Punisher: Final Boss #4 - (Script)

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PREVIOUSLY: Punisher: Final Boss #3 - (Script)

"Conspiracy" - Rated M

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Page 1

1.1 Splash Page

Punisher sidestepping a punch from Slaughter.

SLAUGHTER: HRRA!

Page 2

2.1

Punisher punching Slaughter across the jaw.

SFX: WHAM

2.2

Slaughter stumbling back.

SLAUGHTER: Hngh…

2.3

Slaughter.

SLAUGHTER: Lucky.

2.4

Punisher.

PUNISHER: You’re slower than last time.

Page 3

3.1

Slaughter running at Punisher, fist pulled back.

SLAUGHTER: REALLY?

3.2

Punisher ducking his head under Slaughter’s fist, while punching Slaughter in the gut at the same time.

PUNISHER: Really.

SFX: WHUD

3.3

Slaughter and Punisher butting foreheads.

SFX: WHAM

SLAUGHTER: GRH

PUNISHER: NGH

Page 4

4.1

Punisher and Slaughter stumbling backwards from each other.

PUNISHER: You don’t hit as hard.

4.2

Slaughter cracking his knuckles.

SLAUGHTER: What’s your point?

4.3

Punisher.

PUNISHER: You’ve got that mask on again, and you’re weaker.

PUNISHER: Something happened.

4.4

Slaughter.

PUNISHER: And you’re hiding it with the mask, and that smug attitude.

Page 5

5.1

Slaughter.

SLAUGHTER: I have no idea what you mean.

5.2

Slaughter running at Punisher, about to punch him.

5.3

Punisher grabbing Slaughter’s fist.

5.4

Slaughter’s free hand slamming into Punisher’s gut.

SFX: WHAM

PUNISHER: GHH

5.5

Punisher pulling Slaughter’s wrist the wrong way, breaking it.

SFX: CRIK

SLAUGHTER: AGH

Page 6

6.1

Punisher kicking Slaughter in the shin, letting go of his broken wrist.

6.2

Slaughter falling to one knee in front of Punisher.

PUNISHER: I just broke your wrist with one hand. Crippled you with a kick to the shin.

PUNISHER: It’s too easy.

6.3

Slaughter, looking up at Punisher.

PUNISHER: You’re hiding something.

6.4

Slaughter looking down at his leg.

SLAUGHTER: Fine…

SLAUGHTER: I died once too many.

Page 7

7.1

Punisher.

SLAUGHTER: I’ve died plenty of times.

SLAUGHTER: It’s how I got so good at surviving.

7.2

Slaughter.

SLAUGHTER: But… my most recent death… was unexpected.

SLAUGHTER: I felt something was… wrong, when I came back from you killing me.

7.3

Punisher looking down at Slaughter.

SLAUGHTER: But then, Deadpool killed me.

SLAUGHTER: And I suppose that was the last straw.

SLAUGHTER: As for the mask…

7.4

Slaughter’s hand over his mask.

Page 8

8.1 Splash Page

Slaughter unmasked, looking up at Punisher.

His face is literally a skull with some muscular tissue attached.

Punisher is only mildly surprised.

SLAUGHTER: Doesn’t…seem…possible…

SLAUGHTER: Does…it?

Page 9

9.1

Punisher.

PUNISHER: You told me that you had a Vietcong version of the super soldier serum in you.

9.2

Slaughter.

PUNISHER: Anything’s possible when you’re in the capes’ territory.

9.3

Slaughter looking down.

SLAUGHTER: Heh… guess…so…

9.4

Slaughter looking up.

SLAUGHTER: Too… brittle…to fight…

SLAUGHTER: The...serum…is…failing…

Page 10

10.1

Punisher.

SLAUGHTER: Worst…possible…time…

10.2

The turret.

SLAUGHTER: Oh…well…

SLAUGHTER: I…still…win…

10.3

Punisher looking over at the turret.

SLAUGHTER: PUNISHER.

Page 11

11.1

Punisher’s hand around Slaughter’s throat.

CAPTION: PUNISHER: Adrenaline rush.

11.2

Punisher throwing Slaughter in front of him.

CAPTION: PUNISHER: The anticipation helped.

11.3

Slaughter glowing red.

SFX: BOOSH

CAPTION: PUNISHER: I knew he’d cheat.

11.4

Slaughter collapsing at Punisher’s feet.

CAPTION: PUNISHER: Pile of sh*t that Goodwin is.

Page 12

12.1

Slaughter looking up at Punisher.

His arms are starting to fall apart, into ashes.

SLAUGHTER: You…

12.2

Punisher.

SLAUGHTER: I…it…hurts…

12.3

Punisher’s skull symbol.

PUNISHER: Good.

12.4

Slaughter.

His legs are doing the same as his arms. There’s visible steam coming off of his body.

SLAUGHTER: I…still…win.

Page 13

13.1

Punisher.

SLAUGHTER: The…pistols…spread.

13.2

The door marked “EXECUTIVE”.

SLAUGHTER: Their handlers…all…scum….will burn…

13.3

Slaughter. His face is starting to fall apart.

SLAUGHTER: And…everyone…else…with…them…

13.4

Punisher.

SLAUGHTER: I’m…better…

SLAUGHTER: I…won…

SLAUGHTER: I’m…The Punisher…now…

SLAUGHTER: Captain…Castle…

Page 14

14.1 Splash Page

Punisher kicking Slaughter’s head. His foot literally makes Slaughter’s head burst into a miniature ash storm.

PUNISHER: Go f**k yourself.

SFX: BSSSSSHHHHH

Page 15

15.1

Punisher standing over Slaughter’s body, which is now a pile of ashes with some clothes.

15.2

Punisher looking toward the door marked “EXECUTIVE”.

FILTER ROOM: Slaughter has been terminated.

15.3

Punisher.

FILTER ROOM: The BigBoss will see you now.

Page 16

16.1

The door marked “EXECUTIVE” is starting to open.

CAPTION: PUNISHER: The final step of the plan.

16.2

Punisher looking toward the door as it opens, holding a pistol.

16.3

The darkness behind the door.

FILTER ROOM: Enter the room, Frank Castle. The BigBoss will see you.

Page 17

17.1

Punisher walking toward the darkness.

17.2

Black panel.

17.3

Black panel.

Page 18

18.1 Splash Page

Punisher standing in a very large room full of security monitors, which line the walls. They’ve all turned on at once.

The footage shows everything from the insides of multiple Bars With No Names, to the wrecked outside and inside of MCI.

There’s a broken LMD nearby, its head is busted open.

Page 19

19.1

Punisher looking up.

EXECUTIVE ROOM: Welcome, Frank Castle.

19.2

The door closing behind Punisher.

EXECUTIVE ROOM: The BigBoss has been expecting you.

19.3

A red, glowing visor in the darkness above Punisher.

19.4

Various wires that support a shadowed figure snapping.

BIGBOSS: Yes.

Page 20

20.1 Splash Page

The BIGBOSS standing in front of Punisher. The only light is from the hundreds of monitors.

The BigBoss’s body is an Iron Wraith, the Riot model.

CAPTION: BIGBOSS

BIGBOSS: Yes, I’ve been waiting a while for this.

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#1  Edited By gaetzan

Cool story!

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#2  Edited By The Impersonator

Great chapter!

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@InnerVenom123 said:

14.1 Splash Page
Punisher kicking Slaughter’s head. His foot literally makes Slaughter’s head burst into a miniature ash storm.

PUNISHER: Go f**k yourself.
SFX: BSSSSSHHHHH

Castle is so badass.....

The only problem I had with this is I felt you used too many splash pages. The story went by way to quickly. Other than that GREAT STORY!

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#4  Edited By InnerVenom123

@primepower53: Thanks!

I was trying to make the story seem faster. The tone of this story was meant to be one that is... well, completely batsh*t insane, but action packed. And fast.

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#5  Edited By Deranged Midget

Holy crap!!! Frank completely manhandled Slaughter! Was not expecting him to go down so easily.

Great stuff as always bro!