Batgirl and Robin: 2011 Chapter 1 (Better Redo)

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#1  Edited By Black_Kn1ght

These character are property of the DC Comic:
Issue 1: Child's Play

In Gotham City Stephanie Brown (a.k.a Batgirl) is on a date. "This was the perfect date," says Stephanie Brown. "We had a stroll through now we're having a great dinner.
"Yeah your the perfect date too." says Andy.
"There's only one thing missing" says Stephanie as she leans in to kiss Andy.
CAR CRASH
"What the hell's going on out there?" says Stephanie. See then looks out the window and sees Robin (Damian Wayne) trying to kill a gang member and a girl at his side. She then goes to Robin.
"Hey babe where are you going?" says Andy.
"uhm... to the restroom" says Stephanie.
Later:
"Okay scumbag you're going to tell me what I need to know!" says Robin.
"Y-Y-Yes sir" says the gang member cowardly.
"Hey Damian" says Batgirl as she walks toward him.
"Brown... The hell do you want and why are you here?" say Robin.
"I was enjoying my date and second why are trying to kill this guy and third who's the girl," says Bagirl angrily.
"Look the girl was tied in the guy's car and I helped her out and I care less about stupid date," says Robin."Now if you'll excuse me this jackass is gonna tell me what I need to know"."Now who work for scumbag".
"I don't know his name but I know where you can find him. He lives downtown " says the gang member as he runs away.
"Now for the girl" says Damian."Who are you?".
"My name's Amy." says the girl.
"Okay Amy why was that guy after you," says Batgirl.
"My dad," says Amy in a shy voice. "My dad got into trouble and started being a criminal and stole for the boss guy the man was talking about". "My dad's nothing but a criminal".
"Join the club" says Batgirl.
"The gang member said his boss lives downtown. Less go Girl Blunder... You too Amy" says Damian.
30 minutes later:
"Okay here we're here." says Robin. "This warehouse must be it" the three then go in the warehouse.
"Help someone there" says a man in the back room.
"Daddy" says Amy as she rushes to the sound of his voice.
"Sweetie" says Amy's Dad (Rick)
"Aw isn't that cute a father and daughter moment," says the boss
"Listen Dan you don't have to hurt my daughter. Just me." says Rick
"I'm actually surprised that your daughter made here by herself" says Dan
"That's what you think. Batgirl, Robin NOW" says Amy as Batgirl and Robin beat the gang members.
"Okay Big Man listen up. You leave those two alone or I'll come back her and kill every freakin' one of you." says Robin.
"O-Okay" said Dan cowardly.
After:
"Thanks for saving saving my dad and me," says Amy.
"That's what we do," says Batgirl. "If that jackass comes for you come look for us".
"Sure. And Robin I have something for you," says Amy as she kiss him on the cheek. "See ya" as Amy and her dad go away.
"What are you looking at Stephanie" says Damian
"Nothing Damian just relax I thinks it's cute." says Stephanie "Oh crap my dates still at dinner".
Meanwhile:
"What the hell happened Dan?" says Penguin.
"Sir it wasn't me it was Batgirl and Robin" says Dan.
"Guard escort Dan out of here" says Penguin as the guard drag Dan out.
"Two more problem I have to deal with in Gotham. Well not for long. says Penguin

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#2  Edited By StarKiller809

WOW! I am really amazed on how you fixed it! I think it is really amazing now. Chapter 2 is amazing. I hope Chapter 3 is up soon.
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#3  Edited By CapFanboy

YES! this is how to do it, you have great ideas and here it is accurately put across to the reader, great job! I love it!

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#4  Edited By TypingKira

Great chapter! I loved the interaction between Stephanie and Damian. Very cute, very funny. Looking forward to more!

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I really enjoyed this and really like to show the Steph and Damian game play together. I really love them in issues together so that means I enjoyed them in this fan fic together