor Danger (Danger Man) [Doc Danger*; Dexter Danger*]
  • Double Down
  • Isa Manora Wuman (Izzy; Shezafela; The Manor Woman; The Lady of the Manor; Master of the Manor [of Mysticism]; Master Wuman)
  • John Gorgon* (Doctor Gorgon)
  • Merlin*
  • Miko the Magnificent (High Hat)
  • Pandora Jones
  • Pharaoh Draco Rex* (Rex "Tech" Turbine*)
  • Rogue Lama*
  • Shyla Ghostcaller*
  • The Silver Mist*
Concepts:
  • Alliterative Magic (Wordplay)
Locations:
  • Double D Diamond Disco Casino
  • The Manor of Mysticism
Objects:
  • Boom Boxers*
  • .Deathspeaker.**
  • The Silver Mist's cane (unnamed)
  • .Spiritkiller.*
Teams:
  • The Mass of Mystics
  • The Midnight League*
Public Domain:
  • Aliens
  • Dragons
  • Merlin
  • Vampires

* = These are my copyrighted versions of OSC's. Please see the "Open Source Characters [OSC's] used in this fic" tab for more information.

** = My name for the unnamed OS object. Copyrighted to me- unnavailable for others' use.

Open Source Characters [OSC's] used in this fic:

Please Note: OSC's are characters created and immediately released to the Public Domain (PD). Being PD, it means that anyone can use them. However, you may only use the information originally provided for them which you will find in the links below. Most of it is sparse, with few exceptions.

You must build on that yourself- you may not reference any characterization I have made for them in this story. Those versions of the OSC's belong to and are copyrighted by me. This is the way PD works- we all start with the same root, but go our own ways from there, and no two versions can be the same, or even borrow pieces from someone else's version.

Created By:OSC:
Brandon Longstreth:
Cain McCulloch:
  • .John Gorgon. (with unnamed statuette of the Gorgon Sthenno)
  • .The Silver Mist. (with 3 unnamed smoke-colored gems of unspecified origin beyond "Aztec")
Corey Grant:
Marz Workman:
Scott Griffin:
  • .Rogue Lama. (who was poised to be the next Dalai Lama)
SimonKirby:
Picture credits:

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The Manor of Mysticismlogo created in MS Paint. Juice ITC font, 72pt.
(no caption- headshot at top)John Gorgon headshot, by Cain McCulloch. Shows his perpetually glowing eyes.
Master Wuman, we did have other things to discuss tonight.Pharaoh Draco Rex, by Marz Workman.
I've been dying to put the Boom Boxers to the test.Tech Turbine's Boom Boxer gloves, by Brandon Longstreth.
.Fic-O-Pedia: cbishop. (My library of fics)Fic #419

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The Manor of Mysticism #10 (of 12)

The Origins Behind the Origins (or how some of these characters got their names):

Double Down

This is one of those whimsical character names that I do love coming up with on the fly. I needed a place for Doctor Danger to be coming from when he switches places with John Gorgon through the castling spell, and it would help if it was alliterate. So: Double Down.

Again, still thinking on the fly, trying to not break my flow on the story writing, I quickly thought: doubling down is a betting term, so okay, maybe Double Down is in a casino. And maybe just to give his Double name a double wordplay, there's a double meaning to "Down." Maybe... he likes to get down. So maybe the casino also has a disco?

Double D Diamond Disco Casino

And that disco needs an alliterate name, so... Double Down Disco Casino. No. ...Double Diamond Disco Casino? I liked that, but the name didn't seem quite right... like it needed something else. Well, it would probably get nicknamed the Double D, so how 'bout Double D Diamond Disco Casino? And the "D" stands for both the "Down" in Double Down - the owner - and for the nickname of the Double Diamond. Yeah! And "Diamond" has a sort of double meaning as well- the diamond on playing cards (the casino side), and the diamond-like glitter of a disco ball (the disco side). I'll take it!

It was a long way to go to explain the train of thought, but that train actually went through the station very quickly, and I continued on with the story.

Boom Boxers

"Boom Boxers" were created by Brandon Longstreth as the gloves worn by Tech Turbine that "that use sound to amplify his punches." He doesn't say, but I suspect that Tech and the Boom Boxers were inspired by Cyborg and his White Sound Blaster. The OSC info says that Tech can take the gloves off, but that was only because he realized that he liked "Boom Boxer" as a character name, so he wanted it to be possible for the gloves to be passed on to someone else.

Whether the combo character of Pharaoh Draco Rex/Rex "Tech" Turbine can take them off remains to be seen. I'm leaning towards Tech's tech being alien technology that either miniaturizes and is hidden when he's Draco, or works with his shapeshifting ability so that it's still cybernetically integrated with his body as Draco, because alien technology.

That's all for now! Thanks for reading. :^D

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Yeah that power means nothing if you can’t be honest with it. On to 11

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Yeah that power means nothing if you can’t be honest with it. On to 11

Not sure if that's sarcasm...?

Izzy is plenty powerful, true, but it's not unreasonable for others to be upset with her if she put them needlessly in danger.