Pointless Dribble From My Mind...

-FOR THE MATURE-

Out of nowhere, or more likely in from somewhere, comes a thought rushing. So pure and brittle to the bent egos of the world that it can’t be of ours. I was writing with a right hand but something told me to use the left and out it slipped when I obeyed, a spiritual geyser of love and harmony in staunch drift-less pursuit of purpose. Purpose comes from purpose with no prime mover or director pulling pale strings.

“You’re here because you wanted to be here “she said with a voice so soft I could hear everything.

This put me at ease.

“Your safe here” her daughter said with those eyes so deep I could see the reflection of everything.

This too put me at ease.

Ease is a funny word, but then again all words are funny.

In an unmistakable ease I now wear my pointy ears proudly and carry a bow in defense of nature. Just the bow, no arrows are needed when protecting something so innocent and pristine. For a right-handed person this is coming out in a very left-hand manner.

What is this, but simply what it is. When your head has been against the wall your entire life it’s easy to forget. Wait, I’m losing track of purpose.

This thought I was speaking of though, the one of pure origin which is too good for digital paper and ink, came to me like lightning comes to dead trees, and surely as they go up in flames so does the mind. So with a head full of fire I took to a pen. Jotted what I could and meditated on the rest.

Blew my nose and tried to light a cigarette against the winds desire. I know what you’re thinking how a self-proclaimed protector cannot protect the nature of himself or herself (I prefer to write with an androgynous state of mind). The wind disagrees with my self-deprecating choice again and wins this time, throwing the smoldering cherry onto my shoe and eventually out.

Here calls my wo/man (there’s that androgynous mind set peaking out again, it’s okay little one). With the shamelessness of a cat I slink in my chair and light another cigarette under my shirt out of the winds reach. I burn my chest. My chest burns. My mind burns. The latter I care for the former only feels good for a moment. Now here’s the question of how to end things. If things end is their importance in beginnings? I hope so. I know so. My mind’s a twisted place with many chasms, subject to spasms, and a similar wish-wash of an automobiles wipers against a…Here comes my wo/man.

I sit on the porch of all porches, watching cyclist, listening to alarms that blanket the air with notes of impending accidents to come, talking to a friend from my drug years. Pushing away the pusherman was never that hard until he was on the lawn begging to be let in. My fix now: caffeine. All wide eyed like one who sniffed too much glue? With hornets around my ankles and horns around my head I drift with one eye closed to the world, one eye open to the sound.

What is it to make love? Maybe this little death I feel is that. When he/she’s not here I feel nothing but the wind. Of the four elements I would be wind, or more likely air, never truly contained by its container, never falsely imprisoned in the lungs for longer than a moment.

Out of coffee and longing for more I hesitate for my hands already shake with each new day. Shaking hands with one is bitter especially when your palm contains more taste buds than your tongue.

“I’ve missed your tongue” she said as I gave it to her generously.

“I’ve missed giving you my tongue” I thought as I spell my name on her clitoris, marking it forever mine

This is my land as much as yours but I feel I carry the weight of the dumb earth heavier than any boulder Sisyphus ever pushed or watched tumble down.

Two hours stand between us, an even number, evenly numb as the shadows ache forth and grip their surroundings with leisure and penance. Where there was two riders only one remains, but I see the laggard coming now, slow and softly the physically weaker of the sexes but the mentally and emotionally stronger.

Every word I know I attempt to use wrongly simply to know its purpose truer, and here we come back to purpose. Is it there without deciding for one’s self? A van passes and ages before me, from the first decade I knew until the present one. Does purpose come with age? Does age come with purpose? The van passes again and this time there is no change in it.

Today I have nothing but questions. Tomorrow I’ll have nothing but answers.

“Check” we told each other.

“Checkmate” I imagine we both thought

That golden ball we pine after, that luminous sphere, which pushes us and pulls us, is nowhere to be seen. I know this story. I know this song. I’ll write both another day though for they will be important later in this. What is this you make ask? This is everything, and everything is nothing. It took a cat to teach me that. It’s amazing what you can learn without words and its amazing words can learn without you.

I love the reversal but as surely as a coin has two sides we forget the edge and slowly the edge will forget us.

I asked my grandpa how he made love stay. It was interesting that a man of few words who prefers solitude to verboseness rambled on incoherently until he came to say “Don’t expect too much, don’t expect too little, find a happy fulcrum and cherish it”.

I asked my grandma how she made love stay. It was interesting that a woman of so many words whose inner monologues must resemble something of Finnegan’s Wake had only one word to say “respect”.

She sits across from me, fixing her makeup, rearranging her freckles, dotting her eyes. I don’t know the terminology behind beautification so, mascara this and rogue that and I imagine it’s all done. It doesn’t take long but I figure when you’re that beautiful and perfect nothing does. She asks to hear my favorite jazz song, Wagon Wheels by Sonny Rollins, I oblige. The sax relaxes and the drums skip, we say nothing. Nothing can be said after one makes such true love to another. I imagine the rest of my life with her in this moment.

“I like this” she says in reference to the music

“I love this” I think in reference to the moment.

The spray of an aerosol hair care product fills the air and replaces the smell of a connection made. What is it about her that makes me write?

Merlot stained teeth gnaw the end of a spent cigarette. There is no connection at the present moment. No phone lines, no Ethernet, no ghost in my machine. All there is now, a chilling wind, a broken pretzel, and a lonely man. Still I’m happy; I take a razor to my wrist and rather than blood, out come kittens and puppies. I play with them till I pass out.

Suddenly I’m awake again and have an inclination towards dropping the androgynous bit for now; I may come back to it later though. Yes, I possess a penis, and intend to use it well. As of lately I’ve used it less to fuck and more to make love, or my version of it, which still has a pinch of fucking dashed in at the end. This woman, this lady, this tall glass of water with a sunflower dropped in, has impregnated me with hope, with reason.

My pinky rests on the backspace key although I’m not sure when or how to use it. Even a misspelled word slips by here and then. I coddle them with my mind; these little bastardized expressions are mine truly. Highlighted by jagged red lines they have a tinge of honesty about them. I still know what I mean but for your sake I correct them (whomever the hell might be reading). I know I’m reading. If I write poorly who will understand and will they think less of me. Will you think less of me? I write wrongs to right wrongs.

Feeling heavy with a meal under my belt, literally, I feel it right beneath the buckle; I sway in a rocker and ease smoke into my lungs. The cat sleeps near my feet as I think of the mistakes I’ve made in my life. What are mistakes that you have yet to make? What happens when you’ve deemed something a mistake and realize this event you’ve addressed as a mishap since its inception into the time line (which is a circle by the way) had its purpose?

Onwards we go, forth back and fro. Can you tell yet I hate rhymes? I was told once if you were going to rhyme; do it throughout a piece (this might be a piece). I would hate to bore everyone with my failing grasp of the English language, meter, syntax and the sort so I refrain. Let’s just forget that first sentence. Let us start anew.

The phone rings. It’s her. I light up like god’s birthday cake with its infinite candles.

Changing gears so hard I drop my mental transmission and realize, the only reason your teeth are still in your mouth is because I’m a good man. You’ve hurt someone I love and now I intend on hurting you.

I’m sweating now; I’m sweating out the impurities of my existence. The heat is almost unbearable. The bitter apple in my mouth taste ever sweeter. I’ve got to stop letting my mind roam as I write, I should be more concrete…Fuck that, this is how I write and I won’t help you understand. Pinkeye tulips turned in the wind, read backwards as love. There is nothing but me here, fingers flying, and a mind on fire.

I’m not the traditional cowboy but I like to still consider myself one. A cowboy in that I roam. Wait, maybe that’s an outlaw, an outlaw in that I roam.

Let me know how you feel about this. questions? answers?

22 Comments
22 Comments
Posted by Illuminatus

Reminds me of Dark Tower fan-fic. It's well written though. 

Posted by DoomDoomDoom

@Illuminatus: Thank you!

Posted by Hawkeye446

*bookmarks and "subscribes"*

This is... This is really excellent. Normally when I adore something over the Internet I will litter my comment with Capitals and positive words like "awesome" and "fantastic", but this surpasses that, it deserves better.

A truly interesting type of writing, indeed. The descriptions, symbolism and style here are all monumental. I'm drawn to each word, each lyric you pose. It's stupendous.

I want more, and I will undoubtedly read this many more times. You've used the English language in such a way, shown off it's depth and possible uses. I'm indebted to your writing, sir.

Posted by minigunman123

I had little idea of what was going on, but it has some interesting bits, I liked especially how you're androgynous throughout it so that the reader can turn it into their own fantasy or story or thought, if they want to. That's actually very interesting, and while I'm not sure you intended it to work like that, I really appreciate that kind of writing, to appeal to both genders.

I still have no idea what the writing was overall about though, lol.

Posted by DoomDoomDoom

@Hawkeye446: I don't even know where to begin to describe the happiness you've brought me with this comment. Thank you so much for simply reading it let alone the grandeur in your words.

If I ever publish this the dedication will be "to the Hawk and its flight cross my path"

Any parts you don't like? or that drag along to slowly? anything that stands out or anything that pales to the rest?

you've rekindled my passion for writing my friend.

Posted by DoomDoomDoom

@minigunman123: Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed the androgynous bit, one of my favorite parts about this piece by far. I do intend to leave neither sex out in my writing.

Don't worry if your lost in the overall piece, this was very much a stream-of-conscious style which has many sharp turns and switchbacks which even in my own re-readings of I have trouble with. Any questions about the writing I would be glad to answer by the way.

Posted by Hawkeye446

@DoomDoomDoom said:

@Hawkeye446: I don't even know where to begin to describe the happiness you've brought me with this comment. Thank you so much for simply reading it let alone the grandeur in your words.

If I ever publish this the dedication will be "to the Hawk and its flight cross my path"

Any parts you don't like? or that drag along to slowly? anything that stands out or anything that pales to the rest?

you've rekindled my passion for writing my friend.

No problem. I'm glad I have had such an impact with my words ;) This style is one you don't see often, that free-flowing thought that poses a narrative. I'm a great fan, and I have never seen it splayed like this.

Again, I'm touched!

Hmm, that I don't like? No. The essence of the writing is whole. It's not something that others can critique asides from trying to understand it, but even then it's somewhat open to interpretation. I enjoyed the use of words deemed "mature". They were spent wisely and held real meaning. I can't stress that enough. Each word held it's place, and they weren't used for a reaction, but for depth and care instead, which is the greatest use.

Drag slowly? Hm, no. Definitely not. It goes from place to place and comes back to the effervescent relationship that is really the core of the piece. It's surrounded by whimsy and myriad of other expressions which bring extended meaning to said core, so I think it's perfect, unique and stunning.

I couldn't be happier with an achievement like that (referring to both the writing of the piece and my rekindling of your passion).

Posted by DoomDoomDoom

@Hawkeye446: -dumbstruck by comment-

Posted by minigunman123

I found out the problem, I had only skimmed it before. I read through it more fully, and I must say, it's actually quite engaging. A bit arbitrary but very intriguing.

Edited by DoomDoomDoom

@minigunman123: Arbitrary in the fact that I jump around a lot? I wanted to engage! I wanted to make the reader feel like they had taken the time, they sat on the porch, they made love...you know?

Posted by Glitch_Spawn

I cannot even put into words how I feel about this...

@DoomDoomDoom said:

Pinkeye tulips turned in the wind, read backwards as love. There is nothing but me here, fingers flying, and a mind on fire.

You are a fantastic writer! That comment does not do you justice either...

I...am just blown away!

Posted by DoomDoomDoom

@Glitch_Spawn: Thank you! I'm glad you love that, my favorite sentence and basically the sentence written most from passion.

Posted by Hawkeye446

@DoomDoomDoom said:

@Hawkeye446: -dumbstruck by comment-

:)

@Glitch_Spawn said:

I cannot even put into words how I feel about this...

@DoomDoomDoom said:

Pinkeye tulips turned in the wind, read backwards as love. There is nothing but me here, fingers flying, and a mind on fire.

You are a fantastic writer! That comment does not do you justice either...

I...am just blown away!

I know right!

Posted by aedinbv

I am at a loss for words... I am so grateful for you.

Posted by DoomDoomDoom

@aedinbv: Thank you, my muse.

Posted by Glitch_Spawn

@aedinbv said:

I am at a loss for words... I am so grateful for you.

WELCOME TO CV!

Posted by DoomDoomDoom

I never do this so forgive me -shameless self-bump

Posted by Glitch_Spawn

Bumpty, bumpty bumpty

Posted by DoomDoomDoom

@Glitch_Spawn said:

Bumpty, bumpty bumpty

Why thank you good sir!

Posted by Nelomaxwell

You're right words are funny. And when left handed thought comes to a right handed person you got some cross talk going.

I loved this. It impacted my heart like a stone hitting a ponds surface. Keep writing please.

Posted by No_Name_

How does this not have more views? If I could write like this...if only. The abstract words and raw emotion permeate through, completely taking over the reader. There's no compliment I can give that can even do this piece justice. I hope you are published. If you aren't, you should be.

Posted by DoomDoomDoom

@Babs: Thank you very much for the kind words, I'm humbled beyond measure! I haven't written much lately outside of exercises and journal work. However, as soon as the ideas come I'll post them. I'm not published and I've never really looked into it but I'm truly considering seeking out a formal education in writing. I say formal simply because in my mind the act of reading informally teaches one to write.

Thanks again!