Thunderstone

Chapter Two continues to deliver the premise left behind by Chapter One dialog and and focus on the objective of the chapter are not lost my only open suggestion would be A place a bold on the text beneath the "exampple" and B come up with a new banner for each chapter to leave behind a further impression that is eye catching to lead the reader into wanting to read the chapter before knowing what's it about....

It's really great what your doing hear and I can honestly say you did you're research when designing the outline to the story, even going as far as to look up the African dialect used by the character. And I can also honestly say that this does feel more like a script then a Fan Fiction which is very rare less you either studied for it or a brimming with natural talent in the field either way 10/10 on presentation 10/10 on dialog and finally 10/10 on suspense for keeping the reader both entertained and thirsty for more

that is SO offensive it's not even funny

palying a deck of cards one a pool table with two other guys am winning the game so far and the other guys are getting pissed there is a light bulb/switch above the pool table the room only has one dooor four chairs and the walls are bricks

play with the darts in the room and' accidentally' miss hitting him with them in the throat

ty Slight

Basic Description-  Header(s) H2, H3 H4 do not work, Bold, italicize, underline, do not work 

 
 
Full Description- Although, I can write text, I can select bold, italicize, or underline, place headers in settings . All of the Headers including H2, H3, H4 do not function properly when i save my changes to the setting and do not appear as Headers but rather as bold. 
Bold, italicize, underline do not always function properly sometimes when I bold one word from the sentence the entire sentence  becomes bold as well when i save changes to my profile 
 
Example: 
 
 Garlic-  Garlic has no effect on a vampire, it does not repel nor poison them on contact.

Reflections -  All vampires are shown to have reflections in mirrors, glass, etc.

Photographs-  On numerous occasions vampires have shown to appear in photographs.

Silver-  In some contradictory myths vampires are greatly weakened by silver, this proves to be untrue in real life. Rather then harm, vampires often wear silver jewelry as part of custom.

Religious Artifacts-  Vampires themselves are not demonic creatures simply undead frozen in the state in which they died. That being stated crosses, holy water or hollowed ground have no effect whatsoever on them.

Entry Into a Home-  Contrary to massive belief vampires do not require the consent of a home's owner to gain entrance. This common misbelief dates back all the way to the classic folklore of Dracula.

Shape Shifting -  Vampires do not shape-shift into a bat, wolf, or any elemental forms such as a cloud of mist. Vampires cannot alter their overall form, as they are depicted in mythology as having the ability to do so.

Flight-  Vampires do not possess the ability to fly, this power is most commonly mistaken for their ability to jump great distances at high speeds.

Older-  In some folklore vampire weaknesses grow stronger as vampire ages ie. vulnerability to sunlight, weakness to crossing water, etc...

Crossing Water-  In some myths vampires cannot cross running water without their coffins that contain soil from their native land. This proves to be untrue.  
 
This text above appears normal when looking at my profile page but when i try to simply highlight words like "Shape Shifting" orFlight and save them they reappear bold in the entire sentence 
This effect/bug/glitch also appears when I try to copy/paste any work over
 
 
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