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#1 Posted by cbishop (8186 posts) - - Show Bio

From 3.5 years ago, I was really enjoying this until the Marvel characters crept in. It did lend some perspective to the character, but I was enjoying this as an original character. Once the Marvel elements were introduced, the new character (TJ) suffered the Big Two curse, and suddenly seemed like one of those new characters that can never be more than a wannabe, because of the stars of the last eighty years. Would have really liked to have seen more of the original concept.

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#2 Posted by cbishop (8186 posts) - - Show Bio

Bumping from over 4 years ago, just for the awesome picture. :D

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#3 Edited by cbishop (8186 posts) - - Show Bio

@decoy_elite: This is great. Especially his tagline:

“The name is Afro Man and I’ve got more afro than you can understand!”

Awesome. :)

@batkevin74; @joshmightbe: This is from nearly 4 years ago...if Decoy Elite is amiable to the idea, I'm lobbying for Afro Man to make a cameo in A.A.R.S.S. :)

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#4 Posted by cbishop (8186 posts) - - Show Bio

I realize this is nearly five years old, but hey, I just read it, so now it's in my FF Long Box. :)

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#5 Posted by cbishop (8186 posts) - - Show Bio

I'll have to look at Rumplestiltskin again to find the similarities here, but I like this story. It's now in my FF Long Box. :)

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#6 Edited by cbishop (8186 posts) - - Show Bio

I found this on the 2nd to last page of the FF forum, and now it's in my FF Long Box. Great story. :)

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#7 Posted by cbishop (8186 posts) - - Show Bio

Long start. Curious to see what's next.

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#8 Posted by cbishop (8186 posts) - - Show Bio

This is a good start, but the paragraphs where more than one person is speaking need to be broken up. Only one person's dialogue should be in each paragraph.

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#9 Posted by cbishop (8186 posts) - - Show Bio

I read it. Going to the next chapter. :)

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#10 Posted by cbishop (8186 posts) - - Show Bio

I thought I had commented on this chapter...hm. Anyway, liked it, thanks for calling me out on the 2nd chapter. This is in my FF Long Box. :)

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