#1 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio

Main parts of having a good post



1. Good And Clear Descriptions  of your actions and setting: when you go  to attack someone
Be specific by describing how strong the attack his  and what type of attack you did

Ex: Sephirim Attempted a left foot  Windmill kick aiming for john Henry's eyelid

make sure you state what your attacking with and what your aiming for, those are the to many parts of attacking your opponent, if you want to make it more fancy state how strong the attack was , so the other rpger would know how to take the attack (which could prevent less no selling. also state how you presented the attack, through a dash jump etc.

Now let me move on to Describing the settings, when your describe the setting , Describe  most of the thing in your surrounding to make the match interesting and the post longer. Describe the air  temperature,time of day, ground texture etc. this is one of the key elements to creating an excellent post..

Describing your setting should be the introduction to your post, you can use it later on in your post too, just dont recite the same thing over and over it will get repetitive.


2.  make your post oraganized

Ex:

If you are talking about the setting make a whole paragraph about settings, if you have a paragraph talking about Your characters thoughts then make a apragraph about that etc, basically donnot have alot of different subjects in one paragraph, the post will be short if you do that..

also bold the thoughts or statements your character make so the other rpger wont get confused


im only giving these two tips for now ill right more another time








#2 Posted by sha. (706 posts) - - Show Bio

is is going to get locked.



i try to do it like this

1. your character's thought before the attack

2. your character's respone to the attack
3. thought of the attack
4. and then attack
#3 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio

ok slyther where are you?

#4 Posted by slyther (70 posts) - - Show Bio

oh right thats a bit more clear now thanx

#5 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio
slyther said:
"oh right thats a bit more clear now thanx
"
n/p
#6 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio
sha. said:
"is is going to get locked.


i try to do it like this

1. your character's thought before the attack

2. your character's respone to the attack
3. thought of the attack
4. and then attack
"
is going to get locked?why?
#7 Posted by Acer (14412 posts) - - Show Bio
#8 Posted by slyther (70 posts) - - Show Bio

ok lets do a test spa

#9 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio

@acer this one is different people add more tips f

@slyther: k dude imma up a forum im not gonna go hard on you

#10 Posted by Arkaine (356 posts) - - Show Bio

Seph, reply to your battle with Bladeweaver and Hedatary. I want to get this over with already.

#11 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio
Arkaine said:
"Seph, reply to your battle with Bladeweaver and Hedatary. I want to get this over with already."
im done with that battle it looks like its gonna get stupid  cuz of that  Razor attack hed did...and i dont get his post to much
#12 Posted by slyther (70 posts) - - Show Bio

summons fire ball and throws at sephirins face

#13 Posted by Arkaine (356 posts) - - Show Bio

Who? Hedatary?

#14 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio
slyther said:
"summons fire ball and throws at sephirins face
"
i posted a thread for our battle so you can get a better understanding
#15 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio
Arkaine said:
"Who? Hedatary? "
yea
#16 Posted by Arkaine (356 posts) - - Show Bio

I understand, but you could have told me. I had three posts planned out.

#17 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio
Arkaine said:
"I understand, but you could have told me. I had three posts planned out."
if you want we could have our own battle?
#18 Posted by Arkaine (356 posts) - - Show Bio

We could do that, but I have to find out somethings about the fall of the HFC first.

#19 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio
Arkaine said:
"We could do that, but I have to find out somethings about the fall of the HFC first."
yea me too im interested in that....i think maybe gambler went to go help Vv
#20 Posted by Arkaine (356 posts) - - Show Bio

I have very ....different views about that.

#21 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio
Arkaine said:
"I have very ....different views about that."
why? he said before he was going to help them out
#22 Posted by Arkaine (356 posts) - - Show Bio

Talk is cheap. Even when the talk is coming from the mighty Gambler. Real Talk.

#23 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio
Arkaine said:
"Talk is cheap. Even when the talk is coming from the mighty Gambler. Real Talk."
tru that bro....this is your other account blady?
#24 Posted by Arkaine (356 posts) - - Show Bio

Yeah, I come on here when I want to relax, and scope things out.

#25 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio

oh thats cool main yo u should join a team or something, you got way way better since that car fight we had a few months back lolz

#26 Edited by Arkaine (356 posts) - - Show Bio

I'm not really into the team thing, even though I think I join Octagon Heroes yesturday.

#27 Posted by TheDrifter (26563 posts) - - Show Bio

Also,Type in third person.

For instance,

Do write: Drifter scoped the area, readying for attack as he drew his silver staff.

Don't Write: I scoped out the area readying my attack as I drew my silver staff.

#28 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio
Arkaine said:
"I'm not really into the team thing, even though I thing I join Octagon Heroes yesturday."
U did lolz  wow thats cool....its good to join teams your rep goes up , thats hwy i joined ice dragons lolz
#29 Posted by Arkaine (356 posts) - - Show Bio

I'm about to leave it. I don't know any of them, and I don't want to be there.

#30 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio
Arkaine said:
"I'm about to leave it. I don't know any of them, and I don't want to be there."
already? lolz you gonna join another team?
#31 Posted by lionel hunter (2509 posts) - - Show Bio

there already is a rpg training thread for everyone it should be pinned in the rpg section

#32 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio
lionel hunter said:
"there already is a rpg training thread for everyone it should be pinned in the rpg section
"
everyone gives tips info not just me
#33 Posted by lionel hunter (2509 posts) - - Show Bio

 there is a bunch of tips already in the rpg rules section

#34 Posted by Arkaine (356 posts) - - Show Bio

Not yet. Maybe once I get a couple more fights under my belt.

#35 Posted by Sephirim (4274 posts) - - Show Bio
lionel hunter said:
" there is a bunch of tips already in the rpg rules section
"
mmmhmmm..\


@blady: yea  fiht some people who will get you noticed cuz youre one those people i consider underrated...like me



so do that......if anything ill sponsor you to join ice dragons
#36 Posted by The Time Lord (277 posts) - - Show Bio

Keep low, duck and jab