Savior: Aztlan Rising

Avatar image for dark_king
Dark King

4029

Forum Posts

6205

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 0

User Lists: 13

Edited By Dark King

Chapter One


Story begins in a small desert boarder town called,  Valley Plaza in the good ole US of A... normally the town is quiet but the arrival of Boarder Patrol and Homeland security has increased the towns population and help its growth in new buildings as well as income. The residents there have had an uneasy civil mutual respect between the white americans and the actual native americans/mexicans tolerating harassment by the those in authority. One man has chosen to move here over 3 yrs  ago simply looking to get away from the bigger cities and what he sees is a collapse society his name, Nathanael  Castili Quin. Once a military man respected and admired by his peers now only an anonymous drunk in the corner of a bar hiding in the shadows as he drinks his beers more often ignored but there are moments when he is noticed....
 
The town sheriff walking into the bar to ruffle a few feathers to see what shakes loose heads toward the corner having seen Nathanael in his grey wife beater, watch strap, jeans and boots and tan red skin from hard work in the desert sun.. 
 

Sheriff: why em i not surprise to see you here this early?
 
Nathanael: Sheriff..
 
Sheriff: so tell me boy, what kinda name is Nathanael? (sarcastically enunciating the ael in a mockingly spanish accent) Nate'El.
your momma not know how to spell, read no english? hahaha.. she mexican or one of them injuns? ahahaha
you lucky i'm a nice guy or i call homeland security have you deported to: Me, he, go..  or do you prefer Guantanamo Bay?
Cigar or Tequila?
 
Nathanael ignoring the sheriff reaches for his beer takes a swig wipes his mouth and looks at the sheriff as he makes his response.
 

Nathanael: It's a Hebrew name purposely spelled that way my momma being a good ole Catholic woman wanted it that way. 
and yes, she is a Mexican"Injun", damn proud too.
so sheriff you here to arrest me or just rile me up?
 if it's the latter you might want to take a seat and pour yourself a drink cause i aint that easy to goat.
 
Nathanael raises his right arm toward the waitress to signal for another pitcher, the sheriff taking note of Nathanael's wrist, the  bottom side showing a small Eagle Globe and Anchor black ink design. Nathanael noticing the sheriff quickly lowers his arm...
 
Sheriff: you in the military, son?
 
Nathanael:
i was before i came here. 
 
The Waitress bringing the pitcher looks at the  Sheriff as she approaches. Nathanael notices her discomfort over the sheriff and anticipates their interaction already reaching for his wallet in his back pocket.  The Sheriff smile grows as he notices the Waitress's curves and looks at the tall woman with short blond hair, blue eyes and a tan one can only get around these parts.
 
Waitress:
i'm gonna have to see some I.D. (forced smile).
 
Nathanael: no, problem. (hands over his I.D. with money).
Keep the change, Darlene.
 
The waitress smiles and puts down the pitcher as she goes to give back the I.D. before it is intercepted by the sheriff who takes it from her hand.
 
sheriff:
I'll take that, "Darlin" (sheriff smack her on the @$$)
now get. (smiles)
 
The Waitress angry walks away rubbing her bottom, Nathanael starting to get annoyed at the Sheriff who is staring at his I.D.
 

Sheriff: this real I.D.? 
expected it to be a green card... hahaha!
what kinda last name is Castili or Quin? 
shouldnt it be Rodriquez or Lopez, you got some white European in you?  
Nah, cant be, at best you got Spanish, Italian .. them barely above you damn illegals.
 
Nathanael: Dont rightly see how that is any of your business, Sheriff.
I'm sure you can find an answer to all those questions after all you can always use the internet. 
unless of course you get sidetracked by the perils of farm animals and pornography.
 
Sheriff: for some one i can easily throw in the can or deport you sure got some brass.
i like you but dont test me, boy. this is my town you remember that.  
i'm the one who lets you and all your lil Mexican Indians relatives work them fields.
After all we still have needs for slaves of course we dont call them that no more, some one has to pick the fruit and vegetables.
how that makes you feel, you and your kind  being less than the rest of us?
 
Nathanael: aint nothin wrong with honest hard work.
one can take pride in building something from nothin with blood, sweat and tears. 
Aint no man better than another less they're parasites and don't contribute.
 
 
the Sheriff staring at Nathanael  pours himself a drink and drinks it down continuing his stare as he finishes the last drop and gets up from his seat proceeding to wipe his mouth as he prepares to leave.
 

Sheriff: aint that right.   
some of us more honest than others.
 
Nathanael: Sheriff, my I.D.?
 
Sheriff:
heh, almost forgot take it.
you remember i'll be watching you.
you stay out of trouble keep to "yours" and we wont have any problems.
 
The sheriff exits the saloon style door the waitress having overheard their talk walks over to Nathanael to check up on her regular costumer.
 
Darlene:
you okay, Nate?
 
Nathanael: yeh, takes more then some overweight racist inbred pig to ruffle my feathers. 
 
Darlene: you coming later tonight, the Bar is having sports night and music, it will be alive lots of people will be here.
 
Nathanael:
not sure, we'll see. i got things i got to do.
 
Darlene: be a shame if you don't come.(smiles)
was kinda hoping we could get to know one another since i would be getting off early.

Nathanael: you make it hard on a man to say, no.
 I'll try to get here as early as i can.
 
Darlene: that's good, i knew i could count on you.
 

...............

Avatar image for magian
Magian

159132

Forum Posts

925

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 4

User Lists: 11

#1  Edited By Magian

Nice job.

Avatar image for dark_king
Dark King

4029

Forum Posts

6205

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 0

User Lists: 13

#2  Edited By Dark King

page 2

 
Nathanael having finished his last beer grabs his White Leather  jacket with an emblazon stylized red eagle as he leaves his tip on the table and heads out the saloon style door nodding at Darlene the waitress who smiles back as she cleans the counter and fantasizes about him. Lost in her thoughts Darlene recalls his athletic hard body, his scruff face, smile, and his surfer long black hair enough to pull back from time to time into a small pony tail high on his head. She thinks to herself what tattoo he has on his back that she notices poking out from the side of his wife beater and hopes to one day find out perhaps maybe later that night she would get her chance. 
 
Nathanael since having moved here had used his saved up military money to buy a small piece of land and a trailer near the Hill's slightly out of town and the farming valley allowing him to see  from time to time the working people as they pick fruits and vegetables at times bringing a smile on his face at other times making him angry more often he is neither and indifferent. More often then not Nathanael prefers to just go on long walks through the desert taking nothing but his old Marine camelback, Knife, Gun, a pouch and a straw cowboy hat as he hunts for Peyote Cactus Buttons and other desert plants.
 
Today is no different as he prepares for his latest spirit  walk having showered he lays out what he will take, There always being  danger due to the people who have come here.  Everyone now suspects every one of terrorism and being  illegal as if it even mattered in this small town or at least it shouldn't in his eyes, the federal government having overreached their authority and violating laws. He came here to get away from the world and find himself and yet in all his time here he has not found anything other then the same ppl he tried to escape. If people he knew could see him they would call him a bum, a loser, drunk and a drug addict fallen so far from what he once was.. He hears the voices in his mind and ignores them instead heading to the kitchen to drink a liter of water. 
 
Ready he steps out his trailer wearing a fresh wife beater, cowboy hat and equipment as he stares out he puts on his shades to protect his eyes from the sun's glare already 11 in the morning the sun shines brightly and intensely .  Having walked, jugged and climbed for over 10 miles from his initial start point he finds what he is looking for a small field of Cactus near an outcrop of rocks and a small cave on the side of desert limestone walls and boulders.. carefully walking through the Cactus studying them as he finds the ones he is looking bending down to pick the Peyote Buttons and puts them in his pouch. This is what he has done with the knowledge passed on to him by his Mother already feeling shame from the rising thought.  Nathanael pushes the thought to the side as he sees a large healing plant called Aloe Vera his skin red from the sun's rays realizing he can use the wet plant juice to sooth his skin as he walks toward it he slips kicking up a rock near a rattlesnake which bites him in the right arm as he falls.
 
 
Immediately Nate pulls his gun out angry he stares at the rattlesnake as he squeezes the trigger knowing he might not make it back in time to get help if he dies the snake dies with him, the bullet blows the snakes head off.. Nate calmly pulls his knife and slices his arm and begins to soak out his blood as it streams out of his arm to the floor, he should be more angry scared that he might die but instead he remains indifferent.
He begins to think how he can treat a snake bite realizing that if he tries to walk back he will just pump it further into his heart and through his body, nothing he can really do but accept it and hope it isnt too painful knowin
g it will be excruciation. His arm already  swelling feeling the venom like fire staring at the plant he walks toward it cutting off a leaf and rubbing it on the wound to try and sooth the pain hopefully it will also help draw out the venom but that's just wishful thinking. 
 

 
Already his sight begins to narrow as tunnel vision takes effect his peripheral vision become red, The Voice in him tells him if he is going to kill some thing it should not be in anger nor should it be wasted as he stares at the Rattlesnakes body, Nathanael then begins to laugh at the idea picking it up and begins to walk toward the mouth of the cave with the Rattlesnake in hand.
 
Nathanael:
fine, I'll eat it might as well..
 i'll be dead soon might as well die with a full belly from the bastard who killed me.
aarrghh!
 
The pain from his arm unbearable as his skin stretches and rips from the swelling causes him pain  taking off his wife beater he wraps it around tight to keep the swelling down... His vision already becoming  dark and hazy as he leans on the cave wall placing his hand on old forgotten cave drawing and edging long forgotten and fading  leaving a bloody hand print and blood trail.. the  delirium getting worse as he notices the cave art for the 1st time as it glowed bright white...
 
Nathanael: it cant be... arrghh... the pain..
 
The pain in his arm getting stronger his shirt covered in blood already thinking how disgusting it must already be, black muscles exposed like charred burned meat... to him even if he lived such a deformity and handicap would be too much for him to live with it... taking out the peyote buttons he sticks them in his mouth chewing them and forcing himself to suck the juice as he drinks from his camel back and forces the bitter taste it down his throat.
 
Nathanael: if i;m gonna die, it will be my way.. 
balls to the wall better to burn out than fade out...
 
Reaching toward the snake he pulls back the snake skin with his one good arm and knife and takes a bite from the snake...
 
Nathanael:
alright you little F#$%'er maybe in the next life you'll know better then to bite someone who can kill you.
 
Sitting against the wall with the snake in hand he starts to drift into sleep forcing him to keep himself awake as his head begins to lower as he opens his eyes he sees someone standing in front of him wearing black shoes, pants and long coat standing over him as he looks up toward him he is startled to see his eyes are black with no iris..
 
Nathanael:
what the hell you suppose to be, the Angel of Death? 
or em i just hallucinating and out of my mind?
 
Stranger: how amusing (whispers)..
 
Nathanael: hate to tell you, bud. 
but, i dont believe in your fairy tale.
 
Stranger:  not many ppl do. being forgotten doesnt make us any less real..
and i assure you, i am real. (whispers)
 
Nathanael: sure you are 
 
Nathanael swats his arm through the figment of his imagination as it goes through his body, Nathanael smiles at the stranger proving his point. The stranger annoyed watches him and looks at what he is holding a dead Rattlesnake...

Nathanael:
See?
not real...

Stranger : Eating a snake.
 kind of cannibalism for you, isnt it?
 but, i guess it should be expected of you, after all your people did it as well.. \
excellent example you've given them.
 
Nathanael: what are you talkin about?
 
Stranger: that's right you've forgotten, havent you? 
oh, well maybe you'll figure it out in your next incarnation.
but, i doubt it seeing your history..(speaking in hush whispers)
 
The Stranger reaches down to Nathanael grabbing his arm as Nathanael's body begins to loose the life spark and goes limp with each passing moment.
 
Stranger:
It's time to go.
 
As the Stranger grabs him Nathanael feels an icy chill and incredible force pull him from his body his soul being pulled into a black vortex shredding and ripping at him as he silently screams and forcefully falls on the ground having finished the horrid experience beside him the stranger stands looking down at him and smiles.

 
Stranger: always forget to tell you about that part, but, its so much fun when i don't.
  
Nathanael:
where em i?
 
Stranger: home, more precisely my home...

....................................

Avatar image for dark_king
Dark King

4029

Forum Posts

6205

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 0

User Lists: 13

#3  Edited By Dark King
@ComicMan24 said:
" Nice job. "
thanx. i was finishing the following chapter so i didnt respond sooner, sorry.
 
i hope you enjoy the follow up
Avatar image for magian
Magian

159132

Forum Posts

925

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 4

User Lists: 11

#4  Edited By Magian
@Dark King: No problem. I will read the rest tomorrow because I will logout now.
Avatar image for magian
Magian

159132

Forum Posts

925

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 4

User Lists: 11

#5  Edited By Magian

Nice follow up.