super-end (prologue)

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#1  Edited By clemj

amazonian forest, brazil,12-30pm: 
 
batman runs in the dark,he has an arm burnt and his night vision only works on one eye. 
 
-I must warn them, he must not get to me !
 
he runs, and stops... something... something has moved... it's behind him!.... NO.... in front of him! 
WHERE? 
-this is batman, jonn? do you recieve me? 
-where are you bruce?  
finally, the cold tone of the martian still is nice to hear .
- I am in... wait... nooooooo 
 
in front of him, two red eyes have opened , and light came out, and then.... nothing, 
 
-bruce?BRUCE? he hears the martian shouting, but cannot answer... it's the conclusion... the end for him... 
dick, tim,barbara, jim...damian. 
he whispers 
-my son, forgive me.  
 
red beams.... 
 
to be continued.... 
part one: http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/super-end-part-one/691684/

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#2  Edited By thespideyguy

awesome

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#3  Edited By eippihrellik

cliff hangers i love em

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@thespideyguy@eippihrellik: thanks