Those Sacred Days - Epilogue

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#1  Edited By _Glacier_
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The concept of time is rather interesting, don't you think? They say time is a concept we fail to comprehend completely due to the illusory ideas of past, present and future. It is, if I had to pick a concise yet correct explanation, motion and forces are what it's about. It always moves forward, yet not always with the same intensity, it hinges too much on how strong the forces exerted on it are.

With that out of the way, I'd also like to present the concept of alternate realities.

They say a single modification in a timeline creates a parallel line that will, ultimately, follow on its own path. So what if Hitler had succeeded? What if Japan nuked USA instead? What if you actually forgot to tip the waiter and he got mad at you? Big changes, small changes, they all have a possibility to happen. And the smallest of changes can make the biggest of effects.

Our story, although protruding its roots deeper onto those concepts, has nothing and everything to do with time. In this alternate version of the Earth, non-melee weapons were considered the downfall of mankind by an UN counsil. Hence why they are scarce, after a violent Cold War, weaponry vanished from the globe, destroyed by the united forces of nations worldwide.

There were hardly any huge conflicts, but that doesn't wipe out mankind's inherent cravings. Thus city violence became more and more usual.

This is where the story begins, in an alternate New York, cowering into the hands of criminal gangs. It isn't unorthodox for them to have quarrels and even brawl with the citizens often, yet no one does anything. No one ever would. How could they fight if any melee mastermind worked under the mafia? Our unexpected heroes weren't exactly heroic at first, they were just like everyone else. Frightened, fleeing from the nocturnal streets.

Yet that place belonged to them, those wondrous youth years that were passing so quickly. Times that friends should enjoy and treasure. And for that, they would fight...

To protect their sacred days.

End of Epilogue

(First Fic in a while lol Also it's 3am, so sorry for bad Engrish ^_^)

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Bravo Gutstavo.

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#7  Edited By ImpurestCheese

You spelled council wrong, and Mafia should have a capital 'M' because it's the name of an organisation. Also there's a few issues with tense you may want to change such as 'youthful over youth' for example

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#9  Edited By ImpurestCheese

@_glacier_: No Problem and good luck with your writing

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@impurestcheese: Btw, what did you think about it overally? Would you read the sequence?

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#11  Edited By ImpurestCheese