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Ron Marz On How To Write A Strong Female Character

We caught up with comic writer Ron Marz to find out how he goes about writing strong, interesting and sexy women in comics

If you are a male writer in a male dominated industry (i.e. comics) writing female characters you often deal with some scrutiny from readers who question whether your portrayal of that female character is appropriate and whether or not it is "sexist."

The dictionary definition of "sexism" is A) an attitude or behavior based on traditional stereotypes and sexual roles and B) discrimination or devaluation based on a person's sex. And while the definition may seem pretty simple, it's still incredibly broad. When we apply it to the characterization of female characters in comics we are left with a lot of room to speculate whether or not the way a character is being portrayed is in fact "sexist." It's no wonder, either, since for most of the time comic books have existed they have been a little bit, well, sexist. Instead of delving into whether or not this is true (there are plenty of articles online you can read that would reinforce this idea) it's best to step back and ask ourselves what it is that makes writing female characters so difficult for some writers, and how is it different from writing a male character.

Marc Silvestri's WITCHBLADE
Marc Silvestri's WITCHBLADE

When a creator takes the reigns of a female character driven title the last thing they want to be perceived as is sexist. They don't want to write a character who is shallow, who is confined to traditional gender stereotypes and whose sole existence is to be "eye candy." But it wasn't always this way.

Much of the comics from the 90's saw success because they catered to this very overly-sexualized image of female characters. In fact, the popular art style of the time really reinforced the over-sexualization of women in comic books. Artists like Michael Turner, Marc Silvestri, David Finch and Jim Lee all tended to draw women in very provocative ways. But it wasn't just the art that reinforced this idea; a lot of the writing implied that women often existed solely to push the plot; that they didn't have any real value to the story.

Take for example, Witchblade in the 90's written and drawn by Marc Silvestri; the books were aesthetically pleasing, but the stories did not do a very good job portraying Sara Pezzini as this very tough as nails, strong female character. In fact, before writer Ron Marz came on board, Sara spent a lot of time having her clothes ripped off in practically every issue.

Some would say Ron Marz revolutionized Sara Pezzini and breathed new life into her character during his run of WITCHBLADE which lasted for 70 issues. You can practically see the evolution of her character based on the covers to WITCHBLADE -- she may have started in a metal bikini, but by the end of Ron's run Sara would suit up in full armor. And when she wasn't decked out in metal, she was in a crew neck t-shirt, jeans sporting her police badge. It wasn't just the imagery that Marz changed, it was the character herself. Sara matured under Ron's pen, coming into her own. She became a Mother and a considerably more self aware cop, too. She was interesting, and very different from her original incarnation. Under Ron, Sara Pezzini was given a chance to evolve. And she did.

We decided to ask Ron how he goes about writing a solid female character and what qualities and characteristics the character would need to have. Check out his response, below.

"I honestly don't approach writing female characters any differently than I approach writing male characters. I try to write individuals, and I try to write them so they're as three-dimensional as possible. Obviously someone's sex is one of the traits that factor into it, but it's certainly not the only one. A believable character needs to have both positive and negative aspects to their personality, so I try to build that into anyone I write."

"If there's one constant in the way I approach writing women, it's probably that I try to write them as more emotionally mature than men. I just feel like that's pretty often the case in real life. For me, a 'strong' character has nothing to do with physical strength, it's about the strength of their will, their resolve. I watched my wife give birth to all three of our kids, completely natural childbirth with no drugs, no pain meds, nothing except her strength and determination. You can't come away from witnessing something like that without a better understanding of how strong a woman can be. That warrior mentality I saw in my wife is definitely something I draw upon."

"But I should add that you have to balance that strength with some vulnerability, or the character doesn't come across as believable. Someone can be an ass-kicking hero and still be vulnerable or even needy at times. The important thing, I think, is making sure your heroine isn't defined by or seen as secondary to the men in her life. That 'damsel in distress' stuff is bullshit. One of the reasons I have a problem with 'Twilight' is that Bella's character is defined by sparkly vampire boy. Her primary character arc is to get a boyfriend. Lame."

I can't speak for everyone, but I have to admit I agree with Ron about the overall goals the character should have. If all she is doing is chasing after some sparkly vampire, I can't say that makes her very appealing.

She should be more than just a girl who is on this quest for a boyfriend. The fact that she wants to be in a relationship shouldn't define her.

Often female character are portrayed as being very sexy. The issue is ensuring that the character maintains her sexuality and her sexiness without being exploited and oversexualized. That is often a big challenge for writers.

For Ron, you can have a sexy woman. You can have a strong woman who happens to work in the sex industry (i.e. Voodoo) but if that's the only quality that defines her, then it becomes a problem.

"Everyone has their own definition of sexy. I think that's one of the reasons it's always such a hot-button topic. One person's sexy is another person's slutty. For me, it comes down to making sense in the story. In Witchblade, it never made sense to me that Sara was running around in, essentially, a metal bikini. So the first thing we did was get rid of that within the story and put her armor. We've still done some sexy scenes, when Sara's been with her boyfriend, or with Jackie Estacado, but it's story-driven. It's a question of who you're serving -- the characters and the story, or the segment of the audience that's apparently too shy to go buy a copy of Playboy. I honestly have no interest in catering to that audience."

"The reaction to the first issue of Voodoo was fascinating to me, because they were people who simply could not accept an issue set in a strip club, and there were people who looked beyond that to see why it was part of the story. I saw the issue was called sexist and misogynist, and I saw it called subversive and smart. Again, everybody has their own definition of what's sexy and what's exploitation. My line is different is different than your line."

"I thought it was interesting that the people who were riled up about the issue were invariably upset about the strip club, and not the murder at the end of the issue. That was hardly even mentioned. Ultimately, as a writer I'm more concerned with what characters are doing, with what they're thinking and feeling, rather than what they are or aren't wearing. If you told a story about Mata Hari, sex would be part of it, but that wouldn't make her any less of a strong woman. Just the opposite, in fact."

Clearly, Marz not only has experience writing strong, sexy women for comic books; but he's done so successfully. And while he is off of VOODOO, we are definitely looking forward to seeing what he has up his sleeve for the future. What do you think of Ron Marz's perspective? Do you agree with his thoughts on how to write a strong female character successfully?

Be sure to come back next week as we will be posing the same question to writer Greg Rucka (BATWOMAN, WONDER WOMAN) to get his take on how he goes about writing strong women in comics.

RainEffecton Dec. 1, 2011 at 4:58 p.m.
Thanks for the article, Babs!
 
This was incredibly helpful to me, considering I'm an aspiring writer and the protagonist of my trilogy is female. It is ridiculously difficult to try and find a medium between fiercely independent and emotionally vulnerable.
fishyboyon Dec. 1, 2011 at 5:02 p.m.

Haha, what? Ron Marz writes strong female characters?

I thought Ron Marz wrote hypersexualized half-naked wank fodder for 15 year old boys.

Seriously.

The_Deadly_Koion Dec. 1, 2011 at 5:06 p.m.

Great article, very interesting!!! I must say its get very annoying sometimes when you just want a good story and not some chick who cant pull a thought from her own head or keep her clothes on hahaha

Nasar7on Dec. 1, 2011 at 5:15 p.m.

Voodoo is so good please Ron come back!

jsphsmth is online on Dec. 1, 2011 at 5:24 p.m.

He has come a far way from the women in fridge days. I will miss his work on Voodoo.

Can't wait to hear Rucka's take.

MrDirector786on Dec. 1, 2011 at 5:35 p.m.

Nice article. I agree with what Ron thinks.

Mayo88mon Dec. 1, 2011 at 5:43 p.m.

"One of the reasons I have a problem with 'Twilight' is that Bella's character is defined by sparkly vampire boy. Her primary character arc is to get a boyfriend. Lame."

That made me laugh so hard. Ha, epic line if I've ever heard one. Great article though, but not sure you can really use Witchblade as an icon for a strong female. I haven't ever really read the comic (I'll be honest), but everything I've seen from or about it has been pretty much sexual in nature. Could be that she's actually not, but from what I've seen it doesn't look too good.

jsphsmth is online on Dec. 1, 2011 at 5:43 p.m.

@fishyboy: Which begs the question: have you actually read any of his work?

Mercy_on Dec. 1, 2011 at 5:48 p.m.

Excellent article, Sara. Love seeing insight like this.

KisserNeon Dec. 1, 2011 at 5:49 p.m.

Love the article!

Personally, as a female who doesn't mind, isn't offended and at most times enjoys the sexy image of female characters, I love what Ron Marz said. I don't think I have ever really seen or read any of his work, but I agree with him! A character (male or female) should be considered what they are by the components that makes their personality, thoughts and what makes them more relatable to an audience or the story line in general. They shouldn't be judged on their appearance, much like a normal person shouldn't but because of differentiating opinions... there will never be a character that someone doesn't have SOMETHING to say about.

Of course, in the most honest and blunt way to put things... I probably would not be as much as a fan of OR even believe that Batman is as amazing as he is if he looked like a wuss and had no muscular definition to his body. Even with his intelligence and the technology he has. 'Nuff said. :)

fodiggon Dec. 1, 2011 at 5:50 p.m.

Great article. Witchblade was always a character I outright avoided—for years—because I dismissed it as a T&A book based on the art. When I actually sat down one day and read through the trades, however, I was impressed. It's the book that convinced me that "cheesecake" in comics was neither necessarily good nor bad, but rather that it was a stylistic choice. Furthermore, that it was narrative context (and consistent treatment between both sexes) that made a book "sexist" or not.

Alch21on Dec. 1, 2011 at 5:54 p.m.

@fishyboy: Way to make yourself look smart bro.

SCon Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:07 p.m.
I don't disagree with Ron, I just find it really really weird that much of what he says isn't immediately obvious to everyone, at least as some default perspective available. Instead of praising writers for stating the obvious we should track down stupid and dumb people and mock them and their ignorant hypocrisy =p
danhimselfon Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:37 p.m.

his Witchblade is amazing and I loved his work on Voodoo so here's hoping that he comes back to the title soon

fishyboyon Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:55 p.m.

@jsphsmth said:

@fishyboy: Which begs the question: have you actually read any of his work?

Yes, of course I've read his work. How could I give a fair comment if I hadn't? I read his Green Lantern in the 90s, some of his Superman stuff, and I even gave some of his more recent masturbatory material a fair chance before laughing it off as "stuff to make teenagers horny." Christ, I even bought Voodoo #1 to give it a fair shake and that troll even signed it for me.

So yeah, I've read his stuff and I find it hilarious that he's mentioned in the same article with Greg Rucka, someone who actually DOES know a thing or two about writing a strong female character.

ARMIV2on Dec. 1, 2011 at 7:07 p.m.

I'm really liking this article. It hits the nail on the head so many times.

Comic book creators really ought to look to this when designing female characters. Really.

FoxxFireArton Dec. 1, 2011 at 7:09 p.m.

Great editorial here, Sara!!

I don't see a problem with a female character having a strong sense of her own sexuality, but she needs to be the one who owns it. Not someone who worries about being single There is the idea that a guy sleeps with a lot of women and he's a stud, but the very same act makes a woman a slut. That's the height of hypocrisy. Look at how Wolverine sleeps around all the time with different women.If a female character was to do the exact same thing, what would people say?

Much in the same way Catwoman is sexy and sensual without being trashy. She cares about Batman, but that's far from what drives her.

Manga and anime often get boiled down to it's worst stereotypes -- much in the same way comic characters do. That's ignoring strong female characters such as Nico Robin (One Piece), Mikoto Kusanagi (GitS), Olivier Milla Armstrong (FMA), Yoruichi Shihoin (BLEACH), and Roberta (Black Lagoon).

I've been spending a lot of time editing the profiles pages over on Anime Vice of strong female characters to give them more of a spotlight. I even wrote a front page article for Anime Vice titled "The Strongest Women of Anime".

I also don't believe you should treat your female readers as sexless people. In much of my artwork. I wont draw just cheesecake shots. I'll also put in beefcake pictures, and I find that my female audience is very receptive to that and far more appreciative than my male audience is to the cheesecake. Don't just draw your women scantily clad. Also draw your men wearing little. If anything, I get quite the laugh out of seeing how uncomfortable some of my male audience gets over my beefcake pictures.

JonesDeinion Dec. 1, 2011 at 7:10 p.m.

Good article. I agree with what he has to say. Write a 3dimensional character first and foremost. Gender shouldn't be the chief cornerstone of their personality.

SCon Dec. 1, 2011 at 7:17 p.m.
Oh and never thought I would do this, but defending Twilight? Yeah, thats totally wish fulfillment style writing. Same way a lot of people buy Superman, Batman and Wolverine (not you *points at individual*) but a massive amount of fans, because Batman is smart and always wins, and usually gets a lot of hot girls, Superman always wins when it matters (if he loses he was holding back probably) and so main character arc can be simplified in Twilight but similarly with Batman and Wolverine, so you can expand it as well. Like Bella wasn't just trying to get a boyfriend. She got one who was essentially a Gary Stu and brought him down to her level before having another Gary Sue fight over her affection and... eventually she ends up immortal and super graceful much akin to Batgod prep status. So that character wasn't designed to be a good female character, but a projection from a female author that would resonate with thousands/millions of other people (aka be popular)  
 
So to savvy comic fans (or savvy any fans), who don't care about wish fulfillment with characters its easy to ignore such characters - but mixing them with characteristics that make them popular? After all the best characters are in books 90% of people on comic sites probably don't buy because they aren't from the big two (and thats okay)
kashif1on Dec. 1, 2011 at 7:22 p.m.

@Mayo88m said:

"One of the reasons I have a problem with 'Twilight' is that Bella's character is defined by sparkly vampire boy. Her primary character arc is to get a boyfriend. Lame."

That made me laugh so hard. Ha, epic line if I've ever heard one. Great article though, but not sure you can really use Witchblade as an icon for a strong female. I haven't ever really read the comic (I'll be honest), but everything I've seen from or about it has been pretty much sexual in nature. Could be that she's actually not, but from what I've seen it doesn't look too good.

From what I've seen the comic is definitely sexual but being sexual does not make it good or bad, its how her sexuality is handles.

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