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This is my "super hero bio" i created when i joined today and was wondering if i can get help making it longer and better or if someone wanted to write their own story based off of it so i can read and enjoy! :D

" I was bred to become the first NATURAL Xenomorph King, to be trained by the best warriors and praetorians. One day, Thor of Asgard came unto my home world without knowledge of its inhabitants. My colony attacked, but our Queen was killed. Her death prompted me to hatch from my egg and attacked the murderer, but could not over power him to lay my DNA into him. This reminded him of the story of how Odin found Loki and he chose to follow his father's example and take me to Asgard. Once there, I escaped from my containment and found and unsuspecting Asgardian host. After breaking free with more power than previous xenomorphs (being from a god, of course.) My cunning prompted Odin to recognize me as a worthy and intelligent creature rather than beast. He gave me the power to be a worthy pet for Thor and a conscience/ sentience so I may be controllable. I now have the ability to speak and others listed above. "

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