Just had to put it down.

Posted by Crimsonlord53 (1213 posts) - - Show Bio

With the phoenix making a return and hope's that jean well return with it I had to put down how I'd like to see the scene with jean the X-men end.

Utopia overlooking san fransisco jean grey has her back to the observers looking out across the bay.

Well you not change your mind jean the people on utopia could use you.

No ororo my mind's made up utopia is not where I belong at this time.

So you'll going logan and his school?

No no I won't be part of the jean grey school.

Then what well you do?

Commander rogers has offered me a postion that I find interesting.

So you'll be an avenger then.

No not an avenger at least not yet maybe not at all.

Ms monroe class well start in five minutes.

You should go.

It's good to have you back jean.

Good bye ororo.

You can come out now scott she's gone.

So your really leaving then.

Yes scott there's little for me on utopia.

Your people are here jean.

No scott your people are here an utopia for good or bad I still believe that there is a means to co exist with humanity.

Jean

No scott I know I've lost years lost friend lost a lot of things scott but I still have this. I believe it's worth fighting for. Good bye scott.

Jean. Scott can I see you in the command center. I'll be there in two betty.

Jean stands alone again overlooking the bay.

Emma there are thing that should be said between us so let me start. Is he happy?

Scott yes yes he is.

Hope and the cuckoos?

There fine.

Good good a thousand daughter's sniffed out in the blink of an eye you have every right to hate me emma but know this every day I have in this life time well be spent trying to make amends for every life lost to the actions of the dark phoenix. So should we sharping are nails and give the students a show they'll never forget?

Where is it the phoenix force?

Jean slowly fingers the diamond choker around her neck.

Close emma very close take my word it is contained.

Miss grey your transport is close.

Thank you Phoebe.

My transport is close emma shall we put are history behind us and move on?

For now jean for now.

Well that's how I'd like to see jean come back into the marvel U without the phoenix and away from both scott logan and the much hoped for cat fight between emma and jean.

So do you like it?

#1 Posted by Mr Marvel82 (110 posts) - - Show Bio

Some of this dialogue is great! I was completely on board, and even wanting to illustrate this. Until, Jean offers remorse for the events in Phoenix Warsong. I don't think Jean would do that. Bury the hatchet with Emma, sure. Check to see if she and Scott are happy, absolutely. Leave Utopia, definitely! But it appears that Marvel is once again separating Jean from the Phoenix Force. (Yep. I read Endsong. Jean: I am Phoenix. Phoenix is me. Always. But it seems like that's either being ignored now or played off as crazy Jean babble.) And being that Jean was not a part of the Phoenix mentioned in Warsong, I don't think she would repent for its actions. For that matter, I don't even know if Emma would bring that up/ hold that grudge, as most of the Cuckoos story has made Warsong an obsolete installation. (Wasn't Endsong originally meant to be a trilogy?? I feel like I read that somewhere.) Anyhow. Really nice writing!

#2 Edited by oviouslyjeangrey (400 posts) - - Show Bio

@Crimsonlord53:

OOOOO thats so so so good but i think its missing a little of this

Jean: Oh and emma

Emma: Yes jean

*PUNCHES EMMA*

Emma: WTF Bi*ch

*Emma lifts hand to strike back*

*Jean slowly fingers the diamond choker around her neck.*

Jean: I wouldn't try it goodbye Emma

Emma: goodbye......................................bi*tch

*Jean gives emma a dirty look with phoenix eyes*

Jean: Believe it

lol

#3 Posted by EnigmaDope (34 posts) - - Show Bio

@oviouslyjeangrey said:

@Crimsonlord53:

OOOOO thats so so so good but i think its missing a little of this

Jean: Oh and emma

Emma: Yes jean

*PUNCHES EMMA*

Emma: WTF Bi*ch

*Emma lifts hand to strike back*

*Jean slowly fingers the diamond choker around her neck.*

Jean: I wouldn't try it goodbye Emma

Emma: goodbye......................................bi*tch

*Jean gives emma a dirty look with phoenix eyes*

Jean: Believe it

lol

Best comic dialogue of the year? I think so.

#4 Posted by oviouslyjeangrey (400 posts) - - Show Bio

@EnigmaDope: Ty ty, I consider my self to somewhat of a writer with horrible grammar lol.

#5 Posted by Crimsonlord53 (1213 posts) - - Show Bio

@oviouslyjeangrey said:

@EnigmaDope: Ty ty, I consider my self to somewhat of a writer with horrible grammar lol.

I simply say I am the product of a public education.

#6 Posted by EnigmaDope (34 posts) - - Show Bio

@Crimsonlord53 said:

@oviouslyjeangrey said:

@EnigmaDope: Ty ty, I consider my self to somewhat of a writer with horrible grammar lol.

I simply say I am the product of a public education.

Aslong as the message is being passed across to the audience that Jean is a badass then it's fine, anyway as stated, we are a product of a public education.

#7 Posted by XsPectre28 (667 posts) - - Show Bio

i love it if only re had enough JG Fans To petition for her return!!!!!!!!!!!

#8 Posted by oviouslyjeangrey (400 posts) - - Show Bio

@XsPectre28: Maybe we can there is enough fans trust me

#9 Posted by Mr Marvel82 (110 posts) - - Show Bio

@Crimsonlord53 said:

Hi! So I actually started to do an animated storyboard project with this scene. But alas, my schedule hasn't allowed me the time to finish it. Here are a couple of frames from the project :)

Caption: Commander rogers has offered me a position that I find interesting.

Caption: Ms monroe class well start in five minutes.

#10 Posted by Madame_Mist (1325 posts) - - Show Bio

@Mr Marvel82 said:

@Crimsonlord53 said:

Hi! So I actually started to do an animated storyboard project with this scene. But alas, my schedule hasn't allowed me the time to finish it. Here are a couple of frames from the project :)

Caption: Commander rogers has offered me a position that I find interesting.

Caption: Ms monroe class well start in five minutes.

Beautiful artwork!

#11 Posted by oviouslyjeangrey (400 posts) - - Show Bio

@Mr Marvel82: Wow you can draw, really nice.

#12 Posted by Crimsonlord53 (1213 posts) - - Show Bio

@Mr Marvel82: Very cool and a little scary never inspired anybody before. Love to see when you finish.

#13 Posted by Mr Marvel82 (110 posts) - - Show Bio

@Madame_Mist said:

Beautiful artwork!

@oviouslyjeangrey said:

@Mr Marvel82: Wow you can draw, really nice.

Thank you!

@Crimsonlord53 said:

@Mr Marvel82: Very cool and a little scary never inspired anybody before. Love to see when you finish.

lol. No need to be alarmed. I do that with fan fiction and role plays sometimes. I'll keep you posted on how/if it progresses.

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