Toxin/Malice: Wrath #2 - (Script)

PREVIOUSLY: Toxin/Malice: Wrath #1 - (Script)

"Genocide" - Rated T+

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Page 1

1.1 Splash Page
X-Phage standing still, the turrets mounted on his shoulders letting loose a barrage of gunfire, as Malice moves Toxin out of the way.

SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA
MALICE: HSS!

Page 2

2.1
X-Phage turning toward them, his arms raised as the blades extend on his arms.

SFX: SHKRT
X-PHAGE: Afraid, are we?

2.2
Toxin and Malice glaring.

Toxin is bulkier and has a symbiotic mouth.

TOXIN: Yeah, RIGHT.

2.3
Toxin grabbing a nearby dumpster.

TOXIN: We’re PETRIFIED!

Page 3

3.1
Toxin tossing the dumpster at X-Phage.

3.2
X-Phage slashes through the dumpster like it was tissue, standing still.

SFX: SHRKKK

3.3
Toxin looking surprised.

3.4
X-Phage rushing at Toxin, blades forward.

X-PHAGE: Do better.

Page 4

4.1
Toxin leapfrogging over X-Phage.

TOXIN: Hrra!

4.2
X-Phage smashing into a brick wall.

SFX: BRKKSHH

4.3
Malice leaning forward and snarling, Toxin at her side.

TOXIN: Who are you?
MALICE: And why did you attack us?!

4.4
X-Phage turning, pieces of rubble falling off of the suit.

X-PHAGE: An agent of the highest form of human authority.
X-PHAGE: Symbiotes are officially no longer welcome.

Page 5

5.1
X-Phage’s turrets letting loose with gunfire again, along with the guns on his underarms (as he aims with his arms).

SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA

5.2
Toxin and Malice both scramble to opposite sides.

X-PHAGE: And you’ve only got YOURSELVES to blame!

5.3
Toxin and Malice are scaling opposite walls.

CAPTION: PATRICK: If this guy really IS from the government, then we should try to reason with him.
CAPTION: GINA: Or knock him out.
CAPTION: PATRICK: My plan’s A. Yours is B. Deal?
CAPTION: GINA: Deal.

Page 6

6.1
Toxin looking down from his wall at X-Phage.

TOXIN: It’s not OUR fault!

6.2
Malice looking down from her wall at X-Phage.

MALICE: WE keep getting attacked!

6.3
X-Phage flies up to Malice, fist pulled back, blade still extended.

X-PHAGE: Tough!
CAPTION: GINA: Looks like Plan B.

Page 7

7.1
Toxin throwing his hand out and firing webbing.

SFX: THWIP
TOXIN: DON’T TOUCH HER!

7.2
X-Phage’s entire left side covered with webbing, yanking him back slightly before he can touch Malice.

MALICE: Ha!
X-PHAGE: HRRG

7.3
Toxin brutally kicking X-Phage’s webbed side.

SFX: WHAM
TOXIN: LOVE YOU
TOXIN: HONEY

7.4
Toxin and X-Phage falling down through the air, Malice looking down at them.

MALICE: Aww.

Page 8

8.1
Toxin and X-Phage smashing into the ground.

SFX: WHUKRSHH

8.2
Toxin’s throat grabbed by X-Phage, who is starting to stand from falling.

X-PHAGE: Cute.
TOXIN: GHK

8.3
Malice tackling into X-Phage, Toxin falling out of the way.

MALICE: DON’T TOUCH HIM!

Page 9

9.1
X-Phage tossing Malice aside like a ragdoll.

MALICE: HSSRR

9.2
X-Phage aiming up his arms and letting loose gunfire.

SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA
X-PHAGE: HRRAAAAAA!!!!

9.3
Malice on the ground, still getting up from being tossed.

MALICE: Ngh

9.4
Malice looking up.

CAPTION: GINA: Oh, Pat.

Page 10

10.1
Toxin standing in front of her, taking the gunfire.

TOXIN: GRRR
CAPTION: PATRICK: Don’t mention it.

10.2
Toxin glaring at X-Phage, who keeps firing.

X-PHAGE: DAMMIT!
SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA

10.3
Toxin is slowly walking toward X-Phage.


SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA
X-PHAGE: VENOM would have fallen over by now!

10.4
Toxin walking closer.

TOXIN: Guess you didn’t get the memo.
SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA

10.5
Toxin pulling his fist back.

SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA

Page 11

11.1 Splash Page
Toxin giving X-Phage a big punch to the chest, visibly making a large dent in the armor, with cracks forming.

SFX: WHAM
TOXIN: WE AREN’T VENOM!

Page 12

12.1
X-Phage stumbling backward, the gunfire stopped.

SFX: CLIK CLIK CLIK
X-PHAGE: HRGH

12.2
X-Phage facing Toxin.

TOXIN: Out of ammo?

12.3
X-Phage raising his arms in a threatening stance, showing off the blades.

X-PHAGE: Don’t need it! Sonic blades.

12.4
Toxin’s eyes.

X-PHAGE: Just like Blademaster’s.
X-PHAGE: But you’ll lose more than an arm this time.

Page 13

13.1
X-Phage running at Toxin.

X-PHAGE: GET READY!

13.2
Toxin trying to jump over X-Phage, but X-Phage’s blade slashes Toxin across the chest.

SFX: SHKK
COMMAND: Smith.

13.3
X-Phage turning and looking at Toxin, who has fallen to the ground.

X-PHAGE: Here.
TOXIN: Ngh…
COMMAND: Return to base.
X-PHAGE: WHAT?! But—but sir!

13.4
Malice on X-Phage’s other side, sneaking up on him.

COMMAND: You weren’t meant to terminate them here.
COMMAND: This was just to put the FEAR into them.
COMMAND: To get the idea in their heads. To let their brains marinate in the thoughts of dying together at your hand.
COMMAND: Return. To. Base.

Page 14

14.1
X-Phage soaring up into the air, just as Malice tackles the empty spot where he was.

MALICE: HSS!!!

14.2
Toxin helping Malice up, holding the wound on his chest, the both of them glaring up.

MALICE: Pat! Are you-
TOXIN: Where’s he going?
MALICE: Patrick! Are you okay?!
TOXIN: Ghr… almost.

14.3
Toxin looking up into the air, there’s nothing there anymore.

TOXIN: He vanished.
MALICE: They’ve…never been able to do THAT before.

Page 15

15.1
Toxin looking at Malice.

Toxin has returned to his calm form by this time.

TOXIN: Are you okay?

15.2
Toxin and Malice’s human faces are starting to show.

GINA: Yeah.
GINA: You?

15.3
Patrick and Gina looking at each other.

PATRICK: I will be.
PATRICK: …We really ARE survivors, aren’t we?

15.4
Patrick and Gina looking outward.

GINA: Damn right we are.

Page 16

16.1
Gina and Patrick crawling up the wall they were on before.

Their hands covered in symbiote, slowly morphing up their arms.

Patrick’s chest is covered, the wound is mostly gone.

PATRICK: We’ve gotta move, though.

16.2
Toxin and Malice, fully covered by symbiote, crawling up and over the ledge.

MALICE: Since we don’t have time to spare.

16.3
Toxin and Malice standing next to each other.

Toxin’s wound has healed fully.

TOXIN: Those machines aren’t gonna tear themselves apart, after all.

Page 17

17.1 Splash Page
Toxin and Malice are looking out on the skyline, Management Control Inc. is visible.

Management Control Inc is a black, 20-ish story tall building.

Page 18

18.1
Underboss’s office. His desk is covered in shadow, so we can’t see him. Slaughter, wearing his mask, is standing next to him.

SLAUGHTER: Hobgoblin’s left the building.

18.2
Slaughter hitting a red button on the wall, that a secret wooden panel has slid back to reveal.

UNDERBOSS: Seal the important sectors.
SFX: BEET

18.3
Toxin and Malice webslinging toward the building.

UNDERBOSS: Big Boss is going to be so pleased.

Page 19 and 20

19/20.1 Splash Page
The underground bunker, full of Iron Wraiths.

They’re all activating. LMD Control standing in the center, holding the red button that’s hanging down.

Each Iron Wraith has the same design as they did Iron Symbiotes, except without any symbiote and they are all colored gray.

IRON WRAITHS: UNIT ACTIVATED
IRON WRAITHS: UNIT ACTIVATED
IRON WRAITHS: UNIT ACTIVATED
IRON WRAITHS: UNIT ACTIVATED
IRON WRAITHS: UNIT ACTIVATED
IRON WRAITHS: UNIT ACTIVATED

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11 Comments
11 Comments
Posted by primepower53

AWESOMESAUCE! KEEP IT UP!!!

Posted by CapFanboy

@InnerVenom123: Woah! Nice

Posted by InnerVenom123

@primepower53: @CapFanboy: Thanks very much!

Edited by Project_Worm

Another great piece!

Posted by InnerVenom123

@Project_Worm: Thank you!

Posted by The Impersonator

hic!....Nice!....hic! =P

Posted by InnerVenom123

@The Impersonator said:

hic!....Nice!....hic! =P

Thanks. =P

Posted by The Impersonator

@InnerVenom123: You're welcome! =P

Posted by KisserNe

Fantastic!

I loved the last part where the machines are all activating and how it's all some massive plot.

Friggin' sweetness!

Posted by Deranged Midget

I got mad chills when Toxin was just tanking the bullets to his chest and just lays out X-PHAGE!

Posted by FadeToBlackBolt

Another great entry.  
 
Something that I've really come to like is your "1.1, 2.5, 3.4" way of writing page and panels. It really makes it all flow much nicer, especially with the fast pace of your issues.  
 
The InnerVerse123 hits another out of the park.