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#6 Edited by cbishop (7441 posts) - - Show Bio

@the_poet: Yay! Welcome back...from...wherever you were. :}

Now, cast a vote. ;)

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#7 Edited by cbishop (7441 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74 said:

Very well done everyone. Could easily see all of them in a comic book, but I can only pick one and its selfish to pick my own...

Things I liked:

@cbishop Solomon Grundy & Two-Face!

Things I didn't like:

@cbishop The schumaltzy Xmas ending. It was like a great gymnastic routine and the final flip you kinda stacked it.

Well, honestly, the Christmas ending was because it tis the season, and I was going for a Christmas ghost story - I was going for shmaltzy. :P

The problem was I ran out of time, and couldn't get the whole story in that I wanted. I had to seriously truncate everything after Maria's murder, to get the entry in on time. I want to write the whole story and post it later, and in that version, the "Merry Christmas" ending will make a little more sense, and play out much differently. ;)

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#10 Edited by cbishop (7441 posts) - - Show Bio

@wildvine or @bumpyboo: Can one of you pin this, please? Is @the_poet even still here?

Also, for my vote, I liked the story well enough to write two more scenes for it, so I'm going with @batkevin74's Crossbow Man! :)

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