@gordyman: This character definitely seems too powerful, and the personality traits are in conflict with each other. "An effective leader, strategist and tactician," who "often acts on impulse and is extremely psychotic, showing signs of Bipolar disorder and megalomania?" You're simply not going to see all that in one person. The character that comes in and wipes the floor with everyone right off the bat simply isn't believable. And Hope- the current possibly-all-powerful mutant- falling in love with him? Seems even less likely. This definitely needs work.