Thunderstone

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Today is was my 23rd birthday. I gotta say I was expectig alot a present, a beer, hell maybe even get lucky but not a bullet to the head. And certainly not from my best friend gotta say thats one hell of migrane thats gonna  leave. I woke up a few hours later in a place you could call between life and death some people call it purgitory I call it hell. First thing I notice there are two of me and one me's got a bullet lodge in the frontal lobe of his skull. Suddenly I remember it, every second of it like movie flashing in my mind. Then like a lightbulb in my brain I realize CRAP! Im dead I start panicking(hey what would you do if you found out your dead) I panic and think to myself I cant be dead if my soul's inside my body so cross the river to my shock i dont feel the water touching my jacket/self and try  to "jump into" if you  can call it that into my body. Bad move! Suddenly I start to feel my fingers then my hands then arms feel cold and numb like my soul was dying having no other option I let go of my body. Shit Im stuck out here with no body and no way to the "other side". About that what happened I was teaching bible classes on sundays wheres god when you need him. Christ........ One other thing I noticed why is it so dead quiet and silent I run back up the rivene and start hicking down the 4 mile road that leads into main town, hey Im ghost got nothing better to do. Anyway as Im pitching this hike from hell I stop and stare and notce no cars, no people. What happened suddenly I die and so does the town. God I must be one hell of an important person as I kid to myself. But seriously nothing on no street lights no cars no people, not even a sound or wisle. Like a town without the town part to it. Even Mels diner NO! not Mels diner this place really is hell. Might as well check the windows to see the damage done. (flickering lights/noise) WTH is goin on people noises (flickr electrical zaps) No wait come back what the hell was that Aaaaaggghhhh!!! whats goin on feels like my fricking skulls turning to a radio Aaaaagggh turn it.....DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally the noise is gone no more wispers  in my head. I gasped for air iif ghost even breath air. God what was that, crud.... think i sunk myself into even deeper hole I came into town to find people  and I think i turned of radio life. Just my luck..... Wait! If i can see flickers of people and hear people(boy can I hear people) maybe....... ROSE!!! Rushing as fast as I could i headed down Kane road a seven mile road not even realizing the time if there were such a thing in this place. As I approached Rose's house I began praying(funny I know a ghost that prays) God can you hear me its me Trent I could use some help right now,please let me for her. Who knows maybe in all this madness theres a god up there watching it all like a game of foot balll. Sure enough I saw, I saw here cry over hearing about my death from the police officers and I saw her question Warren where were you when this happened. I thought to myself finally Im gonna get the justice I deserve. Boy was I wrong....  the police officer explained that they caught the man that mugged them and with Warren's gunshot wound to clarify there was no argument. NO!!!!! You wont cheat me of this!!!!! things took a turn even more south then were it standed when Warren had used this situation to move in on Rose.NO!!!!!!!!!  (the lights began to flicker the room temperature took a sudden change colder , even the TV started acting up all of these inanimate objectts could feel my anger but the two people in this universe that I wanted it to couldnt even tell me from wind. Even though none of the punches connected I threw in at  least 56 finallly to my dismay I realized there was no way in hell he was gonna receive the  justice he had coming to him. And as for Rose I cried and touched her hair and  cheek for the last time good bye love. I headed out returning to the site of my death determined to prove that you can kill whats already dead......

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