Writing tips??

Been wanting to create a comic-like character that is all my own. I have a few origin ideas, but I'm not great at writing.
I'm great with ideas, but I lack a bit in structure. Any tips?

What are your orgin ideas

Whooooaaaaaaok
 
First and foremost set your bio up in story format. Tell the events like your telling a story being very detailed in it.
 
You need to set up:
 
 The area around them (This would be the apocalptic world) How did it get this way, what happened, who are the key figures
Your characters Early life ( Maybe tell how he was growing up in this world.
Give some history of how he met the girl; and what her importance to him is.
Tell How she died, and how he felt when she died,  what happened in death, his thoughts on coming back.
How he veiws the world once he is back 
Tell about his struggle with the devil.
 

A good tip for writing a decent story, is to treat all of the characters like normal people. Like, when Batman is Bruce Wayne, you treat him like a normal person in a normal world. Also, include alot of details, either in your artwork or story itself. This has been done it alot of decent books: Watchmen, Walking Dead, Kick-Ass, Darkness, and so on.

" @Sha:  I have a "look" figured out, It's a costume given to him by the girl. It'll be a cross between punisher, the crow, and casey jones from tmnt. He'll kill himself with it on, with a message stating this world has no room for superheroes. Or something along those lines. "

  Writing in what way?  I'm a relatively fine writer so can you define what you need tips on, I can probably help you in that context.

" @dementedtheclown: Try This 
http://www.comicvine.com/forums/rpg/9/character-creation-101/558772/    "

" @Icarusflies said:

" @dementedtheclown: Try This 
http://www.comicvine.com/forums/rpg/9/character-creation-101/558772/    "

I couldn't find the link to that for nothing "

I couldn't remember the name

" @dementedtheclown said:

" @Sha:  I have a "look" figured out, It's a costume given to him by the girl. It'll be a cross between punisher, the crow, and casey jones from tmnt. He'll kill himself with it on, with a message stating this world has no room for superheroes. Or something along those lines. "

Oh i figured you were creating this for "RPG" purposes, that's fine too. "

" I couldn't remember the name "

" @Sha said:

" @dementedtheclown said:

" @Sha:  I have a "look" figured out, It's a costume given to him by the girl. It'll be a cross between punisher, the crow, and casey jones from tmnt. He'll kill himself with it on, with a message stating this world has no room for superheroes. Or something along those lines. "

Oh i figured you were creating this for "RPG" purposes, that's fine too. "

Nope not for RPG, more for fun then anything. Eventually I'd like to draw the artwork and self publish myself a copy for fun, n to create a family heirloom. But that's far off, and I gotta start somewhere. I plan on writing it first, then drawing to go with it. "

A couple tips:
 
If you're going to go the tortured soul route, you'll probably want to do a lot of interior monologues (meaning the character explaining his or her thoughts as if talking to the reader).   Don't simply describe what he is feeling, have him express it.
 
Show what you mean rather than saying it.  Rather than "Casey Castle was super fast" something like, "The demon struck out with a vicious spiked tentacle, its infernal limb shooting out faster than the blink of an eye.  But Casey was already moving, his silver-bladed knife digging deep into the creature's flesh once, twice, and then again, all before the monster finished its failed attack."

" @dementedtheclown: Try This 
http://www.comicvine.com/forums/rpg/9/character-creation-101/558772/    "

Try to be orginal; 

write as much as you can. the more you practice, the better you'll get

I've got a question too..
I've got all these ideas in my head & I've written them in my sketchbook so I won't forget...
But my problem is...how do you like..get in the "writing zone"?
If that makes sense?  hah. 
I'm just trying to write out the stories..
Any tips?