The Pit: Rise of the White Cardinal

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Edited By Zeon Liafador

After Flight of the Cardinals

The Pit can no longer wait
The Pit can no longer wait

No matter who the victor of the battle was, there was only one reason for the family to be brought together to unleash their abilities upon one another upon the Grand Cardinal Isle. It was a sacred ceremonial event that lead up to a member of the Liafador family to face The Pit. But what was The Pit? Between the old folk tales of the Malaga people and the few documents that were held in the Liafador Library, not much was known about trail that is stated to give new life to whoever is strong enough to endure it. All that Zeon knew was that every time a Liafador entered the Pit, they came out stronger. It was what The Liafador Matriarch needed. Yes, she was a deadly warrior, but in a world were people can destroy an entire planet just by thinking it, she was going to need to become more powerful. Everything that had lead up to this moment, all her countless hours of combat training, sleepless nights of meditation and grueling mental exercises that she was put through since her birth would have meant absolutely nothing if she couldn’t master The Pit.

In the Pit, it matters not what name you carried
In the Pit, it matters not what name you carried

The Matriarch dawned the rags that she was to wear during this event and removed her arsenal of weapons. Because in The Pit, it matters not what name you carried. It matters not what where you came from. It mattered not the sacrifices you have made. It mattered not who you killed or saved. Nothing up to this point mattered, because in The Pit, you were no one, left utterly alone to fend for yourself, to survive or die. As she began to make her descend, her breath shaky with nervousness as the reality of what was about to happen to her began to settle in her mind. If she made it out, if she passed The Pit, she was not going to be the same woman she was coming in.

Thick musty smell of mold and mildew engulfed her senses as the soul piercing cold sent shivers down her spine. Before making her way completely in, her chestnut eyes glanced upward towards the soft golden glow of the sun that peeked through the top entrance of The Pit. It was going to be the last thing she would see until her return.

Time meant nothing in The Pit, seconds, minutes, hours, days... it was all mushed together. Sleep was also irrelevant, what was the point of it, if it meant you may not wake up? Creatures that inhabited The Pit were savage, survival was all they knew. A death match was around every corner, so sleep in this land, was a luxury, one she couldn't afford to have. It didn't help that the very air they breathed was tainted with ergot, a fungus that caused anyone to breath it in, to hallucinate. And just like the warnings of her Zia... "It will take your nightmares and make them your allies, it will take your friends; and make them your enemies.", that exactly what happened. Twisted hallucinations of those she loved were those who wanted to kill her and those she despised were the one's that wanted to save her. The fungal spores overwhelmed her mind, trying to rip apart her sanity.

It will take your nightmares and make them your allies, it will take your friends; and make them your enemies.
It will take your nightmares and make them your allies, it will take your friends; and make them your enemies.

The only thing to keep her sanity at peace and her mind focused were two objects she carried into the hellish pit. One was the Emerald necklace that Ziccarra gave to her when she first became Matriarch. It was to remind her who she was, and what she why she had decided to face the deadly trials in the first place. She was Zeon Liafador, leader of the White Cardinal's, Matriarch of the Liafador Family, the Italian warrior was here to become stronger, to be able to protect her family, to ensure their safety so the family could enjoy peace in their lives, even at the sacrifice of her own. The second item was a seashell necklace her sister, Chance, gave her upon their meeting. It was to remind her why she needed to do more than just survive The Pit, but to keep her sanity. She needed to get out of this alive and well so she could be there for her younger sister if she ever needed her, to show compassion when needed and to be able to hold the love of a sister in her heart.

I was in the darkness, so darkness I became.
I was in the darkness, so darkness I became.

But doing so wasn't easy. With so many things trying to take your life, your mind and your very soul, you had no allies... except... the darkness. The darkness that shrouded her essence from blood thirsty beasts. The darkness that kept her company when her hallucinations were not around. The darkness that whispered promises of power and protection outside of The Pit, if she would only let it in. So darkness she became.

NOW

Arise from The Pit and claim your right
Arise from The Pit and claim your right

Her blood and mud stained hands clenched along the walls of The Pit, her fractured fingernails digging into the stone as every muscle fiber was working to pull The Matriarch from The Pit. The light of the sun was becoming brighter and more dominate over the darkness she had become so familiar with. It was unclear to Zeon how long she was in The Pit for, what events had passed and what events were to come. But one thing she knew for sure, she had gotten what she came from. With a final push of her legs and a grunting pull of her arms her hand reached out of the hellhole and grasped onto the soft, lush grass. White Cardinals that were guarding The Pit, surrounded the area as they watched their Matriarch arise.

Taking a stand before them showed just superficially what she had to endure. Her rags she wore into The Pit were gone, nothing but her naked body that was covered in dirty abrasions, infested talon like lacerations and gaping bite wounds with dry black blood that couldn't be told if it belonged to her or the creature that had attacked her. Her chestnut eyes naturally squinted at the sun as she rose her right hand to shade the brightness, her pupils having to adjust to seeing in the light once more as White Cardinals quickly placed a white robe over her bare body.

"Portami a casa , ho degli affari da sbrigare." <Take me home, I have business to attend to.>

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I'm going to read when I get some time

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@shanana said:

I'm going to read when I get some time

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I loved it. I like that you left what happened it in the pit sort of enigmatic. When I get some time I'm gping to respond

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Nailed it. Love the gifs too. Brought it home for me visually.

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The Matriarch dawned the rags that she was to wear during this event and removed her arsenal of weapons. Because in The Pit, it matters not what name you carried. It matters not what where you came from. It mattered not the sacrifices you have made. It mattered not who you killed or saved. Nothing up to this point mattered, because in The Pit, you were no one, left utterly alone to fend for yourself, to survive or die.

Till the day I leave the Vine, I'm always gonna say, Nova's writing is at its absolute best when she writes Zeon. I don't know what it is but its like she switches from level 100 to level 150 when she's on Zeon, LOL.

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Sees her crawl out....kicks her back in :)

Nice post

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#7  Edited By Zeon Liafador

@_dox_: Reaching updrags him down to hell with her... where there is no internet!

@maya_liafador Yay! Thanks :D

Not gonna lie, I was hella nervous writing this because there wasn't much information on The Pit >___> But I'm glad you approve! lol

@raysh_al_shaytanThanks G, actually drew some inspiration from your Pit post LOL so thank you xD

@fraga I can give you the answer lol It's because she's a Liafador. There is an expected level of writing (even if no one says it) while writing as someone's family member. You want to make sure you do the family justice and not disappoint the one in charge. Unlike my other accounts, I don't have responsibility to anyone but myself. But for Zeon, I have to up my game because I have people like you, Sha, Mercy, Val, FlashFire and Nox who all insprie me to step up with my game with this character. Plus you all are amazing writers and I would look horrible if I got slouchy with her :P But for reals if you read anyone's post who's involved in a family, you'll see it there too, everyone here is a great writer, but throw them in a family and their writing game steps up to 150 LOL

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It really was a good post

Hm...families you say? Raeyn has a family, maybe I should start a time siphon family ;).

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@timesiphon: Thank you :D

NO! >_> DON'T DO THAT! LOL one is enough xD

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#10  Edited By TheFlashFire

@zeon_liafador: Amazeballs!!!

I can give you the answer lol It's because she's a Liafador. There is an expected level of writing (even if no one says it) while writing as someone's family member. You want to make sure you do the family justice and not disappoint the one in charge. Unlike my other accounts, I don't have responsibility to anyone but myself. But for Zeon, I have to up my game because I have people like you, Sha, Mercy, Val, FlashFire and Nox who all insprie me to step up with my game with this character. Plus you all are amazing writers and I would look horrible if I got slouchy with her :P But for reals if you read anyone's post who's involved in a family, you'll see it there too, everyone here is a great writer, but throw them in a family and their writing game steps up to 150 LOL

This is all true for me.I get nervous even logging in on Ebonyzephyr or Leonard lmao

Though, I'm still learning as a writer lmao, I be on a pen and payper when im in the same rpg as bonafied pros like the above mentioned people.

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@zeon_liafador: This... is freaking awesome!

@zeon_liafador: Amazeballs!!!

I can give you the answer lol It's because she's a Liafador. There is an expected level of writing (even if no one says it) while writing as someone's family member. You want to make sure you do the family justice and not disappoint the one in charge. Unlike my other accounts, I don't have responsibility to anyone but myself. But for Zeon, I have to up my game because I have people like you, Sha, Mercy, Val, FlashFire and Nox who all insprie me to step up with my game with this character. Plus you all are amazing writers and I would look horrible if I got slouchy with her :P But for reals if you read anyone's post who's involved in a family, you'll see it there too, everyone here is a great writer, but throw them in a family and their writing game steps up to 150 LOL

This is all true for me.I get nervous even logging in on Ebonyzephyr or Leonard lmao

Though, I'm still learning as a writer lmao, I be on a pen and payper when im in the same rpg as bonafied pros like the above mentioned people.

Much truth here, lol. Around such awesome writers, I always make sure to get my A-Game on.

My apologies for a possible lack of modesty xD, but although I'd say I'm a pretty adequate writer myself, I'm always inspired by a lot of others to push even further. Be it Rafael, Gambler, Warsman, Shogun, and others.

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@_dox_: Reaching updrags him down to hell with her... where there is no internet!

The Pit has turned you into nothing more than a vicious monster..... O_O

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Nice.

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@the_hunter: Thanks Hunter :D

@theflashfire said:

This is all true for me.I get nervous even logging in on Ebonyzephyr or Leonard lmao

Though, I'm still learning as a writer lmao, I be on a pen and payper when im in the same rpg as bonafied pros like the above mentioned people.

LOL Glad I'm not the only one xD

I'm always learning and I've been here for seven years LMAO

@dreadpool10 said:

Much truth here, lol. Around such awesome writers, I always make sure to get my A-Game on.

My apologies for a possible lack of modesty xD, but although I'd say I'm a pretty adequate writer myself, I'm always inspired by a lot of others to push even further. Be it Rafael, Gambler, Warsman, Shogun, and others.

Na, everyone here is a good writer! but like you said, it inspires others to be on top of their game writing with legends lol Like... you stretch yourself just a little further to play on their level. I try to do that with Zeon lol

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@_dox_: Reaching updrags him down to hell with her... where there is no internet!

The Pit has turned you into nothing more than a vicious monster..... O_O

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@zeon_liafador: I don't know how I never saw this, but this is amazing work (and thank you for the shoutout! <3). I'm also in agreement with Espada - you are at your absolute best with Zeon. She's topped Homicide as my favorite character of yours.

@_glacier_:You're the BEST, thank you!

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@zeon_liafador: I don't know how I never saw this, but this is amazing work (and thank you for the shoutout! <3). I'm also in agreement with Espada - you are at your absolute best with Zeon. She's topped Homicide as my favorite character of yours.

Must have been during a time you were gone for a few days lol Also I hope this helped you with your question about The Pit... and tbh I wasn't sure how it worked either xD I just took a swing at it with a little help from old posts made by Sha and G

and thank you :) Zeon is one of my favorite characters to write right now

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#19  Edited By Nemesis_Liafador

@zeon_liafador: It helped so much lol. You get to decide everything now, though! That's why you're the Matriarch :D

You're welcome! It really really shows

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@nemesis_liafador: in that case.... I declare tomorrow to be Naked Thursday in the Palace! :P AND EVERY THURSDAY FROM HERE ON OUT!

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#21  Edited By Nemesis_Liafador

@zeon_liafador: You do know the palace is home to mostly your family, right, Zeon?

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She just wants to see maya naked lol

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@shanana said:

She just wants to see maya naked lol

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