Cable Poem

Born into the Future, but brought back to the past 
Cause without the aid of Nathan, the present could never last 
The Future is in trouble, and Apocalypse is law 
But in the end his techno virus was his fatal flaw 
Cause he traveled throughout time, to make sure Hope could live 
 And in the end, to save the world, his life he had to give

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Posted by InnerVenom123

Don't ever stop making these. That was great. 

Posted by MrUnknown
@tomzoid13: Woah, it's great!!
Posted by Mercy_

This is awesome :D

But I'd just like to point out that it was the TO virus that made it possible for him to transverse the portal. So although it was his fatal flaw, it's also what allowed him to survive long enough to do that and to save everybody else involved.

Posted by tomzoid13

Thanks guys. BTW Follow me. I'm gonna be making more poems like this in the future so yeah

Posted by mavfan626

Nice poem dude

Posted by venomoushatred1001

Nice Job :D

Posted by cyberninja

Don't quit your day job. 

Posted by tomzoid13

Good thing I don't have a day job. Boom

Posted by cyberninja
@tomzoid13 said:
Good thing I don't have a day job. Boom
HA! Niiiiiiiiiiiiice.
Posted by Renchamp

Only criticism: Use Borne instead of Born. "Born" makes it sound like he was actually birthed in the future when he wasn't. "Borne" means he was carried there and didn't quite belong. Other than that, nice job. Cable's one of my favorites.