THE BRAVEST LANTERN OF OA pt. 1

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[this story is pre new-52]

[ Oa, guardian chamber, 2:30am earth time]

Ganthet: welcome, all lanterns. We have called this meeting to discuss this threatening message. Ganthet reads aloud the message.

Guardians, and green lanterns, turn over your centeral power battery,or I will unleash the full force of the sinestro corps and parallax to destroy all of oa

- sinestro

Toma Ree: That fiend would dare to challenge us! In our own home!

Green lanterns roar in agreement.

Ganthet: calm down!

Hal Jordan: well, of course we're not going to give it to him,right?

Ganthet: No,we have a plan. We have the honor guard stationed just in the atmosphere. Now, green lanterns, go charge your rings,disperse among oa, prepare for the fight of your lives. Now go!

Lanterns all over oa: In brightest day, in blackest night, no evil shall escape my sight, let those who worship evils might, beware my power GREEN LANTERNS LIGHT!

pt. 2 coming soon!

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#2  Edited By Bronze_Surfer

@whoohoo789: Well I would definitly make it longer and have quotation marks as opposed to Hal Jordan:.

The idea is not bad but it feels...like a saturday morning carton show. Not that thats bad but it is a little rushed. I am intrested in seeing where you will go with this though.

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well, I have some plans. Hope you like it

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#4  Edited By whoohoo789

plus, this was the introduction chapter