The movie opens in darkness… A girl’s voice can be heard…
Voice: Why is the moon so lonely?
The darkness fades out revealing a small boy in his bed coughing
Boy: Why?
The girl has red long hair and is sitting by the boy’s bedspread. The shot moves to another boy, an older boy who stands by the doorway as if he has just entered the room
Other Boy: Yeah Rose why?
Rose: Cause she was in love…
The boys listen intently and the older boy sits by the other one on the bed.
Rose: Her love’s name was Kuekuatsheu, and they were spirits living in the world together. Every night, they walked in the sky together, but one of the other spirits was jealous. Trickster wanted the Moon only for himself. So he told Kuekuatsheu the
So every night, he would look at the sky and see the moon howl her name out but… they can never touch again!
Mr. Howlett: That’s some story Rose. (a man appears at the door and heads for the sick boy)
Hey there James, you feeling better?
James nods
Mr. Howlett: Hey there Victor (looking at the older boy in a serious tone)
Victor: Hi Mr. Howlett
Rose: He was just keeping us company!
On the door a maid enters in a hurry
Maid: Mr. Howlett!! Mr. Logan is here!!
Mr. Howlett: (at Victor) Your father is getting into some serious trouble boy!
In the background you can hear screaming “Howlett!”
Mr.Howlett: Take care of it boy!
Victor: It’s not my name he’s calling sir
Mr. Howlett heads out and then some gunshots are heard. James runs out and sees his father lying on the ground… Rose runs after him. James sees the man who shot his father and starts screaming out “he needs to hear the truth!”
<This is where the scene would go when the claws pop out and he goes and guts the man, after this he runs out scared at his mother’s reaction>
Rose runs out after James…
James: I’m a monster Rose get away from me!
Rose slowly closes in and the claws retract.
Rose: You are not a monster! (then she hugs him)
The scene changes and the scene subtitles: 6 YEARS LATER
<I say 6 years because I assume he was about 12 when this happened so now he’s either 18 or 19>
You can see James (Hugh Jackman) as a miner working. Rose walks from behind
Rose: Time for a break don’t you think? (then she kisses him)
Another man (who I would put as Smitty) calls out…
Smitty: ! No time for you to be lovin’ there’s work to be done!
Another man (Liev Schreiber) shows up and heads for …
Man: Yeah there’s work to be done.
Rose: Victor!
Victor: Hey there Red, (looks at Rose) so I guess you found your Ku Ku Ka Choo?
: Kuekuatsheu!
Victor: You’re correcting names? Huh Jimmy?
People starts to surround them
Victor: That’s right! (raises his voice) You take other people’s names! So what you’re now! You took my father’s name!
<A tight shot on ’s face>
Victor: But who am I to talk, he was your father too!
looks surprised…
Victor: That’s right! The night you killed our father, little brother, he was there to tell you the truth, and you killed him!
: Shut up!
The shot goes from his eyes to his fist showing his claws again. Rose lets go of his arm and backs away. Then Victor shows his “nails”.
< engages in a fight and well they fight>
During the fight Rose screams out various times: “Stop!” and “No!”. Rose tries to stop him but ends up impaled on 's claws and dies.
Victor: Serves you right!
in grief turns around and heads for the woods…
Victor head after him but doesn’t find him so he start’s screaming out!
Victor: I know you’re out there Jimmy! We’re brothers and we’re supposed to stick together! You will see me again! This isn’t the last time you hear me!
then is shown crouched down behind a tree and crying…
The scene changes again and the scene subtitles: 8 YEARS LATER
A wolf is shown running through the woods and not far behind is … He runs and runs and then a Victor smiling appears before him… Then wakes up screaming…
Kayla (Lynn Collins): (scared) What was it this time?
: I was in the woods and Victor… (sighs) you know what forget it it’s not important.
Kayla: The woods huh? I thought that after I found you in them the animal inside would be tamed, I guess the mind wanders. (she gets into bed with him)
: Kayla… (looks at her intently) did I ever tell you the story of why the moon is so lonely?
The shot leaves the cabin into the night…
<Remember the scene where the Weapon X team goes to to recover the Adamantium? Yeah well that same scene would go here, except for Wolverine being here. All the fights up to when they get it>
They finish the mission and they head for the inside of the jet…
Stryker: Sabertooth! Well done but we need some new blood in this team, Wade’s mouth is getting in he way!
Wade: What? I just like a good conversation… and what better conversation is there than listening to me talk?
Sabertooth pushes him inside
Sabertooth: I know just what you need sir! (a grin grows on his face)
<I think from there on the movie would be: Sabertooth “kills” Silverfox, and Sabertooth fight, fight all those wars….. Stryker meets and tell him he could get revenge, he undergoes the Weapon X thing and escapes like in the movie without the memory erase>
After he runs out and the huge fight goes on with Zero and the rest of the team, he gets captured and the memory erasing starts.
TO BE CONTINUED
(I got tired of writing so much that I’m gonna leave it here… I’ll finish it later)
What do you think?
