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#1 Posted by Uncommon (377 posts) - - Show Bio

@cara_hunter: Well it kind of is... If your interested in visiting a desert :P

#2 Edited by Uncommon (377 posts) - - Show Bio

@closure said:

Felt a bit rushed but a good read nonetheless :)

Gotcha. I'll work on that then.

Thanks :)

#3 Posted by Uncommon (377 posts) - - Show Bio
#4 Posted by Uncommon (377 posts) - - Show Bio

(LMAO!)

She's not exactly a problem for me and instead more of a speed bump on the road which I rather just avoid.

#5 Edited by Uncommon (377 posts) - - Show Bio

@web_flotsam: That was a really good post man. I'm no expert, but it would seem like you were heading on the right path. Really nice attention to detail by the way. I could totally follow the writing as if it was a scene in a movie playing out in my head and that's really good man.

I know you might want some more feedback than just glittering complements, but I really didn't see anything that bad in your post.

Oh, and of course, welcome to this section of the vine :)

#6 Posted by Uncommon (377 posts) - - Show Bio

August always tried to save Malaga for non business related matters. Only the offer his 'crazy' friend gave him was too tempting to simply let go, so out of a show of respect, Hudson met Mr. Miltoan at his home in the city to discuss business.

"Hello! sir Hudson! Take a seat and a glass of Whiskey! I heard you were searching the market for land and I believe with my help... Malaga could be yours within the blink of an eye friend"

"You have my attention Mr. Miltoan Please Continue.

#7 Posted by Uncommon (377 posts) - - Show Bio

Quite an intelligent little precocious minx

#8 Edited by Uncommon (377 posts) - - Show Bio

Kids these days... Some take selfies, others are aspiring psychopaths

#9 Edited by Uncommon (377 posts) - - Show Bio

Anybody willing to give me second opinions on an RPG pitch I have?

:D

#10 Posted by Uncommon (377 posts) - - Show Bio