Oh wow. I'm not all too certain as to whether or not that was the conclusion's intended effect, but...wow. I'm not originally accustomed to this subset of the MU and i don't i ever particularly will be (so i'm not really to point out the missing or misplaced nuances), but this was nice for what it was and i'm hoping to see more some time soon.
Course, the relatively exemplar piece is not without its faults re: grammatical/spelling errors here and there but that's nothing some prior proof-reading can't remedy (looking at YOU AXB). Keep it up, though, and my apologies for seeing this so embarrassingly late.