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DC Re-Invented- Wonder Woman #1 (of 6)
@shadowswordmaster: Thanks :)
@rulerofthisuniverse: I really like where this is going. Keep it up!
@themanintheshoe: Thanks!
@rulerofthisuniverse: Interesting idea with the Khan boodline and tying Darkseid into your mythology. My only real criticism is this line "The entire scene looks like something out of a Star Wars film."
You know that big popular movie, well this looks just like that but a little different. I'm not overly sold on you just saying it's Star War coz now I'm expecting lightsabers, Jabba the Hutt and things like that. I get the metaphor but it's execution doesn't quite work, for me anyway.
What to change the line to? Not sure right now, I'm thinking of something.
Nice use of actual Greek (it's greek right ἀποκάλυψις)
Okay! Nice use of Steve Trevor here. However I did have another idea for him that can't really be used now... ah well! I've come up with another idea for it anyway! Nice job!
@batkevin74: Ok, I guess I'll change that if it sounds weird. Thanks, though! And yeah, that's Greek. The connections between Earth 11 and Greece will be explained next issue :)
Sorry, bro. You sorta said to darkman (when he was going to write WW) that the ten year gap would be him visiting Themyscira, so I thought it would work. And I'll make it so that he can't remember any of it at the end. I was actually thinking that the last scene of WW #6 would be the first scene of Suicide Squad #0.
Thanks a lot, though :D
@rulerofthisuniverse: You're welcome. Awesome Start BTW.
@wbr17: Thanks :)
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