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    Excalibow: The Ballad of Arthur's Arrow

    ~The bard bows to the court...

    ~>

    “If it please the King, then listen, Sire.

    Listen knight, and listen squire!

    Listen court, and listen all!

    Listen, dear guests of the King’s masked ball!

    ~>

    “Come one! Come all! Gather round, good friends!

    Lean in close and do attend,

    As my words pull gently back the veil

    To reveal to you a wondrous tale

    ~>

    “Of adventure and magic, and a quest for right–

    Of a hero familiar, and yet… not quite.

    For this is the ballad that so few know

    Of Arthur’s Arrow and the Excalibow!

    ~>

    “Young Arthur’s story does begin

    With a call from the Lady of the Forest Glen,

    Offering a bow the hue of sun bleached bone,

    If he could draw matching arrow from yonder stone.

    ~>

    “Arthur knew well of this stonebound shaft:

    Lusted after by the kingdom’s 'nobler' half.

    Searched for by peasants. Dreamed of by the fool.

    For legend claimed its bearer would one day rule.

    ~>

    Yes! Laugh, dear friends, and toast your King!

    For it might be of him whom the minstrels sing!

    Could he be this tale’s hero? Sire, is it true?

    Dear friends, a nobler man, you never knew.

    ~>

    “But back to Arthur, and the offered prize,

    The arrow in the stone, before his eyes.

    Many had tried, and many had failed.

    Yet, he was invited– might he prevail?

    ~>

    “He considered long moments what this could mean–

    Deciding if, truly, he could be king.

    Though unexpected, there was the Lady’s call,

    And finally, that fact overshadowed all.

    ~>

    “Stepping forward, he felt his life’s path narrow,

    Grabbing his destiny as he grabbed the arrow.

    Then, with deceptive ease, it slid right out,

    Leaving no room for further doubt.

    ~>

    “The white bow then shown like a harvest moon,

    And the Lady smiled as she gave his boon.

    With a gentle sigh he could barely hear,

    The Lady faded, then disappeared.

    ~>

    “A slight breeze blew that made Arthur shiver,

    And he wondered that there was no quiver.

    Nocking the arrow into the bow,

    He took careful aim, and let it go.

    ~>

    “He had not yet seen his arrow land

    Before another appeared in Arthur’s hand.

    Many times, he did thus fire,

    And never did his supply expire.

    ~>

    “As he retrieved each shaft, their magic done,

    They left in wisps, until back to one.

    He could not break the bow or shaft,

    And thus delighted, the archer laughed.

    ~>

    “He hid his face with a cloak and hood,

    And traveled ‘round, doing all manner good.

    Making allies, and fighting the damned,

    Including the Sorcerer of Nottingham.

    ~>

    “Mordred by name, dragon by spell,

    To Excalibow, the sorcerer fell!

    Be it dragon’s marrow, flesh, or scaly shield,

    To that enchanted arrow, all things must yield.

    ~>

    “With a final roar, the dragon was felled.

    Crowing triumphant, the archer yelled.

    ‘That’s the might of Arthur’s arrow!’ he did proclaim,

    And this was how our archer received his name.

    ~>

    “The news and legend of Arthur spread,

    And eventually, a price was put upon his head.

    Long outlawed, he roamed the wood,

    And still showed the people just where he stood.

    ~>

    “This enraged the King, as you might have guessed.

    He would not endure this hooded pest.

    He raised the reward, as well as the taxes.

    Hung the hero’s allies, or took their heads with axes.

    ~>

    “And still Arthur gathered a band of fighting men

    At a great, round, stone table in his forest den.

    So weapons were gathered, and pacts were made,

    Deep within Sherwood Forest, in a secret glade.

    ~>

    “Through a winter quite bitter and a summer quite hot,

    Plans came together to free all of Camelot!

    Those plans led to now, to this festive proceeding.

    This very moment is where my tale has been leading.

    ~>

    “Now, dear friends, this last part might get a bit gory,

    But I thank you for your patience with this humble bard’s story.

    We have almost reached midnight, where we will all unmask,

    But before we do, dear guests, I charge you this task:

    ~>

    “If you will direct your attention to the walls, and beyond to the yards,

    And take notice of the Lincoln green masks on the guards.

    That’s the merry band of fighting men that I did bring.

    They belong to me, and not to the King.

    ~>

    “For those of you who don’t follow, or may be a little dim:

    This Arthur’s Arrow that I speak of? That’s me; I’m him.

    You see, when we heard of this gathering of all the noble class,

    It was clearly carpe diem– we couldn’t let it pass.

    ~>

    “As my men draw their bows, it is time for decision,

    And I suggest you make it wisely, with sudden precision.

    For you, this one thing: you can bow down, or you can be dead.

    As for you, O' King: surrender your crown, or surrender your head.”

    ~>End<~

    Please let me know what you think, and thanks! -cbOriginally Presented In: CCC #4.

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    #1  Edited By cbishop
    OC Names:
    Characters:
    • Arthur's Arrow
    • Lady of the Forest Glen, The
    • Mordred: The Sorcerer of Nottingham
    • (unnamed king)
    Objects:
    • Excalibow
    Comic characters used in this fic:
    Public Domain:
    Co.Characters
    Characters:
    Locations:
    Objects:
    *Note: King Arthur & Robin Hood were amalgamated as Arthur's Arrow.
    **Note:Excalibur and Robin Hood's bow were amalgamated as Excalibow.
    CCC #4 comments for Excalibow: The Ballad of Arthur's Arrow:
    Delightful, I had to say. Where did you think of this? Excalibow! LOL epic win.Pyrogram

    “Mordred by name, dragon by spell, To Excalibow, the sorcerer fell!"

    I liked this bit especially. Poetry not normally my thing, but I liked this. Good work

    batkevin74

    Well done once again...

    wildvine

    Like your setting for the story very much... I can even feel the intense poetic expression from here...lol

    GodDamnIronMan

    ...I'm going to vote for @cbishop. His was something different that I've never seen before and it was all round awesome :D.

    WhiteSGPlayer

    Giving @cbishop an 8/10. Great verse, made me smile. Very talented...

    Joygirl

    I'm going to go ahead and vote bishop. His was my favorite overall.

    Project_Worm

    I'm voting for @cbishop poem of epicry. ...I liked. Bit like art.

    batkevin74

    My vote is for @cbishop

    JakeN7

    cbishop. Really entertaining read.

    stumpy49er

    @cbishop ...yours was the most interesting story style.

    wildvine

    CBishop for sure. ...doing it in a poetic style like the old tales was a stroke of genius. Reminding me of some of the Robin Hood and Arthurian tales I've read.

    Liberty

    ...Bish's poem is outstanding...

    CapFanboy

    @Pyrogram I gonna be gone most of next week, so if not now then it might as well go to Cbishop.

    wildvine

    @wildvine: Ok, if you going to be gone can you host the next one, if so you win. If not Bishop. Good contest.

    Pyrogram

    @Pyrogram Actually, I'm going to bow out. Like i said, gonna be gone most of next week and i think Cbishop already has a theme.

    wildvine

    VOTING IS OVER.

    Wildvine wins with her story including Dracula, she drained (see what I did there, Dracula.. blood. Never-mind. ) votes away from people.

    This was an amazing contest with many entries and a variety of styles used.

    If Wildvine can, she is hosting the next contest. If not cbishop does it. Thanks for all who voted. I hope the next contest is as good as this one.

    Cbishop WINS! Wildvine withdrew with honor, well deserved bishop and hope you do a good contest.

    Pyrogram

    @cbishop: ... Congrats bishop.

    @wildvine: Good job to you aswell!!

    Project_Worm

    wow... really? <sighs> This was kind of a nail biter lol. Alright, thanks to all, and thanks, Wildvine - I do expect you to defend your title - this victory isn't really mine. ;)

    cbishop

    @cbishop No worries. I'll kick it next time.

    wildvine

    Excellent. :D

    cbishop

    @cbishop: @wildvine: congrats to the both of you.

    The_Poet

    Well done to @cbishop and @wildvine. Next time is my time!

    WhiteSGPlayer
    .Fic-O-Pedia: cbishop. (My library of fics)Fic #009

    Thanks for stopping in! :^D

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    #2  Edited By cbishop

    The Origins Behind the Origins (or how some of these characters got their names):

    The tale overall

    This story was written for CCC 4 - Archer. The picture given looked like Robin Hood in a castle window, and that had to be the character the OC was based on. I know jack all about that time period, and the only two stories I could think of from that time(-ish), were Robin Hood and King Arthur. So, I combined the two, and that gave me a bit to play with. I really liked the way it came out.

    I intended for this to be a one-shot epic poem, but come on- I can't just leave Excalibow lying around. There's a few things here that just might be popping up again, although probably not in poem style.

    Arthur's Arrow

    Honestly? I think this name is lackluster, BUT it is alliterate, and that is always a plus. Out of all the things mashed up for this story, the two main characters didn't lend themselves to it very well. The thing was the bow, which came from Robin Hood, so the only thing I could see to do was to make the man from King Arthur. I guess I could have gone with "Arthur Hood," but blech, not much better. Regardless, by the end, he's back to being King Arthur anyway.

    There's another reason I kept this as the name. My dad's name is Arthur, and "Arthur's Arrow" made me think of this:

    4 Like arrows in the hands of a warrior
    are children born in one’s youth.
    5 Blessed is the man
    whose quiver is full of them.
    They will not be put to shame
    when they contend with their opponents in court.

    Psalms 127:4-5, NIV

    It warms my heart to think of this. :)

    Mordred: The Sorcerer of Nottingham

    Melding Mordred and the Sheriff of Nottingham was just combining two bastards that you want to see die on their own. So, simply taking him out with the bow and leaving it at that seemed like a good thing to do. However, I said that he was a dragon, and I have kind of made a thing out of dragons in my little universe, so could we be seeing Mordred again? Mmmmaybe.

    Lady of the Forest Glen, The

    If Arthur was going to get a bow that was a stand-in for Excalibur, then he had to get it from a stand-in for the Lady of the Lake. Since Robin Hood's men lived in Sherwood Forest, then a Lady of the Forest just seemed natural. Lady of the Forest Glen just helped the rhyme.

    I have a soft spot for her, because my mom read this, and when she got to the part where the Lady vanished, she looked up at me, and said, "Well, why did she disappear?" like that was the worst thing ever.

    I couldn't help but smile, but my answer was, "Well, because her part in the story was done. Same as the Lady in the Lake going back into the water." But yeah, my mom's reaction kind of warms my heart whenever I think of the Lady of the Forest Glen.

    Excalibow

    Excalibow... this feels like an unexpected masterpiece. I didn't think about this when I was writing it, but now what this really reminds me of is the bow the kid had in the Dungeons & Dragons cartoon. The arrows didn't show up until he pulled back on the bow, and then he got some kind of fiery magical energy arrows. That's kind of what happened here with Arthur, except he does have that one shaft.

    Like I said though, I can't just leave this lying around. For years I've tried to come up with some great sword or bow that could be more than a sword or bow- meaning: freed from some of its natural restrictions. So, a bow that has an unending supply of arrows? Yeah, that'll work. I haven't worked out the when and where just yet, but Excalibow will definitely be making a comeback.

    How it used to look

    For this forum repost, I originally put the poem in a table, because I thought it made it look a little more like it was in a scroll. ...It also made it more annoying to read. So, I put it in the normal format you see in the main post. I was going to arrange it in MS Paint with a fancy script, and I still may, but for now no. This is the table version though:

    ~The bard bows to the court...~>~>~>~>

    “If it please the King, then listen, Sire.

    Listen knight, and listen squire!

    Listen court, and listen all!

    Listen, dear guests of the King’s masked ball!

    “Come one! Come all! Gather round, good friends!

    Lean in close and do attend,

    As my words pull gently back the veil

    To reveal to you a wondrous tale

    “Of adventure and magic, and a quest for right–

    Of a hero familiar, and yet… not quite.

    For this is the ballad that so few know

    Of Arthur’s Arrow and the Excalibow!

    “Young Arthur’s story does begin

    With a call from the Lady of the Forest Glen,

    Offering a bow the hue of sun bleached bone,

    If he could draw matching arrow from yonder stone.

    ~>

    ~>

    ~>

    ~>

    “Arthur knew well of this stonebound shaft:

    Lusted after by the kingdom’s 'nobler' half.

    Searched for by peasants. Dreamed of by the fool.

    For legend claimed its bearer would one day rule.

    Yes! Laugh, dear friends, and toast your King!

    For it might be of him whom the minstrels sing!

    Could he be this tale’s hero? Sire, is it true?

    Dear friends, a nobler man, you never knew.

    “But back to Arthur, and the offered prize,

    The arrow in the stone, before his eyes.

    Many had tried, and many had failed.

    Yet, he was invited– might he prevail?

    “He considered long moments what this could mean–

    Deciding if, truly, he could be king.

    Though unexpected, there was the Lady’s call,

    And finally, that fact overshadowed all.

    ~>

    ~>

    ~>

    ~>

    “Stepping forward, he felt his life’s path narrow,

    Grabbing his destiny as he grabbed the arrow.

    Then, with deceptive ease, it slid right out,

    Leaving no room for further doubt.

    “The white bow then shown like a harvest moon,

    And the Lady smiled as she gave his boon.

    With a gentle sigh he could barely hear,

    The Lady faded, then disappeared.

    “A slight breeze blew that made Arthur shiver,

    And he wondered that there was no quiver.

    Nocking the arrow into the bow,

    He took careful aim, and let it go.

    “He had not yet seen his arrow land

    Before another appeared in Arthur’s hand.

    Many times, he did thus fire,

    And never did his supply expire.

    ~>

    ~>~>~>

    “As he retrieved each shaft, their magic done,

    They left in wisps, until back to one.

    He could not break the bow or shaft,

    And thus delighted, the archer laughed.

    “He hid his face with a cloak and hood,

    And traveled ‘round, doing all manner good.

    Making allies, and fighting the damned,

    Including the Sorcerer of Nottingham.

    “Mordred by name, dragon by spell,

    To Excalibow, the sorcerer fell!

    Be it dragon’s marrow, flesh, or scaly shield,

    To that enchanted arrow, all things must yield.

    “With a final roar, the dragon was felled.

    Crowing triumphant, the archer yelled.

    ‘That’s the might of Arthur’s arrow!’ he did proclaim,

    And this was how our archer received his name.

    ~>

    ~>

    ~>

    ~>

    “The news and legend of Arthur spread,

    And eventually, a price was put upon his head.

    Long outlawed, he roamed the wood,

    And still showed the people just where he stood.

    “This enraged the King, as you might have guessed.

    He would not endure this hooded pest.

    He raised the reward, as well as the taxes.

    Hung the hero’s allies, or took their heads with axes.

    “And still Arthur gathered a band of fighting men

    At a great, round, stone table in his forest den.

    So weapons were gathered, and pacts were made,

    Deep within Sherwood Forest, in a secret glade.

    “Through a winter quite bitter and a summer quite hot,

    Plans came together to free all of Camelot!

    Those plans led to now, to this festive proceeding.

    This very moment is where my tale has been leading.

    ~>

    ~>

    ~>

    ~>

    “Now, dear friends, this last part might get a bit gory,

    But I thank you for your patience with this humble bard’s story.

    We have almost reached midnight, where we will all unmask,

    But before we do, dear guests, I charge you this task:

    “If you will direct your attention to the walls, and beyond to the yards,

    And take notice of the Lincoln green masks on the guards.

    That’s the merry band of fighting men that I did bring.

    They belong to me, and not to the King.

    “For those of you who don’t follow, or may be a little dim:

    This Arthur’s Arrow that I speak of? That’s me; I’m him.

    You see, when we heard of this gathering of all the noble class,

    It was clearly carpe diem– we couldn’t let it pass.

    “As my men draw their bows, it is time for decision,

    And I suggest you make it wisely, with sudden precision.

    For you, this one thing: you can bow down, or you can be dead.

    As for you, O' King: surrender your crown, or surrender your head.”

    ~>

    ~>

    ~>

    ~>End<~

    That's all for now! Thanks for reading. :^D

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    I need to find a way to bring Excalibow into my characters' universe.

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    Dec 16, 2023: Found this on oafe.net via a Google search. I definitely had this guy in mind when I thought up Excalibow. I loved the D&D cartoon when I was a kid, and mannnnn, I wanted one of those energy bows (almost as much as a Sunsword from Thundarr). :)

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    Dec 24, 2023: Posted by Adam Pugh to the Dungeons and Dragons Cartoon TV Series group on Facebook. He said this:

    I made these custom Magic cards last year. I figured this group might appreciate them.

    He made cards for the entire cast of the cartoon, and they're pretty cool looking (looks like he used the art in the previous comment box). Of course, the ranger with his energy bow is the one I was always fascinated with.

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