@aronmorales: yeah

It's good that you recognize the issues; you'll get 'em buffed out in no time.

Thanks once again I was inking those parts and they kinda felt off.

Why, you have definitely improved! My big issues here are the right hand, the left leg and the left arm, but seeing as how you've come along since last time, I'm sure that you'll overcome them.

Keep it up!

@theacidskull: Thanks which one 1st or 2nd?

@aronmorales@yourneighborhoodcomicgeek@press_oblivion: I redrew please call other people to criticise, thanks.

There's a lot of great potential here! I like the energy of the work! Great stuff.

@YourNeighborhoodComicGeek: Thanks dude

It's pretty good for a beginner.

Like Aronmorales said, the proportions are a bit off, and the shading could have some improvement, but it's decent for a start.

You're welcome.

@Aronmorales: Thank you veeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry much.

Proportions are off, mon amoi, but a lot of budding talent.

Keep it up, learn, and let no one discourage you.

Please when you look can you criticise it?