IF ever I created a comicbook it would be this...PART 2

 Falling from the building, he screamed at the top of his lungs ...
HE WAS CAUGHT BY THE OPPOSING GANG! luckily his gangmembers found him and another set 
of war occured with no police to interrupt he fought each and every opposing gangmember, 
KILLING THEM WITH HIS BARE HANDS.... discovering his new found superstrength he became the gangs boss....
being the most powerful gangster he was known as the Undefeatable Boss... and thats just how his story unfolds...
watch out for more....
 
I CANT MAKE A LIST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  I don't mean to be rude or anything but the premise of this story sounds more like a story for some manga.  There are a lot of things in your story that don't make sense and if you don't mind I can provide some criticism.