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Nightmares and dream scapes part 2

I did this a few years back and it worked out awesomely for me as a writer, and I thought I was done with it but alas for me my mind never sleeps even when I do. I have been having a set of recurring dreams, almost movies you could say every night for the past six months. Sometimes its the same scenario other times its another set. Here are the ideas or outlines for these dreams. I cant make a decision as to what one I need to write. Their are five in total tonight will be showing you the first, making a post for each over the next week or so.

Tumble Down The Hole

"I'm not crazy, I cant express this enough. But someones got to explain to me why these things are happening to me, so thats where you come in." Charles sits at the opposite chair across a small room, a desk beside him lined with mugs and an ashtray. In front of him sits a man obviously a Doctor with a pad of paper and he asks "What is it do you need explaining Charles?" Charles smiles trembling as he pulls out a cigarette from his shirt pocket, pulling the ashtray towards him he lights it.

He looks down to his ashy hands and smiles " Today I am black, wonder what color in the rainbow I will be tomorrow?" The doctor looks at him curious, and jots down his words "Every night I go to sleep I have the same dream, I am chasing someone. Or maybe hes chasing me, sometimes its kind of hard to make sense, as I am always in some sort of trance. The world spins around me, and men in black are also there. Sometimes they help sometimes they are shooting at me, it changes each time." Taking a hit from his cigarette he continues "I go to sleep as one person and I wake up as someone else entirely, sometimes I am married others not. Each time its either slightly different or completely different, yesterday I was a short and fat asian child." Shifting in his seat he looks over to the doctor and points.

"Everytime I am awake I come here, to the same office and meet the same doctor. You never change, and neither does your final analysis, I am finding that everytime I get closer to that man in my dream more and more becomes a little bit more understandable." The doctor moves in his seat and reaches into his pocket pulling out a small pocket watch and clicking something on the side, a wave almost seems to emit from the watch as he does it. Charles looks to him confused and terrified "You've never done that before?!" Stumbling out of his seat he knocks it over as he races to the back of the office.

The doctor stands from his chair and slowly pulls away a wig from the top of his head, long blonde hair unfolds down to the middle of his back, and he pulls away his face revealing a beautiful woman. She pulls out a small gun and aims it at Charles "Dont worry sugah, your not going crazy, we just cant keep you in one place for long. This time we found you, and you can continue your mission now take a deep breath, this might hurt a little bit." She fires the gun and Charles world goes black.

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well everyone even with facebook it seems Small Packages is the clear winner awesome cuz ive been dreaming about it like crazy

Small Packages 12

Tumble 6

Anamorphic 1

will start the fanfic once i can get to a real computer and copy and paste what i have here and continue on from there.

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@ginju:

Glad to have you back :) I'll check it out later

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@kiddevil:

thanks man appreciate it, put it on FB to see who will come and read it. Thanks for the vote

Tumble: Two Votes

Packages: Five Votes

giving the voting until friday or saturday so people come on. Get some of your buddies to come an read the stories.

Also waiting to see who messages on me on fb, or comments in the post on FB to see how this goes

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replied to you guys so u can check out the stories

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Damn never remembered to vote for the first one. They're all cool man

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Small Packages: Five votes

Tumble: One

thanks guys

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@darkchild: I'm torn between the package one and the tumble one.

Were you a female in packages?

It's tough. The ending to the first one was my favorite, but overall the package one.

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@auralaria:

hell if i know but already dont like him

while your here how about reading my stories an voting on which one u like the most

@mercy_ hahaha thought ud like that one

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Who's this nutball?

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Small brain suits u more. =/ I wish ur parents would ground u from the PC.

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Small Packages!

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First one for me, third is close though

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@ginju: You know, the one with the thing and the whatever it was. That one.

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I vote for that one.

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BUMP!!!! More votes people, only till wedsday then im going to start writing the winner. And then as well another dream/story been having in my head since i decided only to write three stories here

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@pyrogram:

awesome thanks for the vote looks like Small Packages may be the one i do if no one else votes for any others.

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@614azrael thats fine bro appreciate you taking time to tell me. come back soon man miss ya

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I probably wont vote not around much or readIng much. when I A. have an actual computer/laptop to use, and B. get my own Ideas down then Il be back. Sorry (Its a kInda sorta hIatus)

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@grift3r:

awesome thank you.

Small Packages: 2 votes

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@darkchild: I can't help it! I'm indecisive about these sorta things. I guess I'll go with the third post.

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awww come on man ur killin me lol, if u HAD to choose which

@eagle_of_the_east yep members are aztek, gambler, mercy, nighthunter, hawk, prima, nova and many others been a cult for years. devotees of my writings lol

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@darkchild: I'm digging the first and third post. Can't choose between either one man.

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@eagle_of_the_east thanks for casting your vote. Now to see what others vote for.

Appreciate you reading the others too.

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@ginju: I like the very last one the best. It had the most dramatic tension.

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@surkit: @anthony_stark: @closure: @quintus_knightfall: @amaranth_strix:

@ginju said:

@nerx: @anthony_stark: @closure: @quintus_knightfall: @amaranth_strix:

@mercy_@grift3r@surkit@614azrael@shadowknight666

alright guys this is all Im doing at the moment. Now its up to you guys, these are the best of the five of the stories I got in my mind at the moment. Other two Ill do later maybe.

Now its up to you to vote and pick which one you want me to write more about. Bring more people in on this, gonna give it a week then tally the votes.

If anyone remembers the Guido name I love you, your a past reader of my stories and yes their will be some ties to my old Sinner series.

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bump!

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@ginju: I got no mind to read this :P I'll check it out when I relax after work tonight

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@nerx: @anthony_stark: @closure: @quintus_knightfall: @amaranth_strix:

@mercy_@grift3r@surkit@614azrael@shadowknight666

alright guys this is all Im doing at the moment. Now its up to you guys, these are the best of the five of the stories I got in my mind at the moment. Other two Ill do later maybe.

Now its up to you to vote and pick which one you want me to write more about. Bring more people in on this, gonna give it a week then tally the votes.

If anyone remembers the Guido name I love you, your a past reader of my stories and yes their will be some ties to my old Sinner series.

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I can smell a mixture of blood and piss at my knees, even the burlap bag over my head gave of a horrible aroma. I tried keeping my retching back, holding my mothers hand I squeeze it tight with my tiny frail hands. I can hear two men arguing while others stood behind us.

"An you brought the little one why? One man asked, another pulled the small bit of hair hanging from the bag and pulled me close and then pushing me forward "You would rather me to leave her there so that she could identified me?" The other man groaned loud "If you did this like I told you and not get sloshed like a bloody fool, you wouldnt have had to worry about a child. We dont deal with children, I already know I am going to hell but I dont need to be in the same cage as pedophiles." He breathed deep and sighed before continuing, take her in the back and cut her tongue out. Then for good measure knock her teeth out, take the mother to room fifteen." The second man pries my hand away from my mothers and I hear her scream for a moment before she is silenced, I hear a gun slap her across the jaw.

They drag me far away and then they remove the bag, the man before me was sickly and disgusting his tongue almost hanging from his mouth "Come on sweet thing lets see that tongue of yours huh? Maybe I could put it to use before cutting it out." Even though I was eight I knew full well he intended so I clamped my mouth shut. He reached out quickly grabbing my jaw, I smile and spit in his face. He slaps me and I go limp, he drags me to a kneeling position. I take a deep breath feeling blood filling my mouth "I know I'm going to lose it soon, but least allow me to ask a question." He plays with the scissors in his hand and gestures for me to go on "What happens to the women when your done with them?' He smiles and kneels down to my eye level "When that sweet ass of a mother is all dried up, and if she survived the tortures that long we dump em. I could tell you everything, because I know that you wont be able to tell anyone anything soon." Grabbing my jaw he tries to pry my mouth open, but I just smile.

Lifting my body up quickly I kick him with everything I have, square in the balls I hear something pop as my foot hits. Dumb ass didnt tie my hands, so I grabb the scissors and slam them in the bottom of his jaw. Smiling I whisper "When Daddy finds out, hes going to kill you all." With that I grabb his phone and run out of the room, cutting the two guards outside the room at the ankles. I run as fast as I can, I know I wont be able to help mom at the moment, but soon I will have some help. Dialing I reach one of Daddy's guards "Get me Don, its Jasmine you idiot, NOW get me my father." The guard fumbles with the phone before handing it to my father "Daddy, they got mom, I'm on my way out, I have no idea where I am. Please Daddy help me!!"

Inside a High End Mansion

I hang up the phone and walk over to my china cabinet, removing a small plate I push a button. Hadn't opened this in sexteen years, last time it was a Mob War more infact an International Mob War. I was twenty years old and my father gave me all of this before he died, I was the heir to the Guido family fortune. After the war there was a piece, and soon the streets will ring with gunfire...

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@amaranth_strix:

thanks i had the dream last night lol was planning on either dropping it or waiting to do it as the fifth story. but my brain had other ideas

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Anamorphic

The wind slaps me in the face as I duck and weave around the trees, Jean and Maggy are on either side of me both panted as hard as I was. I looked back only to see a tree burst splinters hitting me in the face as a bullet slams into it. Jean screams "Quit looking back dumbass and run, turn already your the one whose got speed on his side." Jean was trying hard to keep pace with us, his Ox mid-form was really making it hard to keep up with us. Maggy on the other hand was trying hard to keep at our pace. Her rabbit form was a hell of a lot faster than us at the moment.

I was a cheetah but at the given moment I couldnt even partially transform like the others. So I was human for the first time in my sixteen years of being alive, grown in a lab I never saw the outside in its entirety. Now we were on our way to be free, the others had taken off in different directions that us. I had hoped they made it out, but soon we all would be given a choice that would mean life or death.

As the trees disappeared a cliff was coming into sight, and one of us would sink like a rock once we hit the water. We stood at the edge of the cliff staring at what could easily be our deaths, as we looked back the Agents were right there. Guns and leashes in hand, lowering there guns they spread out so Doc could come into view. "Geoff, Maggy Jean come on children this little trip has gone on long enough. You know where you belong..." I stared at the man who had tortured us for so long and all I wanted to do was tear out his throat and chew on it. I hissed at him "We will never be experiments again Doc, this is the end." turning quickly I jumped, the air against my face I looked back and saw Jean and Maggy follow as gun fire went over head. As I looked down the water was getting closer and closer.

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@darkchild: lol it doesnt really work like that anymore. You just have to pick a location thread and jump in these days ;)

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@darkchild: Stop writing fan-fics and rp with us :P

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Sure blame your crazy on antibiotics ;)

Good sh!t though

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@darkchild: Antibiotices always give me crazy dreams too.

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Nice! Thanks for linking me!

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