The Chronicles of Blackhorn:20 Years later

"WHERE IS SHE?!". His scream echoed through the dark and deppresing cave. Who is "she" you ask? Let me tell you....  After the break up of Malum In Se,Blackhorn realized he couldn't go on like this because humans would eventually catch up-and that would be the end of him. Sure,up til now he could simply upgrade himself,but he couldn't afford it anymore. He hit a dead end. He could turn himself in and do what he was intentended for but...no. Not now,not ever. Instead he would declare piece on a different way. He busted into a TV broadcast station and declared his peace to the human race. 5 years later he adopted a young 11 year old girl. She was the first human he loved. To her she was like the daughter he never had ,and to her he was like the father she never met.
 
When she was 13 she dissappeared. At the same time the worst pedophile the world has ever seen has come out to the light of day,out of prison. It was obvious he was involved! He repeated his question time and time again but all he got was an "I don't know". He obviously had to beat the information out him. The large cyborg said "I'm giving you one last chance" in an oddly calm fashion. The pedophile simply grinned at him. He was highly protected and since he never met Blackhorn,he thought it was enough to keep him from getting the sh*t beaten out of him. He was wrong. Blood splattered all over the wall,the pedophile,and pretty much everything,was covered in blood. "Had enough?" was Blackhorn's last question before hearing the answer he desired. "The vacant house at Somersby Lane!". He took the pedophile with him as insurance. He didn't trust him. He saw an empty half-palace in front of him. It was giant and beatiful-from the outside. When Blackhorn got inside,he sure wasn't greeted with cofee and cake!
 
He headed straight for the dark basement. What he saw was...Disgusting to say the least. His only 13 year old daughter was about to be violated by a bunch of thugs! He readyed his weapons and shot everybody in the room. The real problem was out side. As bullets sprayed in the basement as the thugs busted in. He broke thrugh the concrete wall and escaped to the car. 
 
 
He was a superhero,right? Right. Now he had something to do.

The basis sounds good, could do with more in depth story telling though. Describe what's going on more, tell us more of what everyone's doing.

He started the car. His first stop was his birthplace,aka Database X. Why? Well,since he already dropped his daughter to his security guarded mansion (she was kidnapped while coming back from school),the only one left in his car was the pedophile. He was driving to Database X to have him produced into fuel,but also because he got a call there was a new robot made,and they want him to be his partner/brother. Blackhorn didn't want a partner,but he didn't have much of a choice. He drove to the Database X labs. When he was finally there it was unchanged. He said to the pedophile "You don't wanna be up for this" he punched him and watched as the pedophile died. He then proceeded to throw him into the machine. Anything could be made into fuel-even Blackhorn! He proceeded to the room his brother/partner was in. He wasn't on yet. He was Blackhorn's younger brother,and he was as smart as Blackhorn,and is about the same strength as him,however Blackhorn was more expirienced than Mega-One (his brother/partner) so that gave him sort of an edge.

Mega-One was turned on. It seems good ole' X learned something from Blackhorn's nervous breakdown when he was created (in case you don't know about-he went rogue and started killing people for absolutely no reason). Now they were armed to the teeth and had enough technology to start a new civilization on Mars! If he were to go rouge they would absolutely inhilate him. Frankly,Blackhorn was kind of scared that Mega-One would go crazy despite knowing he would instantly be stopped...He wanted a brother. Someone who could understand him. He was programmed to do just that so...He had high hopes. It was the moment of truth. The lab intern pressed the button to turn M-O (let's call him M1 shall we?). The M1 opened his robotic eyes. His mouth's opened "Riješimo neke zločine!". You could hear Blackhorn yelling with rage "Who the f**k put him on Croatian?!". "S-s-s-sorry s-s-s-sir" the intern said while shivering with fear. He turned off the M1 again and set him up to english. "Hmm. That was weird! Well Anyway" he looked at Blackhorn "You're my brother right". Blackhorn nodded. "Yes. Yes i am.". Blackhorn smiled and said "Now get your ass in the car!"
 
M1 laughed and followed Blackhorn to the car. His next stop? To see his mole in the gang that kidnapped his daughter. He didn't come. Blackhorn knew something was up. Suddenly,something knocked him down and a strong thud woke up the hobo. The sight caused everyone but M1 and Blackhorn run away . They took out all of the organs from his mole and threw them down one by one before droping his empty,desicrated body. He looked up into the air and saw a young man (20-25 years old) running away. He knew he had to go down to run away so BH actually had a chance of catching him! He rushed to the stairs and of course the young man was running from there. BH opened fire and shot him into the leg,however,he underestimated the power of his machine gun and ripped off his entire leg! He was dying,and he couldn't do anything about it. He walked to the car in a way that made him seem that he didn't carehe died. That's because he didn't. Not yet. 
 

2 weeks later. New York City.

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