EmmaFrost says:
"I've just fixed all this for ya and added some of my own stuff. Being an Emma Frost expert and stuff, hope you don't mind.Also, people need to remember not to add their "own" comments in these pages such as putting some random picture of Emma up and calling it "Sexy." It looks entirely unprofessional.I also deleted some of the images which didn't belong in the specific category, etc.
Post Edited:2007-11-27 22:00:06"
No problem, I don't know a whole lot about Emma (rather, I didn't know much before starting to edit the page). I just saw that the page had one or two paragraphs per section, and found that it was really hard to read. So, I thought I'd split up the paragraphs a bit to make it easier for people that don't know anything about Emma.
Anyway, yeah, an Emma Frost expert is a great help.
When I spread out the text a bit, I found that putting some pictures in made it look much better. But, yeah, the comments could have been much better (and I think they are).
All I was really asking was where the battle took place in the timeline (based on other information in the text), but this is better (at least workload-wise).
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