Venom Story Idea continued

So, I've made 2 chapters to the story is not coming out as I had planned, though I haven't posted them.
 
Problems:
-Venom knits his own webbing in his free time      -Instead of being a bad ass 'Ugga ugga you ugga me uggA' type of persona, he's more of an adorable idiot than anything.
-Venom is just about Amish, considering how technology impared he is. It takes him 5 minutes to type a single text message. 
-He turns out to be more of a Sheep than a sheepard, and constantly stalks the girl I made for him- even when they're dating.
-Spider man, I've decided, is the perfect 'C*ckblock' for the pairing, as he constantly things Venom is preying villainous-ly upon the girl, while they're just making out, or trying to be intimate.
-The Girl (Whose name is Janette, but Venom doesn't know that) has a twin sister who tries to steal all of her boyfriends, and works for Fisk in his company, as his personal secretary.
 
I don't know- maybe I should post it on here- what do you guys think?