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#1 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

Something's been ripping through the southern U.S. What started as random incidents in Mississippi are beginning to form a pattern stretching all the way to Utah and back to the days before Columbus discovered the New World. Missing persons, mutilations, homicide and arson have popped up all across America with no clues that the police could find other than a direction: West. As the mysterious force of nature blazes a trail to old haunts Numberseven has been tracking the patterns. Meanwhile in Salt Lake City Park has been hired to steal an old Native American artifact from a museum.

This is an RPG between Park and NumberSeven

So yeah... comment if you feel so inclined. First time I've ever done this, feels a bit dramatic to be honest.

#2 Posted by TheDealer (1031 posts) - - Show Bio

Don' die. We might still got use for you.

#3 Posted by Thee_Champion (5693 posts) - - Show Bio

Good luck.

#4 Posted by Barbie (826 posts) - - Show Bio

Sounds like a cool idea. Good luck and have fun! :D

#5 Posted by Icarusflies (12505 posts) - - Show Bio

Good luck!

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#6 Posted by Doctor_Stahl (577 posts) - - Show Bio

Gets comfy in oversized lounge chair and watches intently. Good luck! ^_^

#7 Posted by Mercy_ (92857 posts) - - Show Bio

Awesome.

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#8 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

Thanks for the approval guys, RPG should be up tomorrow.

#9 Posted by VictorGrey (13466 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheDealer said:

Don' die. We might still got use for you.
#10 Posted by Barbie (826 posts) - - Show Bio

  

#11 Posted by FALLENprophet (6557 posts) - - Show Bio

Good luck

#12 Posted by NumberSeven (608 posts) - - Show Bio

Awesome! I´ll start on the RPG.

#13 Posted by VictorGrey (13466 posts) - - Show Bio

Good Luck you both! The whole Vine is watching! But no pressure!

#14 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

@NumberSeven: Do it up dude.

@VictorGrey: You always know just what to say.

#15 Posted by VictorGrey (13466 posts) - - Show Bio

@Park: Just trying to make things better :D

#16 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

@VictorGrey: And while Vic tries to be funny Park is dying somewhere in the north.

#17 Posted by VictorGrey (13466 posts) - - Show Bio

@Park: Sorry, can't help cause Vic doesn't technically know about it.

#18 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

@VictorGrey: And for a second I was worried I wouldn't even see the premiere.

#19 Posted by VictorGrey (13466 posts) - - Show Bio

@Park: (ROFL, I should'a left you dead to disappoint everyone :p)

#20 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

@VictorGrey: But then even you wouldn't have gotten to see what happened.

#21 Posted by VictorGrey (13466 posts) - - Show Bio

@Park: But It'd be funn- nevermind.

#22 Posted by NumberSeven (608 posts) - - Show Bio

The RPG is up. Ain't much, but something to start off.

#23 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

@NumberSeven: Alright, I'm about to check it out.

@VictorGrey: Thank you anyways.

#24 Posted by VictorGrey (13466 posts) - - Show Bio

@NumberSeven: Nice post, openers aren't supposed to be long, so you did just good.

#25 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

@NumberSeven: Nice post. My only question is in the new paragraph that starts off 'was the most comfortable place he'd been' was something left out there?

#26 Posted by NumberSeven (608 posts) - - Show Bio

@Park: No, it is supposed to explain it in the bio, but I'm working on that part now.

#27 Posted by NumberSeven (608 posts) - - Show Bio

@Park: I saw it now, lol thanks. I edited it, yeah I wasn't sure what you meant xD

#28 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

@NumberSeven: Ok, then flawless victory dude.

#29 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

Posted, gonna get some rest, feel free to correct or criticize.

#30 Posted by VictorGrey (13466 posts) - - Show Bio

@Park: Awesome post, how much hours sleep does Park get though? lol.

#31 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

@VictorGrey: About as many as me so somewhere between 4-10 a week.

#32 Posted by VictorGrey (13466 posts) - - Show Bio

@Park: A week?

#33 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

@VictorGrey: Yeah, its a long story that involves a disease I can't pronounce.

#34 Posted by VictorGrey (13466 posts) - - Show Bio

@Park: Oh, ok.

#35 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

Yeah, it semi-sucks semi-rocks.

#36 Posted by NumberSeven (608 posts) - - Show Bio

That post was great, I'm working on mine right now.

#37 Posted by NumberSeven (608 posts) - - Show Bio

Posted.

#38 Posted by VictorGrey (13466 posts) - - Show Bio

@NumberSeven: Nice post, I like the ongoing pace in this thread.

#39 Posted by NumberSeven (608 posts) - - Show Bio

@VictorGrey: Dumb question: What do you mean about 'Ongoing pace'?

<--- English is not my first language.

#40 Edited by VictorGrey (13466 posts) - - Show Bio

@NumberSeven: How the posts keep coming out, the story keeps on moving.

English isn't my first language either :p

#41 Posted by NumberSeven (608 posts) - - Show Bio

@VictorGrey: Oh thanks.

That's the worst thing when writing English stories, is that not finding the right word to describe something.

#42 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

Sorry about the delay, good post though, I've kinda got this family thing going on, I'll be back tomorrow though.

#43 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

Posted.

#44 Posted by NumberSeven (608 posts) - - Show Bio

@Park said:

Sorry about the delay, good post though, I've kinda got this family thing going on, I'll be back tomorrow though.

It's alright, great post btw. I´ll work on mine tomorrow.

#45 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

@NumberSeven: Thanks man, looking forward to it.

#46 Posted by NumberSeven (608 posts) - - Show Bio

@Park: Posted.

#47 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

@NumberSeven: Good post, we're getting our asses kicked lol. I'll post later tonight.

#48 Posted by NumberSeven (608 posts) - - Show Bio

@Park: I like it this way, seems more real than humiliating the NPC. Either way, it's more fun getting you're ass kicked than kick ass. xD

#49 Posted by Park (2976 posts) - - Show Bio

@NumberSeven: True that, I'll never understand no-selling.

#50 Posted by nonfiction91 (1704 posts) - - Show Bio

I wanna be rufus :P