Batgirl and Robin: 2011 Chapter 2

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New Kind of Mind Game.
 
In Gotham City Penguin is considering the amounts of gang members took down by Robin  and Batgirl. "Those to bird-brained fools are ruining my gangs, bet, gambit everything I have they'll destroy," says Penguin angrily."I've got to find a way to destroy them." 
"...Or you can let them destroy each other" says Mind Games the in a smug voice as he walks in.
Penguin says "What the hell do you want" in a surprised and angry voice.
"Oh Ozzie I what to help to help myself" says Mind Games. 
"What are you talking about?" says Penguin.
"Look if I hypnotize the little brat to kill the Girl Blunder he goes to jail and that's two of your problem out the way" says Mind Games.
"Well then what do I have to do for you" says Penguin 
"No much just give me your loyalty and 25% of your whole income"  says Mind Games.
"Fine then... but only after those two are gone" says Penguin with a grin.
 
Later in Gotham:
"Hey Stephanie what the hell took you so long," says Robin (Damian Wayne).
"Unlike you I have a life outside of my costume," says Batgirl (Stephanie Brown).
"What ever get your moving.. there's a brake-in downtown," say Robin as he jumps from building tops and goes downtown.
"What the... no one's here," says Robin.
"Hey kid I know were the robbery's at," say a mysterious figure in the ally.
"If you know tell me," says Robin angrily.
"Sure... come here" says them mysterious figure. He then pulls out a stopwatch and says "When you see Batgirl kill her" and comes out of the ally and reveals to be Mind Games.
5 minutes Later:
"Hey Damian where'd you go?" says Batgirl in a loud voice.
"Must kill Batgirl.. Must kill Batgirl. Must kill Batgirl" says Robin
"Must kill who" says Batgirl backing away in fear.
"Kill batgirl" says Robin as he pulls out his sword and tries to kill Batgirl.
Batgirl then runs to away from Robin. "Robin what's wrong if you.. other than what's usually wrong you" says Batgirl. Robin then swings his sword and tears Batgirl's costume and make her bleed.
"So that's how you want to play it uh" says Batgirl as she trips him, take away his sword, and wraps him in his cape.
"Master. Kill Batgirl." says Robin as he struggles to get out.
"Master... who's master" says Batgirl. "Damian gotta be hypnotized".
"Well here goes." say Batgirl as she turns Robin's over and hits him with it.
"Hey jugs what was that about?" says Robin angry and Confused.
"You were mind controlled stupid" says Stephanie.
"How the hell did it" says Robin.
"I don't know" says Batgirl.
Back at Penguins:
"That was a turn for the worst...next control them hard enough not to be released by a piece of metal," says Penguin in an angry voice.
"My apologies, but if you have anymore problems keep in touch" says Mind Games.
"Get your Blond butt out of here". says Penguin as Mind Games exits out the door.
"Trusted me you two next I'll get you" says Penguin.

this is really good, and the dialogue bring out the plot line well and you also let us know when there is a change of place, all around good chapter!

Awesome chapter! You're really good at capturing the dynamic between these two. Great banter, and great emotion too. Can't wait for more!