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@wildvine: ah humans...the greatest d**ch*b*gs of the animal kingdom.

@impurestcheese: aww...picture[4] looks so sad.

enough to keep things interesting. ;)

Ha!

Nope. Never saw the point of them.

Ferrell curbstomps

This is almost spite.

I think I'm thinking of the second time, when they actually try Stan's way and the others point out that "this was even gayer than the pile." Either way you know what I mean.

@The_Deathstroker: I read it and it was pretty good. I understand why one guard was being a d*ck (the one who lost his brother) but the other ones seemed senselessly cruel. Also the formatting seems a bit off. Like how it starts with the forest location in bold, even though the story starts with a flashback. They should be in the forest after the flashback not during the flashback, otherwise the readers would be confused when or where the actual story was occuring. Like @cbishop mentioned there were also a few quoting issues but that's just nitpicking. Overall, this chapter was effective at explaining the character's transformation, which is the main point, so good job!