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#1 Edited by Alaric (115 posts) - - Show Bio

I'm pretty sure everyones noticed the pattern here but I just wanted to have a little fun with Hellion's reoccuring bad luck. lol  I made this after a looong hiatus away from my tablet so pardon my crappy skills. xD Anyways, the speach bubbles are empty because I wanted to see what dialogue ppl could come up with! So just come up with whatever you'd like and funniest dialogue gets added along with the rest of the text (credit given of course).


 It's not finished but this should be enough to give you all some ideas so join in and have fun? XD
#2 Posted by KumoriKunoichi (588 posts) - - Show Bio

Panel One: Hell yeah! Time to kick ass and take names! Nothing bad is going to happen to me, because I'm Julian Keller!
Panel Two: OH GOD! MILEY CYRUS! MY BIGGEST WEAKNESS! IT HURTS! IT HURTS
Panel Three: Bah! That was nothing. Nobody can defeat the great Hellion!
Panel Four: Oh come on, I just washed this! You got my shirt, my gloves, my spleen, wait..my SPLEEN!? I NEED THAT!
Panel Five: I tire of this! I'll finally show the world the power of the GREAT HELLION!
Panel Six: If I had a middle finger right now, I'd give it to you! Seriously, who does Marvel think I am, Krillin?
Panel Seven: I have this really bad itch on my left butt cheek. Can someone please scratch it for me? I keep bleeding all over my suit.

#3 Posted by KumoriKunoichi (588 posts) - - Show Bio

Here's a second possible one:
Panel One: Everybody loves me, I have women in by the storm and things are perfect! Yup, nothing wrong with my life!
*bam*
Panel Three: My best friend is dead, my girlfriend left me, I'm secretly in love with Wolverine's clone and my mentor went insane. Time I got my head out of my ass and fought the good fight without being so selfish.
*BAM*
Panel Five: Mom? Dad? WHY!!!!  THEY LEFT ME ALONE...TEENAGE ANNNNNGGGSSSTTTT.
*bam*
Panel Seven: LIFE SUCKS, WHY DOESN'T ANYBODY UNDERSTAND ME!?!

#4 Posted by ComicMan24 (147042 posts) - - Show Bio

Panel1: Come on! I can take you! You are not that big! 
Panel3: Are you afraid you are gonna break a nail? 
Panel5: I am not afraid of your little lasers! 
Panel7: Oh! Look what you did now!
#5 Posted by k2 (473 posts) - - Show Bio
@KumoriKunoichi said:
Panel Two: OH GOD! MILEY CYRUS! MY BIGGEST WEAKNESS! IT HURTS! IT HURTS 
 
LMAO
 
I'll post later, got  to ruminate on this a bit.
#6 Posted by Alaric (115 posts) - - Show Bio
@KumoriKunoichi said:
"Panel Six: If I had a middle finger right now, I'd give it to you! Seriously, who does Marvel think I am, Krillin?"
Awesome! XD 
 
@ComicMan24 said:
" Panel1: Come on! I can take you! You are not that big! Panel3: Are you afraid you are gonna break a nail? Panel5: I am not afraid of your little lasers! Panel7: Oh! Look what you did now! "
Niiice, reminds me of monty python. lmao
 
Btw, I noticed the upload kinda reduced the quality, I'll re upload it later. x3
#7 Posted by Gawdzilla (376 posts) - - Show Bio

I'm totally stealing this and starting a thread on CBR!

#8 Posted by Alaric (115 posts) - - Show Bio

Haha, have fun?

#9 Posted by Gawdzilla (376 posts) - - Show Bio
@Alaric: We're having a gay ol time over there! Thank you for your hard work!
#10 Posted by thebookbug5 (9 posts) - - Show Bio

Heh. You should devote a panel to Julian going WAAAAAH!
#11 Posted by Alaric (115 posts) - - Show Bio

Well this is the first of more to come but for the moment you'll just have to settle for sarcastic agony. xD

#12 Posted by Alaric (115 posts) - - Show Bio

Ok, Heres the final version! Having some trouble uploading it here but the direct link should work. Anyways feel free to edit it and add your own fun dialogue. 
 
For those that are interested heres my take on the comic! I uploaded it on my newly created dA. I'll be making more comics soon and uploading em there. :D

#13 Edited by k2 (473 posts) - - Show Bio

Panel 1: "Time to kick a** and chew bubblegum! AND I'M ALL OUT OF BUBBLEGUM!!!" 
Panel 3: "Right guys, I'm back. Tell me who to pwn!"
Panel 5: "A mere flesh wound! I got better! What are we fighting now...robots? OK, it's cool, I'll just--" 
Panel 7: "...I liked those gloves!"

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