@web_flotsam: That was a really good post man. I'm no expert, but it would seem like you were heading on the right path. Really nice attention to detail by the way. I could totally follow the writing as if it was a scene in a movie playing out in my head and that's really good man.
I know you might want some more feedback than just glittering complements, but I really didn't see anything that bad in your post.
Oh, and of course, welcome to this section of the vine :)
August always tried to save Malaga for non business related matters. Only the offer his 'crazy' friend gave him was too tempting to simply let go, so out of a show of respect, Hudson met Mr. Miltoan at his home in the city to discuss business.
"Hello! sir Hudson! Take a seat and a glass of Whiskey! I heard you were searching the market for land and I believe with my help... Malaga could be yours within the blink of an eye friend"
"You have my attention Mr. Miltoan Please Continue.