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#1 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1636 posts) - - Show Bio

@dngn4774: Thank you for the offer to join this group but I shall concentrate on one thing at a time for now.

@batkevin74: Homeless hero with a skin condition, I'll read some more :)

#2 Edited by 4donkeyjohnson (1636 posts) - - Show Bio

@redhood13: You could just leave it as they roared with approval, unless that is totes awks :)

#3 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1636 posts) - - Show Bio

very rough sketch....I will try to ink/color if time allows. Looking forward to how people interpret this one.

Mystique Vs Black Widow

wow

#4 Edited by 4donkeyjohnson (1636 posts) - - Show Bio

@redhood13: Your dialog is a little clunky and at times too modern. Having ancient Egyptian soldiers yell "Yeah!" doesn't really sell the ancient vibe to me, but I'd happily read some more

#5 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1636 posts) - - Show Bio

@cbishop: That's not bad actually, thanks

#6 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1636 posts) - - Show Bio

@the_impersonator: Thanks. Did Midnighter at midnight read better? Will you read part two at midnight just in case? :)

@batkevin74: Not asking you to join, glad you liked it though

@dngn4774: I was originally trying a left brain/right brain when he had thoughts but it works in a document but not here on the sight, but it has given me some ideas to try with the spoiler blocks etc. Thanks for reading.

#7 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1636 posts) - - Show Bio

@joygirl: ....wow! That was...well I am stunned, that was great! Excellent job, brilliant fight scene, just wow!

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#10 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1636 posts) - - Show Bio