Absolutely a fun read through :]
The Pizza conflict made me laugh hard cause I've witnessed you and War Killer arguing over that. hahaha
Also, you are totally right. I could for sure see early days CPG in her as well. Girl used to have zero idea with what the hell she wanted to do, and had problems with her Father as well. She also has her face neck deep into electronics :P haha
Eclipse always makes me feel bittersweet, cause him just passing on the Eclipse name like that makes me wanna get a little emotional cause he's always such a sweet dude.
I'm totally excited to see more of her though, and to see your writing talent expand with you writing your first female character!!
Now for me to not be lazy, and write some blog posts :P You're such a good role model :P