@batwatch: It was decent (like 7/10 imo) but it felt like they were jamming 2 movies into one. The last third of the film really could have been stretched out to be it's own sequel and the first 2/3rds of the film could've played out the same, with more character development given to luke cage and Dick/Damian's relationship.
It's basically space at it's largest scale and it has it's own consciousness. All of existence as we know it is a tiny smudge on its ever expanding body of nothingness.
Quoted for truth! I'm not a teenager anymore but millennials in general get way too much criticism for being themselves. Nostalgia for the 80's and 90's is great but that doesn't give adults an excuse to crap on every new idea they don't like.
@joygirl: So our heroes bullied a mutant into doing their bidding...Hooray? Sarcasm aside, there was a lot to like about this. The fight highlighted Kitty's leadership, made the team look inexperienced whilst competent without any mary sue moments. The downside, was that this fight scene made Miss Marvel the odd person out, not leaving her with much to do when the momentum shifted in the Guardians' favor.
@jkutz: Apologies for the late response. I like the concept of batman working with heroes and villains and possibly having a more morally grey status than his standard version. My only real criticism is the info dump Gordon gives around the center of the chapter. You did a great job of building up suspense for the mysterious character who's name spread terror throughout the group, but you could have spread out the backstory to give it more weight. I would have done that either by a flashback or by spreading the conversation around the room using Ivy as a Watson foil. Overall, it was interesting and I'm looking forward to reading more of this. I'll add this to the archive later on in the week.
Edit: By the way, "warehouse" and "Falcone" are misspelled.
@tommythehitman: It's might come in handy for things like titling, and if more prolific users want to sync their stories together, or if group members wish to collaborate on one or multiple stories.
The Ex-man joke was funny with Angela and the Venom mind is also interesting. It's nice to see that you're already discerning separate voices for the crew.
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