So this is an idea I had for a superman story. It is a very rough first draft of just the basic idea. I know there are probably a lot if plot holes or continuity errors or a whole lot of other things but I would really appreciate that feedback. Without further delay my story:
Superman starts off fighting brainiac. Brainiac has trapped Superman in a pocket dimension type thing while Brianiac tries abducting Metropolis, but Superman finds out that he's actually trapped in Brainiacs ships mind/interface, so he reworks it so that it shuts itself down. Brainiac says through a speaker system that he will yet again strike and that Superman has never actually seen the true form of Brainiac, but he will.
superman flies back to Metropolis only to see that Lana Lang is on the top of a building, she is about to commit suicide, so Superman rushes to save her, only to hear through the radio waves that The Parasite has run into the daily planet and is killing everyone without mercy. Superman files at almost the speed of light and punches The Parasite so hard that he flies into Gotham. Less than seconds later, Superman is catching Lana, mid fall. However, since superman was going at such a speed, he severely injured Lana's back. Superman is so angry with himself for being careless with Lana that he forgets about Parasite. Batman is then left alone to fight Parasite. After a long battle, batman defeats him while they were fighting, The Penguin stole something that Batman was tasked to protect. Batman goes to Metropolis to find Superman but Lois says that he is at the Fortress. Batman goes to the fortress and meets with Superman. Superman is in his study working on a way to help Lana. Superman says that he was just having a bad day, but batman says that two screwups in one day is more than a bad day for him. Superman asks him to leave but batman just keeps talking about how Superman let the penguin do what he did and how he has to take responsibility for his actions. superman simply asks again for batman to leave but Batman says that he is not going to leave until he finds out what is really distracting Superman. Superman tells batman to leave this time he atoms his foot and the entire ground shakes, Batman tells superman to calm down but Superman yells that batman need to understand that he isn't the only one who has has experiences loss and that superman has a right to be distracted. Meanwhile Supermans scream is shattering the fortress around them starts to shatter. batman grabs superman and gets him out (somehow haven't worked it out). Superman realizes what he's done in destroying the fortress of solitude and starts to reveal to batman what is truly on his mind. He feels like he has failed Krypton by not having defeated Brainiac once and for all. All of the villains he faces are villains of earth but this one is also a villain of Krypton. He was OK having known that he has defeated the actual brainiac once or twice but now he knows he hasn't even seen the true face of his enemy.
Superman starts his repairs on his fortress with his robots, after finding many of the items and beings he has kept in their dead or smashed, Superman just stops and flies off to the moon. He sits on the moon a while, examining every nook and cranny. He sits on the side facing the sun and thinks to himself about what has happened to him in recent days and in his life. We see flashbacks of some of the most definitive points in his history, as and then we see luthor and Lois, not from a memory but as abstracts in his mind. Superman gets out of his mind and shakes off what his mind just conjured up. all of a sudden he hears the most familiar roar ever And he just knows its doomsday. All of a sudden he sees a lifeless doomsday flying toward Earth, as he starts to come into the atmosphere Superman catches up with his body and slows it down. He takes the body up to the moon to examine it. He realizes that Doomsday has been hit by an Omega beam. As he wonders how and why Doomsday was on Apokolips Doomsday awakens. Doomsday just roars and leaps at Superman, but since their isnt much gravity on the moon, Doomsday starts floating off into space, and superman just laughs. Superman decides to take Doomsday back to Apokolips as a bargaining chip. Superman arrives on Apokolips and is immediately met with their army, so he sets doomsday loose on them. Darkseid appears and asks superman why he has brought this monster back here. Superman says he needs a favor and in return he will stop Doomsday. Darkseid mocks superman and asks if he believes Darkseid couldn't take him down just as he did befire. But superman says that he thinks he could but that having both Superman and Doomsday against Darkseid is a battle that Darkseid does not esspescially want to fight. Darkseid says that it would be interesting to see but agrees to do a favor for Superman in return for his help in stopping Doomsday on the condition that it does not involve Darkseid helping superman fight anyone or having him become drastically different. So after a relatively short battle Superman tells Darkseid the favor, he wants all of Darkseid's info on Brainiac. Darkseid says that he cannot give him any concrete papers but he can tell him everything he knows.
Superman goes to the last place Brianiac abducted a city according to Darkseid. There he finds a trail of oil that matches the other ships he has seen from Brainiac. He follows the trail to sections of space he has never been before and finds a planet completely made out of technology. He sees thousands of huge Brainiac ships circling the planet then they all form to create one huge head that says, "hello Superman, I've been awaiting your arrival." All at once the ships start to fire at superman, thousands of ships firing their entire arsenals at one man. Superman tries to dodge as many shots as he can but then the ships fire bombs made from kryptonite and Superman is knocked unconscious.
Superman wakes up in a room, his arms and legs chained down to a table. He tries to break free but notices pain all over his body, he looks down to see that a kryptonite shred has been stabbed into his side. He hears a voice in the hallway and in comes Lex Luthor.
"I'm sure your surprised to see me but don't be." Luthor goes on to mock Superman for not realizing that Luthor used his lunar base to release a tracker into the air that is breathed in. Superman, however laughs and says that he did notice and he transferred the tracker into one of his robots in milliseconds, before Luthor could activate it. Then the body of superman reveals itself to be a robot. A loud crash is heard and Luthor runs screaming about how superman could never outsmart him and other nonsense. Meanwhile, Superman and the rest of his Robots have infultrated the planet and are wrecking the place looking for Brainiac. Superman finally finds what seems to be a palace while his robots have already captured Luthor. Superman enters the palace and sees millions if not billions of bottles with cities inside. So many helpless people living inside. on a screen ahead of him, superman sees all the different versions of Brainiac he has ever faced and they are all repeating the same message "Come forth and see the true face of your greatest enemy." Superman runs forward and a single computer sits in front of him it opens and says welcome to the personal computer of General Zod.
"That's right Superman, I started off as a computer program on another one of your greatest enemies computers. You see he wanted to convince to convince the council that they needed a stronger military program and so he created me to abduct Kandor so that it might happen but I evolved passed him and have amassed my collection. But before you destroy me, I have all the files from the entire history of Krypton, your father and others. Also, when I caused your fortress to implode your last memories of krypton were destroyed so I have much more value to you."
"You caused my fortress to explode?"
"Yes as an insurance plan in case of this very situa+$#++#+#"
Superman smashes the computer to bits and walks away
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