Marvel Genesis: Moon Knight

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WHAT IF.......PRIMEPOWER53 WROTE MOON KNIGHT? 
 
 
 
 
Part One  
 
Page 1:  


1/ SPLASH! show Moon Knight fighting GRIM REAPER atop a building. open with a right cross, Grim Reaper's back is to us.   
 
Cap: Then:
 
Cap (Moon Knight): My name is Moon Knight. I'm a mutant, my powers were very latent, triggered after a "schizophrenic breakdown" so since I'm a mutant, obviously people hate me, anyways, I one day decided to wage war on the Silvermane family of the Maggia.  
 
Cap (Ronin): THAT'S A LIE! It was MY idea to do that!  


Cap: (Khonshu): I birthed you all into existence! You all-- 
 
Cap (Marc Spector) GUYS, FOCUS, WE'RE FIGHTING, HERE!  
 
Cap (Moon Knight) Right....  
 
Page 2:  
 
1/ Show Moon Knight ducking underneath Grim Reaper's scythe
 
GRIM REAPER: I heard Silvermane put a bounty on your head, Moon Knight....  
 
2/ Show Grim Reaper grabbing Moon Knight by the throat. He's suspened in the air. Grim Reaper's scythe is held back, ready to slam into his head.

 

GRIM REAPER: A bounty I intend to collect!

 
3/Show a crescent moon slice Grim Reaper's Scythe-arm  

SFX: GSSSHK  
GRIM REAPER: GAAH!  
 
Page 3:

 

1/ Moon Knight drops to the ground.  
 
MOON KNIGHT: I think not.  

2/ Side view, as Moon Knight delivers a kick to Grim Reaper's ribcage.  
 
3/ Show a front shot of Grim Reaper clutching his side.  
 
GRIM REAPER: Lucky shot....  
 
4/ a back view as Grim Reaper slices Moon Knight, blood spurts everywhere.  
 
GRIM REAPER: YOU WON'T GET ANOTHER.  

Page 4:  
 
SPLASH! Moon Knight is in mid leap towards Grim Reaper, Reaper's back is to us, and Moon Knight faces is, his eyes with hate.  

MOON KNIGHT: RRRRHAAAAAAH!

 
Cap (Khonshu): I say we push him off the edge of the building.  
 
Cap (Ronin): But give him a beating, first!  
 
Cap (Moon Knight): Yeah! I like that!

 
Page 5:

 

1/Moon Knight tackling Reaper.

 
SFX: KRRRSH  
 
2/Moon Knight slamming his fist into Grim Reaper  
 
3/Same shot, alternate fist  
 
4/Same shot, alternate fist  

5/Show Moon Knight's fist. It's bloodied.  
 
Page 6:

 
1/Show Moon Knight grabbing Grim Reaper's head.  
 
GRIM REAPER: N-no...please.  

MOON KNIGHT: Begging will get you nowhere.

 
2/ Moon Knight slamming Grim Reaper's head into the ground.  
 
3/ Moon Knight lifting his head, preparing to do it again  
 
Page 7:

 
1/ Moon Knight slams his head to the ground again.  
 
2/ Show Moon Knight grabbing Grim Reaper's throat  
 
GRIM REAPER: H-HELP!  
 
3/ Moon Knight hoisting Reaper off the ground, he is hanging off the edge of the building.  

4/ Show Grim Reaper's feet dangling

 
Page 8:  

1/ Close up on Moon Knight's face. He is determined.  
 
MOON KNIGHT: I'm going to kill you. 
 
2/ Closeup on Grim Reaper's face. He's broken and bloodied. Has a black eye, missing teeth, etc. He's too shocked to even say anything.  
 
Page 9:  
 
1/ The panels should be stacked on each other, to show Grim Reaper falling. First panel has Moon Knight kicking him.  

2/ Grim Reaper hitting a clothesline on the way down, his neck snaps  
 
SFX: CRACK!  
 
3/ Grim Reaper's face as he hits the side of the building.  
 
4/ Grim Reaper falling  
 
5/ Grim Reaper hitting the ground  
 
SFX: THUD!

 
Page 10:  

One panel, show Moon Knight walking away. This is an overhead view, and we only see the top of Moon Knight's hood. The rest is concealed. The main focus should be on Grim Reaper's dead, broken, body.  
 
Cap (Ronin): That was fun! We should do it again, sometime!  
 
Cap (Khonshu) Yeah!

 
Cap (Marc Spector): Guys, we need to get some sleep....  
 
Page 11:

 
1/Show a large building 
 
Cap: Silvermane's headquarters:

 

SILVERMANE:  HE DID WHAT? WHAT?    
 
2/ Show Silvermane standing up from behind a desk. There's a classic "window overlooking the city" behind him. 

 
SILVERMANE: Now tell me again....what did he do? 

 

3/ Show two bodyguards, both seem fidgety and scared over Silvermane's anger.

 
BODYGUARD #1: He...uh, he killed Grim Reaper, sir.  
 
Page 12:  
 
1/ Same shot

 
SILVERMAN (OP): WHAT THE !@#&  
 
2/ Same shot for one bodyguard, but the other is hunched backwards, in mid fall after being shot.  
 
SFX: BLAM!  
 
3/ Show Silvermane holding a gun

 
SILVERMANE: .....  
 
Page 13:  
 
1/Closeup on Silvermane's eyes.  
 
SILVERMANE: Son, walk with me.

 
2/ Silvermane and Bodyguard #2 are walking through the halls of his building.  
 
SILVERMANE: So tell me again...what did Moon Knight do?

 
BODYGUARD #2: He..uh...seeemed to have given Grim Reaper a severe beating, before finally killing him.  
 
3/ Closeup on Silvermane's eyes.  
 
SILVERMANE: Go on.....  
 
Page 14:  
 
1/ Same shot

 

BODYGUARD #2 (OP): The two fought for hours, neither of them tired, and eventually, for some reason, Moon Knight had the upper hand and began beating him to death. He died when his neck snapped on a clotheline after he was tossed off the roof of a building.

 
2/ Show Silvermane's face, freaking out.  
 
SILVERMANE (SHOUTING) HE WAS MY BEST HITMAN! AND MOON KNIGHT TAKES HIM OUT LIKE A PIECE OF !@*#? NO !$#$ING WAY! HE HAS NO RIGHT!  

Page 15:  
 
SPLASH: very different from the other one's. Just everone in the hallway staring at him.  
 
Page 16:  
 
1/ Closeup on Silvermane's face.  

SILVERMANE: I have an idea.... 

2/ Silvermane and his bodyguard walking to an elevator

 

3/ Silvermane punching in a passcode.

 

4/ Front shot of both of them inside the elevator  
 
Page 17:

 
1/ Again, the panels should be stacked on top of each other, to show they are going down.

 
2/

 
3/  
 
4/ All the same shot of the two.  
 
BODYGUARD #2: Are you going to say anything?  
 
SILVERMANE: Was waiting for you to ask. The Man I am about to unleash is an artificially grown test subject for the "super soldier serum" created by my contacts in H.A.M.M.E.R. They said to put him in a field test when the time was right. I believe that time is now. He only has one flaw....he deteriorates if not put in his incubation chamber every fourteen hours.  
 
Page 18:  

Splash! A picture of Bushman, from the upper body up. Unresponsive, in an incubation chamber.  
 
SILVERMAN: His name is Bushman.  
 
Pages 19-20:  
 
Cap: Now:

 

SPLASH: A double splash page of Moon Knight on the ground, with Busman standing over him.  
 
SILVERMANE: And his field test begins tonight.

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#2  Edited By The Impersonator

Yeah. I read this on the wall. Good job by the way.

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#3  Edited By Bearded Justice

very cool  
I love Moon Knight!
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Thanks, guys!
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Np  :)
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WHAT IF.....PRIMEPOWER53 WROTE MOON KNIGHT? 
 
 
 
 ***Moon Knight has 4 personalities, Marc Spector, Moon Knight, Ronin, and Khonshu. They will all be speaking through Moon Knight.****

  
 
Part Two:

  
Rooftops of New York...  
 
My name is Moon Knight, and I recently got myself in a bit of trouble. You see, A man named "Bushman" has attacked me in the name of Silvermane, the mob boss I randomly devoted my life to take down.  
 
Khonshu: I see we disembowl him!  
 
Ronin: Then blow him up!  
 
Marc Spector: NO! Not this time! If we do that, they'll just keep coming harder.  

Moon Knight: You're probably right.  
 
CRAK! BAM!  
 
Bushman: Who are you talking to?  
 
Bam, crrraaak, swoosh.  

Moon Knight: Missed.  

Thud!  
 
Moon Knight: I didn't.  
 
Bushman: Don't underestimate me.  
 
BAM! POW CRACK! D'KUSH!  
 
This guy's good. He's been trained.  
 
WHAM! WACK!  
 
I'm better.

 
Fwooosh! Flomp.  
  
He lands on his feet
Bushman: You can't beat me.  
 
WRAM!  
 
Bushman: I'm a super soldier!
  
WaBAM! BOOM! CRACK!  
 
Bushman: I'm better than you.   
 
I'mm bleeding. Can't..focus....everything's going...dizzy.  
 
Ronin: COME ON! WE SHOULD KILL HIM!  
 
Khonshu: OR AT LEAST BEAT HIM TO A BLOODY PULP!  
 
Moon Knight: You're right, Khonshu!  
 
WAM! Bam! CRACK, sPOk, flsssh, Thud!  
 
This "Bushman" falls to the ground.  
 
BAM! BAM! BAM! BAM!  
 
I crack his head, and instead of blood there...dust?!  
 
Bushman: Idiot! *kaaf!* I need to get back to my *huuarg!* incubation chamber! P-please! Help!  
 
Marc Spector: You can't save him. Let him be.  
 
I walk away...and leave him crumbling to dust. I have more pressing matters to attend to... 
 
....the war goes on.

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Edited. This story is a "What if...."