The Broken Ones. OCC.

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#1 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Deities: Spiriual beings embodying the loftiest and basest principles of morality, ethics, and every aspect of mortal existence... or just some really powerful monsters?

The answer to that basic question, like so many others asked here on Comic Vine RPG forum, is up to you, and the answer you decide on will have a lot to do with how you use this information. There is no right answer beyond what's right for our campaign, our characters, and our story.

This information is to help us in creating a vibrant, realistic pantheon for a campaign, a set of deities that helps shape the course of events in adventures of epic scope, deities who inspire the characters in our stories to the greatest heights of heroism or the lowest depths of villainy.

Lets Make A Pantheon.

Tight Pantheon

A tight pantheon is the focus of a single religion. Practitoners of that religion may revere all the deities, a select number of them, or even just one, but whichever deity or deities they worship, they share certain body of myths, rituals, and ethics.

The Olypain, Pharaonic, and Asgardian pantheons are all examples of tight pantheons. The gods of the Olympain pantheon are united under the rulership and in many cases, the paternity of Zues, as the Asgardian gods are united under Odin.

Like the gods of a loose pantheon, the deities of a tight pantheon each have their own areas of control (Portfolio). Within their own pantheons, Ares and Odin are both war gods, and they have similar agendas. Aphrodite and Freya are responsible for all affairs of the heart, while Athena and Thoth oversee matters of learning and knowledge.

Many people, are devoted to the entire pantheon. As with a loose pantheon, a follower of the Olympian gods makes offerings to Demeter to ensure a good harvest, to Poseidon before traveling by boat, to Aphrodite when seeking assistance in romance, and Apollo for healing. The sacrifices each god expects are part of the the shared doctrine of the pantheon, and sometimes the gods even share temples.

Most tight pantheons have one or more abberrant gods, deities whose worship is not santioned by the people of the faith as a whole. These are usually evil deities and enemies of the pantheon such as the Titans, Set, and Loki.

These deities certainly have cults of their worship. These cults resemble a thing called a mystery cult. Their members strictly devoted to lip service in the temples of the pantheon.

Portfolios:

Every deity has certain aspects of existence over which it has dominion, power, and control. Collectively, these aspects represent the deity's portfolio. Deities are intimately concerned about and involved in their portfolios, and they are often strongest in power when acting within the bounds of their portolios.

One or more deities may share certain portfolio elements, but not all elements can or would be the same. For example Pan and Dionysus may both be gods of wanton revelry, however Pan mostly exects Fauns and the beasts of nature, where as Dionysus effects mankind, mostly women.

Character Sheet Example. ( This is my character, the one and only Rank 20.)

Name: Azorah

Titles: The Creator, The Destroyer, The High Queen, The High King, The Sun, The Moon.

Symbol: Half Sun, Half Moon.

Home Plane: Yifgaurd.

Alignment: Nutreul.

Portfolio: Life, Death, Love, Hate, Light, Darkness.

Worshipers: Served by all the followers of The Broken Ones.

Domains: Creation, Destruction.

Favored Weapon: The Mace of Azorah.

Rank: 20.

Bio:

Azorah is the Mother/Father of all the gods and goddessess of The Broken Ones. No one know how she came to be, except maybe she. She is a loving Mother to all her creations, however her wrath is something of utter dread.

Dogma:

Azorah is where all life as we know it came from, and where all life as we know it will return, after Azorah's followers meet their often untimely ends, their very essence is then returned to its place of orgin... Queen Azorah's heart.

Clergy and Temples:

Azorah has a shrine in every Temple of The Broken Ones faith, seeing as all her children revere her as their queen, and hold love for their Mother/Father in their hearts. Her Monks are among the most loyal, however they are a bit dry, and come off a little rude and smug to any of the lesser Monks. As far as what Azorah expects from her followers... Their love is all she craves, love for her, and respect for her children.

Each deity has a divine rank.

A deity’s divine rank determines how much power the entity has.

Rank 0: Creatures of this rank are sometimes called

quasi-deities or hero deities. Creatures that have a mortal and a deity as

parents also fall into this category. These entities cannot grant spells, but

are immortal and usually have one or more ability

scores that are far above the

norm for their species. They may have some worshipers. Ordinary mortals do not

have a divine rank of 0. They lack a divine rank altogether.

Rank 1–5: These entities, called demigods, are the weakest of

the deities. A demigod can grant spells and perform a few deeds that are beyond

mortal limits. A demigod has anywhere from a few hundred to a few thousand

devoted mortal worshipers and may receive veneration or respect from many more.

A demigod controls a small godly realm (usually on an Outer Plane) and has

minor control over a portfolio that includes one or more aspects of mortal

existence. A demigod might be very accomplished in a single skill or a group of

related skills, gain combat advantages in special circumstances, or be able to

bring about minor changes in reality itself related to the portfolio.

Rank 6–10: Called lesser deities, these entities grant spells

and can perform more powerful deeds than demigods can. Lesser deities have

anywhere from a few thousand to tens of thousands of worshipers and control

larger godly realms than demigods. They also have keener senses where their

portfolios are concerned.

Rank 11–15: These entities are called intermediate deities. They

have hundreds of thousands of mortal worshipers and control larger godly realms

than demigods or lesser deities.

Rank 16–20: Called greater deities, these entities may have

millions of mortal worshipers, and they command respect even among other

deities. The most powerful of greater deities rule over other deities just as

mortal sovereigns rule over commoners.

(None of us will be of this Rank... But they are out there.)

Rank 21+: These entities are beyond the ken of mortals and care

nothing for worshipers. They do not grant spells, do not answer prayers, and do

not respond to queries. If they are known at all, it is to a handful of

scholars on the Material Plane. They are called overdeities. In some

pantheistic systems, the consent of an overdeity is required to become a god.

(Post your thoughts here, and send me a PM if you are interested.)

#2 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

OOC... LOL. I am a sleepy girl.

#3 Posted by ladydeath (9447 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@Naamah_Obyzouth: bump...so you can post more.

#4 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@ladydeath: Post more what beautiful?

#5 Posted by ladydeath (9447 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@Naamah_Obyzouth: I dunno I tired. LOL!

#6 Posted by Sideslash (5513 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Nice. Interested...

#7 Posted by Vrakmul (23289 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Do my eyes deceive me? Do I see 3.Xe Dungeons and Dragons deities and demigods rules there?

#8 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Made for Online RPG'g... But no your eyes do not lie to you, I did use 3.0 to help me make this work.

#9 Posted by Vrakmul (23289 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@Naamah_Obyzouth said:

Made for Online RPG'g... But no your eyes do not lie to you, I did use 3.0 to help me make this work.

I see there's another person who appreciates 3E.

Stupid 4e ruined everything.

#10 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@Vrakmul: It was made by platform users, for story run RPG, and it failed... 3.0 is where it is at. 4.0 should only be used for video games.

#11 Edited by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Need more Gods & Goddess for our group here. Please contact me if you are interested.

I would like gods & goddess of all types here, not just war gods... I mean, think about the war gods for a second, Ares was not even that cool, and then their was his sister Athena who was also a warrior, but she was not a war god, she was a god of knowledge and inovation, and IMHO she was alot more interesting then her half brother.

You could make Jeff the god of biskets for all I care, as long as Jeff is interesting.

In the lap of Gods revisted, by Queen.

It's so easy but I can't do it

So risky but I gotta chance it

It's so funny there's nothing to laugh about

My money that's all you want to talk about

I can see what you want me to be

But I'm no fool

It's in the lap of the gods

Wo wo la la la

I can see what you want me to be

But I'm no fool

No beginning there's no ending

There's no meaning in my pretending

Believe me life goes on and on and on

Forgive me when I ask you where do I belong

You say I (you can do it) can't (you can do it

You can go and) set you free from me

But that's not true

It's in the lap of the gods

Wo wo la la la

I can see what you want me to be

But I'm no fool

It's in the lap of the gods

Wo wo la la la wo

Wo wo la la wo wo wooh

But that's not true

It's in the lap of the gods

Wo wo la la la wo

Wo wo la la wo wo wooh

But I'm no fool

It's in the lap of the gods

Wo wo la la la wo

Wo wo la la wo wo wooh

It's in the lap of the gods

Wo wo la la la wo

Wo wo la la wo wo wooh

But I'm no fool

It's in the lap of the gods

Wo wo la la la wo

Wo wo la la wo wo wooh

#12 Edited by Sideslash (5513 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Name: Orome

Titles: He Who Walks With the Beasts, Lover of Animals, Protector of Fauna, King of the Beasts, Son of Azorah

Homeplane: Yifgaurd

Symbol: Star (often on a pendant worn around the neck, like in the picture)

Alignment: Neutral

Portfolio: Love, Caring, Animals.

Domains: The Wilderness

Favoured weapon: Orome's Sword

Rank: 17

Bio: Orome is fiercely loyal to his mother/father, but his true calling is in the natural world, among animals, and protection of all creatures is his prime duty. He commands all living creatures, and is revered as the King of Animals.

Dogma: Orome is the protector of living creatures, and, to a lesser extent, the natural world they inhabit. His blade is said to sing with the mourning spirits of all animals wrongfully killed. When his followers meet their deaths, often in protection of that world and the beasts they so love, they are believed to be reincarnated as the beasts and live under the protection of the lord they served in their previous life.

Clergy and temples: The temples of Orome are known to very few, although they are incredibly numerous and grand in scale, hidden in the wilderness as they are. Always, there is a large shrine for his mother in these temples, to indicate his respect and deep love of her. His own monks are often like him, brave, loyal, and committed to beasts and the natural world. They are seen as "The Savage Men of Orome", but are well trained in combat, much like their god. They are also seen as dim and uninteresting, as they are not highly intelligent. Orome merely wishes his followers to be brave, loyal, and to uphold his principles.

#13 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@Sideslash: Very good. The only thing I noticed is under portfolio, Just use Love, Protection, and Animals. And under Domains Forsets, or The Wilds will do. Other than that its perfect. I smiled.

#14 Posted by shadowknight666 (20769 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@Naamah_Obyzouth: Do we post the character here?

#15 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@shadowknight666: Yes sir... You are Rank 15... And go!

#16 Posted by kiddevil (7283 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

I thought I was told not to make a character yet...

#17 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@kiddevil: Untill I posted this thread honey... You are Rank 14 and go! lol

#18 Posted by kiddevil (7283 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@Naamah_Obyzouth: Oh alright I'll create a character then.

#19 Posted by _Punk_ (3331 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio
@Naamah_Obyzouth: I'm interested in creating a deity.I might post one in a bit.
#20 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@_Punk_: Okay you are Rank 13 and Go!

#21 Edited by shadowknight666 (20769 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@Naamah_Obyzouth:

Name: Draide

Titles: Bringer of War. Bringer Of Death. Killer of All.

Symbol: A Skull.

Home Plane: Yifguard?

Alignment: Neutral

Portfolio: Exectutions, Conflicts, Fighting War, Weapons and Massacres

Worshipers: Those who are in conflicts, From full scale wars to simple fist fights pray to him.

Domains: Battlefields, Areas of conflicts.

Favored Weapons: The battle axe of Executions, The Broadsword of Pain.

Rank: 15

Bio:

Draide is the lord of War, His Worshippers need his help as he ultimately decides the fate of earth's conflicts, From the Large wars that rage on for hundred's of years, To drunken bar fights. His Duty requires constant attention as sometimes he may need to intervene. This would be a rare moment but it has happened before, And so he must Pay close attention.

Dogma: The people have only one need for Draide. That is his aid in conflicts, In Order to receive his help they must fight with whatever strength they have, Pray to him and make sacrifices.

Clergy and Temples: Draide's worshipper's are those in the business of fighting, They pray to him looking for aid in they're battles, They're temples are small shacks placed in the center of towns, They're they sacrifice they're enemies in hopes of good luck from the god.

Well i gave it a whack.

#22 Posted by _Punk_ (3331 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

 


 

Name:Talskalarix

Titles:The Teacher,The Mountain Monk,Thee' who learns.

Homeplane:Hothisis

Symbol:The Moon.Every time it changes a phase,supposedly,Talskalarix has accepted a new apprentice into his realm.Each new moon represents the apprentice's full enlightenment.

Alignment:Good/Greater Good

Portfolio:Teaching,Wisdom,Writing

Domains:Mountains that seem to reach to the sky/Library's

Favoured weapon:His bodily power(When he chooses to fight,which he rarely does)

Rank: 13

Bio:
Talskalarix ascended to the god-plane during the first end of days.He is the last of the dragons,and teaches his lost race's history to his followers.
 
Dogma: Talskalarix taught the ways of magic,religion,and knowledgeable practices such as writing and reading to the Earthly races.He is a protector of the arts,and a teacher to teachers.
 
Clergy and Temples: The temple of Talskalarix is almost a myth.During times of peace,the temple is known to appear on the peaks of mountains.Though,when a war strikes,it disappears.It has been seen in many different lands,though never at the same time.His followers are an ancient people.They,through direct meditation,follow the temple's movements.They are monks,but bear no labeled name or title of their cult.
#23 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@shadowknight666: It needs some small adjustments but it is a good start. Welcome god of war.

#24 Posted by _Punk_ (3331 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio
@Naamah_Obyzouth: Made one ^^^
#25 Posted by _Saint_ (104 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@Naamah_Obyzouth said:

@shadowknight666: It needs some small adjustments but it is a good start. Welcome god of war.

Thank you. What does it need exactly?

#26 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@_Punk_: Needs some work... You either need to be one of my children or be a Rank 0. Its up to you, and if you are one of my children you need to be from Yifgaurd.

#27 Posted by _Punk_ (3331 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio
@Naamah_Obyzouth: Rank 0 is fine,though "Hero God" isn't really a good title for him.
#28 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@_Saint_: Under Dogma all that needs be said is what your followers are expected to do, and what your temples are like. And you can get ride of the I am not sure's.

#29 Posted by shadowknight666 (20769 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@Naamah_Obyzouth said:

@_Saint_: Under Dogma all that needs be said is what your followers are expected to do, and what your temples are like. And you can get ride of the I am not sure's.

Got it I'll edit it.

#30 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@_Punk_: Well you have my attention, but you are a Rank 0, so I really don't care. lol. Just some all powerfull god humor.

#31 Posted by shadowknight666 (20769 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@Naamah_Obyzouth: Edited.

Is it right this time?

#32 Posted by _Punk_ (3331 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio
@Naamah_Obyzouth: Is the god even remotely interesting? :P
#33 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@shadowknight666: Yeppers. I have all that I need for the god of war.

#34 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@_Punk_: Well the weapon part is about your human followers, more so than you. It is a weapon or artifact that helps them for your glory, other than that... Yes you did well. Welcome.

#35 Posted by shadowknight666 (20769 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@Naamah_Obyzouth: Thank you. If you need anything or have any Updates PM Me.

#36 Posted by _Punk_ (3331 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio
@Naamah_Obyzouth: When I said "Bodily power" I meant his Dragconic abilities.
#37 Posted by kiddevil (7283 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

I hate coming up with names...

#38 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@_Punk_: You turn people into Dragons?

#39 Posted by _Saint_ (104 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@kiddevil said:

I hate coming up with names...

Same here man.

#40 Edited by _Punk_ (3331 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio
@Naamah_Obyzouth: No,he is a dragon.I thought that was obvious...
EDIT:Oooops! Sorry,just got the memo.I'll come up with an artifact.
#41 Posted by _Punk_ (3331 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio
@Naamah_Obyzouth
Does the artifact have to be a weapon?
#42 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@_Punk_: Yes and No... Does it have to be a weapon, as in a sword or axe or mace... No. But it should be an item that helps the user to meet his or hers desired ends.

#43 Posted by _Punk_ (3331 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio
@Naamah_Obyzouth: So it's the kind of item they send heroes on quests for....hmmm.....
Swords don't seem like appropriate symbols for a god of knowledge,sooo...
 
Is a Scroll/Slash Magical Tome fine with you?
#44 Posted by kiddevil (7283 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Would the Hu Tou Gou (tiger-head-hook(ed) sword) be a decent weapon?

#45 Posted by Naamah_Obyzouth (3315 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@kiddevil: @_Punk_:

Yes to both.

#46 Posted by kiddevil (7283 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@Naamah_Obyzouth: Okay.

#47 Edited by _Punk_ (3331 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio
@Naamah_Obyzouth
Thanks.
 
 
The Scroll of Tales Untold it is.
#48 Posted by kiddevil (7283 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Um still working on mine. I decided to make a God of Air/wind (whatever) I have nearly everything down except I don't know what he could do!

#49 Posted by _Punk_ (3331 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio
@kiddevil: Gift humans with the ability to breath?
#50 Posted by kiddevil (7283 posts) - 1 year, 3 months ago - Show Bio

@_Punk_: *Face palm* Maybe I should have it be a weather god instead?

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