@ponello said:
@street_level_hero: Thanks for the feedback :D
I was very tired making this video so that would explain why I sounded so monotone hahaha.
But again thanks for the feedback, next time I will write a text and than read from it. I made a new video today tell me what you think :).
Much better as far as your speaking and it had more enthusiasm for sure and your pronunciations were better. Still a bit monotone and robotic though but with more practice you can get better. Now you just need to work on your modulation so that your voice does not go up and down ijn volume so much while still maintaining enthusiasm. You need a better mic though and something to cancel the hollow/echo room sound bouncing off the walls. Google would likely help with some tips on this.
Yes, reading from a script or memorizing a script will help, but try looking into a mirror or looking at yourself onscreen via a webcam and that should help you emote better and convey more fun and enthusiasm..
Still a bit long though and you need to try to condense what you are trying to say into shorter sentences. There were not as many "umm''s and "ehhs' amd "ahhs' on this one also which was a definite improvement.
Also you have to work on your timing so that it flows with the graphics so that it is more entertaining. Look at some other videos of this ilk and absorb their sense of timing if possible.
All in all there is a lot of improvement in this video compared to the first and with practice and googling and viewing other videos of this sort to see what is the most entertaining you should be well on your way to making some top notch videos.
I am glad you got that i was only trying to help and not being a troll.
Definitely better though in the second video and your graphics editing in both is really good.
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