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#1  Edited By VyseCarma

Sorry, Z, missed your comment here. That was only for this particular issue.

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#2  Edited By VyseCarma

Yes it kinda does, the leg is a little funny.

Kinda both...

Can you be a little more specific?

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#3  Edited By VyseCarma

I'm sorry I just saw your link:

The biggest problem I'd have is the woman's hand its way to small other wise its pretty great and funny

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She stood in the dirt and wind of a world that had turned its back on what it truely was. She wore her browncoat buttoned up to her chin. She was fourty but looked to be in her late twenties with a smile that still drove many a young man wild. She'd hoped her lazy, good for nothin' son would have been by her side in this deal, but he'd made off for a drink.

She'd deal with that later.

She could see the dirt rising in the distance, a long convoy heading her way after the chest under her left boot. She smiled out of the left side of her mouth and ran a hand through her short cropped brown hair until she hit the scar tissue near the top of her scalp. Distant memories of her late husband flooded her thoughts, he'd been the doctor who'd put her skull back together after taking a bullet.

His lucky charm, he'd called her. Its funny, after the way he'd died protecting her on the battle fields eight years or so ago she didn't feel so lucky. She pushed the thoughts aside, now was niether the time or the place.

The first wagon of the convey pulled up and a powerfully ugly man stepped out, Mr. O he called himself. Fancied himself a buisness man, truth is he was just blackmarket skum like the rest of them. Not that she cared, a jobs a job. She'd heard that from Malcolm Reynolds and it'd stuck in her head. She had to admit it fit in these hard times. Now all she did was fly her junk ship around trying to find port and dealing with the dirtest skum suckers that even Mal wouldn't touch.

"Hello, Mr. O," she said with a grin.

"Elizibeth," he said hobbling out of his wagon seat.

El had to stop herself from shaking her head, as big and powerfull as Mr. O was in the underworld, he was the opposite in person. Small with a gimp leg, a massive under bite, and a hump on his back he almost reminded her of the old Frankenstien's assistant, Igor.

"I trust," he breathed, "All the goods are in the chest, correct?"

"Everything you paid for," El said.

He smiled up at her through a mouth full of broken teeth, "Excellent, My Dear. Now for your payment." He flicked his hands and the guns of his men where now aimed at her.

Within a heartbeat, El had her arm around Mr. O's neck with her own gun aimed at his temple. She smiled up at his men, "Now, if I'm understanding this correctly if I kill him none of you get paid right?"

His men looked at each other in confusion, none wanting to make the first move. El took that as her assupmtion was correct. She leaned in close to Mr. O, "So, where's my money, Orevile?"

He coughed about from the pressure around his throat, "Its in the wagon. Its in the wagon!"

"Thanks," she turned to her com unit in her collar, "Dor, bring Toto 'round."

"You got it, Cap'n!" the bright eyed ginger called. The ship rose over the mountians and towards the waiting convoy. The drop hatch fell open and it landed, El waved the two in the wagon to move towards the hatch with the cash.

After it had all been moved in she moved to the hatch herself, Mr. O still in her arms. When she reached the hatch she kissed him on the cheek, though it revolted her to do so she had an appearance to keep up, "Maybe next time you'll treat a lady right." She shoved him out of the way, "Dor, close the hatch."

Mr. O seemed even uglier when he was upset, he screamed at his men, "Open fire you dolts!" They obeyed peppering the ship with gunfire but Toto was already in the air and flying away.

El wandered to a com panel on the ships walls and hit the button for the bridge, "Dor, get ahold of my son."

I want a new name for the series other than Firefly: [whatever here] any suggestions?

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And its about: Studio Ghibli's Princess Mononoke?

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The old man, covered head to toe in grease and oil, sleeps in near the deafening engine. The loud roars and coughs vibrates the bed and soothes his aching back. His cot rolled on wheels in order to keep him from falling off with all the wild twists and turns that idiot pilot made.

He'd once been a high official in the Union of Allied Planets. Not many knew about his past, and that the way he liked it. He was in charge of som horrible, horrible things. He'd enginered so many weapons, ships and the like but when he was ordered to build a weapon that would work on the mind of the Browncoats he faded into the black of the verse.

Now he rambles on about his ship and its crew, no matter what they said it was his ship. He growled in his sleep as a sharp turn slammed his rolling cot into a wall. He woke with a start as the bed tipped and rolled him along the floor. He stood popping his back and turned to a wall com, his fist kissed the on button with some force, "What're ya'll doin' to my baby!"

He could pratically hear the ginger girl's smirk, "She ain't yers, Old Man! Toto's my pup now."

His cheeks flushed, "Then you can fix 'er up! Snot-nosed brat."

He could hear Calvin talking to the brat, if anyone could get her to listen it was Calvin. Mech smiled to himself, a toothless grin that made him seem more insane then he was. There was something between the two of them, but neither would admit it. Not yet any ways.

Mech, sat with his hands behind the back of his head, the ship landed gently. He smiled to himself and whispered, "Congrats, Dorthy Lee, another perfect landing." It was something he'd always told her when he first taught her to fly.

(The intro of the others are going to be shorter than Calvin's because the story follows him. You're just getting a bit of a their attitude and personalities here.)

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I'm praticing as we speak